USOOL_E_DOSTEE.........................SAINI

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Aaye mile tapaak se par baat kee naheeN.
Kuchh bhee kaho magar ye koi dostee naheeN.

Meree khushee meN aapko jab kuchh khushee naheeN.
Dilchaspee aap meN bhee mujhe ab rahee naheeN.

 Haal-e-tabaahee meraa sabhee jaante yahaaN.
"Ye aur baat hai ki tujhe aagaahee naheeN."

Insaan maantaa naheeN maiN usko aaj bhee.
Nam aankh jiskee ghair ke gham meN hui naheeN.

Vo chhod kar chale gaye algaaw ka sharar.
Esee lagee vo aag jo ab tak bujhee naheeN.

Paanee,hawaa khudaa ne sabhee ko  ataa kiye.
Ye haq haiN bheekh inke liye maangnee naheeN.

Ustaad log milke agarche sanwaar deN.
Achhe sukhanwaroN kee yahaaN kuchh kamee naheeN.

Guzree hai umr aarzoo-e-vasl meN tamaam.
jab bhee kaha yahee kahaa thahro abhee naheeN.

Kuchh log de rahe haiN badhaawaa fasaad ko.
Iske siwaa unhe to koi kaam hee naheeN.

Isme zaroor chaal dikhaai raqeeb ne.
Unkee nigaah varnaa mujhe ghoortee naheeN

RishtoN meN zang lag gayaa 'saini' ye kaisaa aaj.
Ab to mahbbatoN meN kaheeN aag see naheeN

Dr. Surendra Saini

आये मिले तपाक से पर बात की नहीं ।
कुछ भी कहो मगर ये कोई दोस्ती  नहीं ॥   

मेरी ख़ुशी में आपको जब कुछ ख़ुशी नहीं ।
दिलचस्पी आप में भी मुझे अब रही नहीं ॥

हाल -ए -तबाही  मेरा सभी जानते यहॉं ।
"ये और बात है कि तुझे आगाही नहीं "॥

इन्सान मानता नहीं मैं उसको  आज भी । 
नम आँख जिसकी ग़ैर के ग़म में हुई नहीं ॥  

वो छोड़ कर चले गए अलगाव का शरर ।
एसी लगी वो आग जो अब तक बुझी नहीं ॥

पानी ,हवा ख़ुदा ने सभी को अता किये ।
ये हक़ हैं भीख इनके लिये मांगनी नहीँ ॥

उस्ताद लोग मिलके अगरचे संवार दें ।
अच्छे सुख़नवरों की यहां कुछ कमी नहीं ॥

गुज़री है उम्र आरज़ू-ए -वस्ल में तमाम ।
जब भी कहा यही कहा ठहरो अभी नहीं ॥

कुछ लोग दे रहे हैं बढ़ावा फ़साद को ।
इसके सिवा उन्हें तो कोई काम ही नहीं ॥

इसमें ज़रूर चाल दिखाई रक़ीब ने ।
उनकी निगाह वर्ना मुझे घूरती नहीं ॥

रिश्तों में ज़ंग लग गया 'सैनी' ये कैसा आज ।
अब वो महब्बतों में कहीँ आग सी नहीं  ॥
 
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2014, 02:03:35 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley waah aur wahh kmal ka likha hai sir
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2014, 03:05:39 PM »
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bohut umda waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2014, 04:43:06 PM »
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Bahut hee umdah likhaa hai, janaab. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2014, 05:08:35 PM »
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Bahut khoob Saini saheb
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wah waah bahut hi khooooooob EK RAU kubool karein
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2014, 05:54:30 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 01, 2014, 01:29:32 PM
Aaye mile tapaak se par baat kee naheeN.
Kuchh bhee kaho magar ye koi dostee naheeN.

Meree khushee meN aapko jab kuchh khushee naheeN.
Dilchaspee aap meN bhee mujhe ab rahee naheeN.

 Haal-e-tabaahee meraa sabhee jaante yahaaN.
"Ye aur baat hai ki tujhe aagaahee naheeN."

Insaan maantaa naheeN maiN usko aaj bhee.
Nam aankh jiskee ghair ke gham meN hui naheeN.

Vo chhod kar chale gaye algaaw ka sharar.
Esee lagee vo aag jo ab tak bujhee naheeN.

Paanee,hawaa khudaa ne sabhee ko  ataa kiye.
Ye haq haiN bheekh inke liye maangnee naheeN.

Ustaad log milke agarche sanwaar deN.
Achhe sukhanwaroN kee yahaaN kuchh kamee naheeN.

