Urdu Se Pyar Karta Hai / उर्दू से प्यार करता है......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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हरेक लफ़्ज़ पे वो जाँनिसार करता है
अजीब शख्स है उर्दू से प्यार करता है

क़रीब आये कभी दिल में झाँक कर देखे
निगाहे नाज़ से अक्सर जो वार करता है

हमेशा चलते ही रहने की कैफ़ियत अच्छी
ठहर के वक़्त कहाँ इंतज़ार करता है

तआल्लुक़ात का मौसम अजीब मौसम है
कभी तो ख़ुश्क कभी ख़ुशगवार करता है

कहा था उसने ये दौराने-गुफ़्तगू इक दिन
जहे-नसीब है आँखें जो चार करता है

ग़मे-हयात के मंज़र हैं ज़ब्त दिल में बहुत
बयाँ वो करता है जब बेशुमार करता है

ख़मोश झील में फेंका है देखो फिर पत्थर
"वो कौन है जो मुझे बेक़रार करता है"

फ़रेब ही से छुरा पीठ में वो घोंप गया
वगरना, मर्द तो सीने पे वार करता है

अता हुयी है मुझे रहनुमाई उसकी 'रक़ीब'
क़दम-क़दम पे जो परवरदिगार करता है

--- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'


harek lafz pe wo jaaNnisaar karta hai
ajeeb shakhs hai urdu se pyaar karta hai

qareeb aaye kabhee dil meN jhaaNk kar dekhe
nigaahe naaz se aksar jo waar karta hai

hamesha chalte hi rahne kee kaifiyat achchhee
thahar ke waqt kahaaN intezaar karta hai

taalluqaat ka mausam ajeeb mausam hai
kabhee to khushk kabhee khushgawaar karta hai

kaha tha usne ye daurane - guftgoo ik din
jahe-naseeb hai aaNkheN jo chaar karta hai

game-hayaat ke manzar hain zabt dil meN bahut
bayaaN wo karta hai jab beshumaar karta hai

khamosh jheel meN feNka hai dekho fir patthar
"wo kaun hai jo mujhe beqraar karta hai"

fareb hee se chhura peeth meN wo ghoNp gaya
wagarna, ,mard to seene pe waar karta hai

ataa huyee hai mujhe rahnumaaee uskee 'Raqeeb'
qadam-qadam pe jo parwardigaar karta hai

--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2013, 11:38:11 PM »
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हरेक लफ़्ज़ पे वो जाँनिसार करता है
अजीब शख्स है उर्दू से प्यार करता है

क़रीब आये कभी दिल में झाँक कर देखे
निगाहे नाज़ से अक्सर जो वार करता है

हमेशा चलते ही रहने की कैफ़ियत अच्छी
ठहर के वक़्त कहाँ इंतज़ार करता है

तआल्लुक़ात का मौसम अजीब मौसम है
कभी तो ख़ुश्क कभी ख़ुशगवार करता है

कहा था उसने ये दौराने-गुफ़्तगू इक दिन
जहे-नसीब है आँखें जो चार करता है

ग़मे-हयात के मंज़र हैं ज़ब्त दिल में बहुत
बयाँ वो करता है जब बेशुमार करता है

ख़मोश झील में फेंका है देखो फिर पत्थर
"वो कौन है जो मुझे बेक़रार करता है"

फ़रेब ही से छुरा पीठ में वो घोंप गया
वगरना, मर्द तो सीने पे वार करता है

अता हुयी है मुझे रहनुमाई उसकी 'रक़ीब'
क़दम-क़दम पे जो परवरदिगार करता है

--- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'


harek lafz pe wo jaaNnisaar karta hai
ajeeb shakhs hai urdu se pyaar karta hai

qareeb aaye kabhee dil meN jhaaNk kar dekhe
nigaahe naaz se aksar jo waar karta hai

hamesha chalte hi rahne kee kaifiyat achchhee
thahar ke waqt kahaaN intezaar karta hai

taalluqaat ka mausam ajeeb mausam hai
kabhee to khushk kabhee khushgawaar karta hai

kaha tha usne ye daurane - guftgoo ik din
jahe-naseeb hai aaNkheN jo chaar karta hai

game-hayaat ke manzar hain zabt dil meN bahut
bayaaN wo karta hai jab beshumaar karta hai

khamosh jheel meN feNka hai dekho fir patthar
"wo kaun hai jo mujhe beqraar karta hai"

fareb hee se chhura peeth meN wo ghoNp gaya
wagarna, ,mard to seene pe waar karta hai

ataa huyee hai mujhe rahnumaaee uskee 'Raqeeb'
qadam-qadam pe jo parwardigaar karta hai

