UNKO PARVAA NAHEEN ..................MKV

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Unko parvaa naheen ab meree jaan kee
maine to jindgee unpe qurbaan kee

Haal kaisaa bhee  ho ab naheen puuchte
shakl ab dost kee lagtee anjaan kee

jaankar dil meraa ro diyaa jor se
lene aaye khabar apne saamaan kee

maiN maruN yaa jiyuN bekhabar ho gaye
koee keemat naheen ab meree  jaan kee

ban gaya ajnabee huN mai unke liye
ab shikayat karun kaise naadaan kee

haiN samjhte  muhabbat ko ihsaaN ;mukesh
dekh  fitrat to is jhoote mehmaan kee
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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2012, 10:14:23 AM »
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bahut hee dllfareb pesh kash dheron daad aur badhaai
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«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2012, 10:24:04 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mukesh ji...bahut sundar....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2012, 12:02:21 PM »
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Bahut khub bahut hi umda qalaam mukesh ji....... Dhero daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2012, 12:39:54 PM »
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Bahut khoob Mukesh Jee.
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2012, 01:04:27 PM »
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Bahut Khub Mukesh Ji Badiyaan Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2012, 04:28:04 PM »
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 Applause

 Bahut acha kalaam hai,Mukesh ji mubarakbad lijye.
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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2012, 05:17:36 PM »
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waahh wwaahh wwahhh
bohot khoob likha hai mukesh sir Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 31, 2012, 06:47:39 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 31, 2012, 09:50:42 AM
Unko parvaa naheen ab meree jaan kee
maine to jindgee unpe qurbaan kee

Haal kaisaa bhee  ho ab naheen puuchte
Dost kee ab shakl lagtee beimaan kee

jaankar dil meraa ro diyaa jor se
lene aaye khabar apne saamaan kee

maiN maruN yaa jiyuN bekhabar ho gaye
koee keemat naheen ab meree  jaan kee

ban gaya ajnabee huN mai unke liye
ab shikayat karun kaise naadaan kee

haiN samjhte  muhabbat ko ihsaan ik
dekh  fitrat to ‘Mukesh’  mehmaan kee


veriiiiiiii gudsssssssss
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«Reply #9 on: August 01, 2012, 01:51:37 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 31, 2012, 09:50:42 AM
Unko parvaa naheen ab meree jaan kee
maine to jindgee unpe qurbaan kee

Haal kaisaa bhee  ho ab naheen puuchte
Dost kee ab shakl lagtee beimaan kee

jaankar dil meraa ro diyaa jor se
lene aaye khabar apne saamaan kee

maiN maruN yaa jiyuN bekhabar ho gaye
koee keemat naheen ab meree  jaan kee

ban gaya ajnabee huN mai unke liye
ab shikayat karun kaise naadaan kee

haiN samjhte  muhabbat ko ihsaan ik
dekh  fitrat to ‘Mukesh’  mehmaan kee

bahot sundar Ghazal mkv--

magar ""jaan"" word aapne 2 baar use kia.
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«Reply #10 on: August 01, 2012, 02:13:01 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2012, 03:33:30 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 31, 2012, 10:14:23 AM
bahut hee dllfareb pesh kash dheron daad aur badhaai
Bahut Bahut shukriya Sir
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«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2012, 03:38:21 AM »
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maiN maruN yaa jiyuN bekhabar ho gaye
koee keemat naheen ab meree  jaan kee

ban gaya ajnabee huN mai unke liye
ab shikayat karun kaise naadaan kee

Gazal badiya. but dard her ek alfaz mein jalak raha hai. khush raho. nice creation  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: August 01, 2012, 03:39:24 AM »
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Bhaai bahoot khoob likhe hai aapney.
Dil ko bahoot achchee lageeN aapkee ye gazal.
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«Reply #14 on: August 01, 2012, 05:09:31 AM »
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Mukesh Jee bohut khoob,meri dili mubarakbaad qubool karen
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