UNKO PARVAA NAHEEN ..................MKV

by mkv on July 31, 2012, 09:50:42 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 01, 2012, 05:21:16 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 31, 2012, 09:50:42 AM
Unko parvaa naheen ab meree jaan kee
maine to jindgee unpe qurbaan kee

Haal kaisaa bhee  ho ab naheen puuchte
Dost kee ab shakl lagtee beimaan kee

jaankar dil meraa ro diyaa jor se
lene aaye khabar apne saamaan kee

maiN maruN yaa jiyuN bekhabar ho gaye
koee keemat naheen ab meree  jaan kee

ban gaya ajnabee huN mai unke liye
ab shikayat karun kaise naadaan kee

haiN samjhte  muhabbat ko ihsaan ik
dekh  fitrat to ‘Mukesh’  mehmaan kee

Bahut bahut khoob Mukesh ji Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: August 01, 2012, 07:18:46 AM »
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very good
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«Reply #17 on: August 01, 2012, 01:37:12 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 31, 2012, 10:24:04 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mukesh ji...bahut sundar....!!!
Shukriya hriday jee
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«Reply #18 on: August 01, 2012, 04:36:07 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on July 31, 2012, 12:02:21 PM
Bahut khub bahut hi umda qalaam mukesh ji....... Dhero daad aur mubarakbaad
Shukriya saudagar jee
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«Reply #19 on: August 02, 2012, 04:14:27 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on July 31, 2012, 12:39:54 PM
Bahut khoob Mukesh Jee.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thanks a lot iftakhar bhai
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«Reply #20 on: August 03, 2012, 05:56:52 PM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on July 31, 2012, 01:04:27 PM
Bahut Khub Mukesh Ji Badiyaan Applause Applause
thanks sanjeev jee
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«Reply #21 on: August 04, 2012, 02:28:02 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 31, 2012, 04:28:04 PM
Applause

 Bahut acha kalaam hai,Mukesh ji mubarakbad lijye.

bahut bahut shukriya Sir. ye sab aapki bahr vaali post ka kamaal hai.
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«Reply #22 on: August 04, 2012, 04:38:51 PM »
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Quote from: roy on July 31, 2012, 05:17:36 PM
waahh wwaahh wwahhh
bohot khoob likha hai mukesh sir Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanks a lot Roy bhai
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«Reply #23 on: August 04, 2012, 06:09:50 PM »
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beautiful.
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«Reply #24 on: August 04, 2012, 07:08:17 PM »
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bahut achhe mukesh ji
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«Reply #25 on: August 05, 2012, 03:16:30 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 31, 2012, 06:47:39 PM
veriiiiiiii gudsssssssss
thanks khamosh jee
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«Reply #26 on: August 05, 2012, 06:58:20 AM »
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Quote from: nirala on August 01, 2012, 01:51:37 AM
bahot sundar Ghazal mkv--

magar ""jaan"" word aapne 2 baar use kia.
thanks Nirala jee.
jee aisa kar sakte hain.
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«Reply #27 on: August 05, 2012, 09:37:09 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on August 01, 2012, 02:13:01 AM
bahut khoob
Bahut bahut shukriya aapka
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«Reply #28 on: August 05, 2012, 11:44:26 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on August 01, 2012, 03:38:21 AM
Gazal badiya. but dard her ek alfaz mein jalak raha hai. khush raho. nice creation  Thumbs UP
bahut bahut shukriya aapka.
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«Reply #29 on: August 05, 2012, 03:54:26 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on August 01, 2012, 03:39:24 AM
Bhaai bahoot khoob likhe hai aapney.
Dil ko bahoot achchee lageeN aapkee ye gazal.
Thanks masoom bhai
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