Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

by abdbundeli on July 19, 2012, 02:27:29 PM

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abdbundeli

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Main shab-o-roj gungunaataa huun!
Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!!

Baarahaa baad-e-sabaa aatee hai:
Baarahaa uth, galey lagaataa huun!

Geet suntaa hun andleeboun key;
Aur fir, sur mein sur milaataa huun!

Beech shajaroun key jaa phunchtaa huun;
Sang pattoun key, tumhain gaataa huun!

Tum khilaatey ho roj gul taajey:
Main tumhaarey kiye chhupaataa huun!

Saanjh hotey hi tumhain neend aatee:
Baahuoun mein, 'abd', jhulaataa huun!

- abd bundeli


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Tanha(Saurabh)

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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2012, 02:30:38 PM »

bohat bohat khoob abd ji bohat khoob kaha aapne bohat umda... Applause


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2012, 03:20:47 PM »

Bahut khoob Abd bhai, maza aa gaya padh ke. Ek Rau meri taraf se.


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mkv

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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2012, 03:40:53 PM »

Bahut khoob ABD jee
5th sher ..bahut umda
kya baat hai..
Applause


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livingbytheday

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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #4 on: July 19, 2012, 04:46:48 PM »

waah, bahut khoob


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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2012, 12:42:59 AM »

bahut khoob


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soudagar

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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #6 on: July 20, 2012, 02:38:45 AM »

ABD sir bahut hi khubsurat aur umda qalaam....... Aapko dhero daad ke sath bahut bahut badhai bhi deta hoon.......aise hi likhte rahiye aur yoindia ko mehkate rahiye....


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abdbundeli

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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #7 on: July 20, 2012, 03:00:54 AM »

Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on July 19, 2012, 02:30:38 PM

bohat bohat khoob abd ji bohat khoob kaha aapne bohat umda... Applause

Shukriyah, 'Tanha' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #8 on: July 20, 2012, 03:02:12 AM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on July 19, 2012, 03:20:47 PM

Bahut khoob Abd bhai, maza aa gaya padh ke. Ek Rau meri taraf se.

Shukriyah, 'Ahmad' bhai! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2012, 03:03:04 AM »

Quote from: mkv on July 19, 2012, 03:40:53 PM

Bahut khoob ABD jee
5th sher ..bahut umda
kya baat hai..
Applause

Shukriyah, 'mkv' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #10 on: July 20, 2012, 03:04:21 AM »

Quote from: livingbytheday on July 19, 2012, 04:46:48 PM

waah, bahut khoob

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, janaab!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #11 on: July 20, 2012, 03:06:34 AM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on July 20, 2012, 12:42:59 AM

bahut khoob

Bahut-bahut shukriyah,Saini ji!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Unkey charchey unhain sunaataa huun!

«Reply #12 on: July 20, 2012, 03:07:29 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on July 20, 2012, 02:38:45 AM

ABD sir bahut hi khubsurat aur umda qalaam....... Aapko dhero daad ke sath bahut bahut badhai bhi deta hoon.......aise hi likhte rahiye aur yoindia ko mehkate rahiye....

Shukriyah, 'Saudagar' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!