Us doobti kishti ko paye na bacha hum

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on December 31, 2012, 05:16:06 PM
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Fitrat hai jafa teri, karte hain wafa hum
bahlao na yeh kahkar, na  hoonge juda hum

ajeeb kheyl hai qudrat ka, jub ho wo razi
ho jaatey hain jane kyon, us waqt khafa hum

kaun sa waqt ho, kub  koi bulane aaye
rakhte hain darwaza, her waqt khula hum

zulm mazloom per jab bhi kisi zalim ne kiya
kahte hain her ek daur ke zalim ko bura hum

burai kyon mere hisse me aagayi jabki
karte rahe duniya me, sab ka hi bhala hum

tamam umr ye ehsas satayega mujhe
us doobti kishti ko, paye na bacha hum

soorat ki tarah teri, seerat bhi nikhar jaye
sohbat me raho meri, kar denge jila hum

suhana tha yeh safar zeest ka, ab khatm hua
bhugteynge ab apney, gunahoon ki saza hum

               ..........S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: January 01, 2013, 04:35:48 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 01, 2013, 05:09:56 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on January 01, 2013, 04:35:48 AM
bahut khoob
many thanks......................
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«Reply #3 on: January 01, 2013, 05:42:10 AM »
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waaaaaah waaaaaaaaaah bahut bahut bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne dili mubarkbad qubool kare
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«Reply #4 on: January 01, 2013, 09:12:50 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 01, 2013, 09:15:11 AM »
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Mazhar Sahaab Aadaab!


Masha Allaah janab behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai behad gazab ke
ashaar aur umdaa gehrai rahi tamaam ashaaroN meiN... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarkbad kabul
kijiye....


Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: January 01, 2013, 05:26:39 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 01, 2013, 05:42:10 AM
waaaaaah waaaaaaaaaah bahut bahut bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne dili mubarkbad qubool kare
aqsh saheb, bahut bahut shukriya..........................
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«Reply #7 on: January 01, 2013, 05:28:08 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 01, 2013, 09:12:50 AM
bahut khoob
sksaini4 saheb, bahut bahut shukriya..................
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«Reply #8 on: January 01, 2013, 05:31:28 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 01, 2013, 09:15:11 AM
Mazhar Sahaab Aadaab!


Masha Allaah janab behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai behad gazab ke
ashaar aur umdaa gehrai rahi tamaam ashaaroN meiN... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarkbad kabul
kijiye....


Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
Parwaaz saheb,
kalaam itna achaa to nahi tha jitni mera dil rakhne aur hausla barhane ke liya aap ne tareef ki hay. Baharhaal aapka hukm zaroor manunga..............................
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«Reply #9 on: January 02, 2013, 02:12:10 AM »
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ahcha kalaam hai saahab, humari dili daad qubool farmaayeN is par aap...
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«Reply #10 on: January 02, 2013, 04:02:38 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on January 02, 2013, 02:12:10 AM
ahcha kalaam hai saahab, humari dili daad qubool farmaayeN is par aap...
Bahut Bahut shukriya Hriday saheb..............
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Quote from: Taish on January 02, 2013, 02:12:10 AM
ahcha kalaam hai saahab, humari dili daad qubool farmaayeN is par aap...
Quote from: Taish on January 02, 2013, 02:12:10 AM
ahcha kalaam hai saahab, humari dili daad qubool farmaayeN is par aap...
Taish saheb, aapka bahut bahut shukriya.......
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wah wah bahut bahut khoob Thumbs UP
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wah wah bahut bahut khoob Thumbs UP
suman59 ji,
 aapka bahut bahut shukriya................................
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