--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'



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«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2013, 12:27:21 AM »
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Bahatreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen.Really nice.
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«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2013, 12:46:58 AM »
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Greatttttttttttt!! lajawaab, shandaar ghazal kahi hai Satish jee, maza aa gaya padh ke, khaastaur pe ye she'r bahut hi pasand aaye. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN meri taraf se. YuN hi aate rahiye aur hameiN nawaaztey rahiye apne hunar se, Masha Allah.

harek lafz pe wo jaaNnisaar karta hai
ajeeb shakhs hai urdu se pyaar karta hai

hamesha chalte hi rahne kee kaifiyat achchhee
thahar ke waqt kahaaN intezaar karta hai

game-hayaat ke manzar hain zabt dil meN bahut
bayaaN wo karta hai jab beshumaar karta hai


fareb hee se chhura peeth meN wo ghoNp gaya
wagarna, ,mard to seene pe waar karta hai

ataa huyee hai mujhe rahnumaaee uskee 'Raqeeb'
qadam-qadam pe jo parwardigaar karta hai
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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2013, 01:03:40 AM »
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bahut bahut bahuuuuuuuut sunder satish......
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«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2013, 01:05:32 AM »
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hamesha chalte hi rahne kee kaifiyat
achchhee
thahar ke waqt kahaaN intezaar karta hai


wah kya kehne bahut khub sahab Applause

shad o aabaad rahiye

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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2013, 02:02:07 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
"ग़मे-हयात के मंज़र हैं ज़ब्त दिल में बहुत
 बयाँ वो करता है जब बेशुमार करता है "


बहुत खूब| पूरी ग़ज़ल बहुत अच्छी बन पड़ी है|
बधाई एवं शुभकामनायें|

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«Reply #8 on: March 24, 2013, 02:21:12 AM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!


Masha Allaah janab Masha Allaah kia kaheN bus lafz hi nahi tareef ke liye
itni khoobsurat aur shaand aar gazal kahi hai aapne ke humare toH zaheN meiN
aapke ashaaroN ke sivaa kuch sujh hi nahi raha hai... Usual Smile


Behad umdaa ashaar kahe haiN janab sar taa paaN aik umdaa gazal kahi hai
aapne.. behad khoob... kisi kisi ashaar ko khaas kahkar dusre ashaaroN ko
kam kahnaa behad naiNsaafi hoNgi... Usual Smile


humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN shirkat karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile


Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



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«Reply #9 on: March 24, 2013, 03:58:27 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2013, 01:11:05 PM »
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Jai sri krishna Satish sir
Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal pesh kee hai aapne.
har sher ..aala darje ka..
Par ye vaala..
Bahut bahut khoob laga mujhe.

ख़मोश झील में फेंका है देखो फिर पत्थर
"वो कौन है जो मुझे बेक़रार करता है"

Bahut bahut mubarak

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«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2013, 01:45:54 PM »
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waah waah marhabaa marhaba
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2013, 06:03:08 PM »
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marhoom bahayaat Sahab,

Khaksaar ki adna see koshish par nazre inayat aur hausala afzai ka tahe dil se shukriya.......Raqeeb Lucknowi
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Bahatreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen.Really nice.

Thanks very much...Raqeeb
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«Reply #14 on: March 24, 2013, 07:46:07 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Greatttttttttttt!! lajawaab, shandaar ghazal kahi hai Satish jee, maza aa gaya padh ke, khaastaur pe ye she'r bahut hi pasand aaye. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN meri taraf se. YuN hi aate rahiye aur hameiN nawaaztey rahiye apne hunar se, Masha Allah.

harek lafz pe wo jaaNnisaar karta hai
ajeeb shakhs hai urdu se pyaar karta hai

hamesha chalte hi rahne kee kaifiyat achchhee
thahar ke waqt kahaaN intezaar karta hai

game-hayaat ke manzar hain zabt dil meN bahut
bayaaN wo karta hai jab beshumaar karta hai


fareb hee se chhura peeth meN wo ghoNp gaya
wagarna, ,mard to seene pe waar karta hai

ataa huyee hai mujhe rahnumaaee uskee 'Raqeeb'
qadam-qadam pe jo parwardigaar karta hai


Bahut bahut shukriya...Raqeeb Lucknowi
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