Guzree hai umr aarzoo-e-vasl meN tamaam.
jab bhee kaha yahee kahaa thahro abhee naheeN.

Kuchh log de rahe haiN badhaawaa fasaad ko.
Iske siwaa unhe to koi kaam hee naheeN.

Isme zaroor chaal dikhaai raqeeb ne.
Unkee nigaah varnaa mujhe ghoortee naheeN

RishtoN meN zang lag gayaa 'saini' ye kaisaa aaj.
Ab to mahbbatoN meN kaheeN aag see naheeN

Dr. Surendra Saini

आये मिले तपाक से पर बात की नहीं ।
कुछ भी कहो मगर ये कोई दोस्ती  नहीं ॥   

मेरी ख़ुशी में आपको जब कुछ ख़ुशी नहीं ।
दिलचस्पी आप में भी मुझे अब रही नहीं ॥

हाल -ए -तबाही  मेरा सभी जानते यहॉं ।
"ये और बात है कि तुझे आगाही नहीं "॥

इन्सान मानता नहीं मैं उसको  आज भी । 
नम आँख जिसकी ग़ैर के ग़म में हुई नहीं ॥ 

वो छोड़ कर चले गए अलगाव का शरर ।
एसी लगी वो आग जो अब तक बुझी नहीं ॥

पानी ,हवा ख़ुदा ने सभी को अता किये ।
ये हक़ हैं भीख इनके लिये मांगनी नहीँ ॥

उस्ताद लोग मिलके अगरचे संवार दें ।
अच्छे सुख़नवरों की यहां कुछ कमी नहीं ॥

गुज़री है उम्र आरज़ू-ए -वस्ल में तमाम ।
जब भी कहा यही कहा ठहरो अभी नहीं ॥

कुछ लोग दे रहे हैं बढ़ावा फ़साद को ।
इसके सिवा उन्हें तो कोई काम ही नहीं ॥

इसमें ज़रूर चाल दिखाई रक़ीब ने ।
उनकी निगाह वर्ना मुझे घूरती नहीं ॥

रिश्तों में ज़ंग लग गया 'सैनी' ये कैसा आज ।
अब वो महब्बतों में कहीँ आग सी नहीं  ॥
 
डा०सुरेन्द्र सैनी 


 

Bahut Khoobsurat Peshkash Kee Hai,
Rau for it,
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2014, 10:05:31 PM »
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Mahutram Saini sahib apki ghazal parhi ..mustafeed o mahezooz bhi hua ….Apke kalam ne poore alam ko apne hisaar me le rakha hai …..Zindabad …Apki ghazal me jahan jadeediyat maujood hai wahin riwayat ki paasdaari bhi …….Qafawi to maano jaise apne  khubsurat mooti jadd diye hun …kya karagari hai …Salam Qubool Karen..

Do ek baaten jo maine mahesoos ki likh raha hun zaroori nahi ke aap muttafiq hon …magar jo usool hain wo likh raha hun ..

 Haal-e-tabaahee meraa sabhee jaante yahaaN.
"Ye aur baat hai ki tujhe aagaahee naheeN."

izafat ke saat “Lafz-e-Tabahee” koi tarkeeb nahi ….Koi zubaan nahi ….Awal to apko asateza ke yahan aisi tarkeeb nahi milegi ..chunke izafat ke yun likha jayega “Haal-e-Tabah” , aur Misre ko parhke ye saaf zahir ho raha hai ke daurane taqleeq shair ka zahn kahin aur tha warna tu lafze “HAIN” ke taraf bhi zahn daudata aur usko hayat-e-javedan baksh deta .. Kahne ka matlab ye hai ke Darje bala sher ke misra-e-oola me lafz Hain ka mahal zaoori hai “ misra yun bhi kaha jaa sakta tha.

“ Haal-e-Tabah Mera yahan jaante hain sub”

Imla me kahin koi ghalati sarzad hui ho to darguzar kar den …ik baar phir dad hazir hai apki is shahkaar ghazal ke huzoor aur ek rau bhi …chunke aise funkar ko rau na dena zulm hai ….aur insaan per insaan ko zulm haram hai ….Allah khoob nawaze..


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bahut khoob  saini ji, bahut bahut badhai
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Bahut badhiya Sir

इन्सान मानता नहीं मैं उसको  आज भी । 
नम आँख जिसकी ग़ैर के ग़म में हुई नहीं ॥  ..bahut umdah
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shukriya hasan bhai saheb
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Saini Sir ...Badiya likha hai.

I specially visit your page whenever I come on the forum.

Keep writing!
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