VO SHAKHS ACHHA HAI..........SARU......103

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   मिजाज़-ए-मौसम कुछ पल में बदल जाता  है
   फूल  खिलता  है  महकता है  बिखर  जाता है
  
   मंज़िल यक़ीनन  पाएगा वो शख़्स  अच्छा है
   अच्छा ये  है कि  गिरता  है  संभल  जाता है

   आँधियाँ गुज़री कभी तूफ़ां  से  मुक़ाबिल था
   पेड़  इसलिये  खड़ा  है  के  लचक  जाता है

   पीते  बहुत  हैं  लोग  छिपाते  भी  बहुत  हैं
   मगर  आँखों   का  पानी है  छलक जाता है

   है  अमानत  खुदा   की  खुदाई  तेरी   नहीं
   यूँ जिंदगी का  धागा  और  उलझ  जाता है

   दर्द  पाता   है  चैन  खोता  है  इंसां  यूँ  कि
   नादां है  बहुत कुछ  खुद को समझ जाता है

   तू  कहाँ के लिये गठरिया  बाँध  बैठी 'सरु'
   कब ये ज़मीं  चली है कहाँ फलक जाता है




Mizaj-e-mausam kuch pal meiN badal jata hai
Phool khilta hai mehakta hai bikhar jata hai

Manjil  yakeenan payega vo shakhs achha hai
Acha ye hai ki  girta hai sambhal jata  hai

AndhiyaN gujri  kabhi toofaN se muqabil tha
Peid  isliye  khada  hai ke lachak jata hai

Peete bahut haiN log chhpate bhi bahut haiN
Magar aankhon ka paani hai chhalak  jata hai

Hai  amanat  khuda  ki  khudai   teri  nahiN
Yun  jindagi  ka  dhaga  aur  ulajh jata hai

Dard  pata  hai chein khota hai InsaaN yun ki
NadaaN hai bahut kuch khud ko samajh jata hai

Tu kahaN ke liye gathariya baandh baithi ‘saru’
Kab ye  zameeN chali  hai kahan falak jata hai



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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2014, 11:28:02 PM »
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   मिज़ाज़(MIZAJ)-ए-मौसम कुछ पल में बदल जाता  है
   फूल  खिलता  है  महकता है  बिखर  जाता है
  
   मंज़िल यक़ीनन  पाएगा वो शख़्स  अच्छा है
   अच्छा ये  है कि  गिरता  है  संभल  जाता है

   आँधियाँ गुज़री कभी तूफ़ां  से  मुक़ाबिल था
   पेड़  इसलिये  खड़ा  है  के  लचक  जाता है

   पीते  बहुत  हैं  लोग  छिपाते  भी  बहुत  हैं
   मगर  आँखों   का  पानी है  छलक जाता है

   है  अमानत  खुदा   की  खुदाई  तेरी   नहीं
   यूँ जिंदगी का  धागा  और  उलझ  जाता है

   दर्द  पाता   है  चैन  खोता  है  इंसां  यूँ  कि
   नादां है  बहुत कुछ  खुद को समझ जाता है

   तू  कहाँ के लिये गठरिया  बाँध  बैठी 'सरु'
   कब ये ज़मीं  चली है कहाँ फलक जाता है




Mizaj-e-mausam kuch pal meiN badal jata hai
Phool khilta hai mehakta hai bikhar jata hai

Manjil  yakeenan payega vo shakhs achha hai
Acha ye hai ki  girta hai sambhal jata  hai

AndhiyaN gujri  kabhi toofaN se muqabil tha
Peid  isliye  khada  hai ke lachak jata hai

Peete bahut haiN log chhpate bhi bahut haiN
Magar aankhon ka paani hai chhalak  jata hai

Hai  amanat  khuda  ki  khudai   teri  nahiN
Yun  jindagi  ka  dhaga  aur  ulajh jata hai

Dard  pata  hai chein khota hai InsaaN yun ki
NadaaN hai bahut kuch khud ko samajh jata hai

Tu kahaN ke liye gathariya baandh baithi ‘saru’
Kab ye  zameeN chali  hai kahan falak jata hai





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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2014, 11:43:21 PM »
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bahut hee shandar kalaam dheron daad qubool karen
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2014, 11:48:00 PM »
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Mizaj-e-mausam kuch pal meiN badal jata hai
Phool khilta hai mehakta hai bikhar jata hai

Manjil  yakeenan payega vo shakhs achha hai
Acha ye hai ki  girta hai sambhal jata  hai

AndhiyaN gujri  kabhi toofaN se muqabil tha
Peid  isliye  khada  hai ke lachak jata hai

Peete bahut haiN log chhpate bhi bahut haiN
Magar aankhon ka paani hai chhalak  jata hai


Hai  amanat  khuda  ki  khudai   teri  nahiN
Yun  jindagi  ka  dhaga  aur  ulajh jata hai

Dard  pata  hai chein khota hai InsaaN yun ki
NadaaN hai bahut kuch khud ko samajh jata hai

Tu kahaN ke liye gathariya baandh baithi ‘saru’
Kab ye  zameeN chali  hai kahan falak jata hai

bahut umdah peshkash hai Saru Jee, saare sher mujhe bahut pasand hain magar ek sher sab se zayaada pasand aaya hai jisse laal rang mein badal rahaa hoon, shayad issliye ke main ne abhi kuchh sher aansuon pe likhe hain.
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2014, 11:53:38 PM »
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Suresh bhai..kya kehne aapke
waah waah kya kalaàm pesh ki hain as usual
hazaaron daad kubul Karen

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thanks a lot surindarn ji
Mizaj-e-mausam kuch pal meiN badal jata hai
Phool khilta hai mehakta hai bikhar jata hai

Manjil  yakeenan payega vo shakhs achha hai
Acha ye hai ki  girta hai sambhal jata  hai

AndhiyaN gujri  kabhi toofaN se muqabil tha
Peid  isliye  khada  hai ke lachak jata hai

Peete bahut haiN log chhpate bhi bahut haiN
Magar aankhon ka paani hai chhalak  jata hai


Hai  amanat  khuda  ki  khudai   teri  nahiN
Yun  jindagi  ka  dhaga  aur  ulajh jata hai

Dard  pata  hai chein khota hai InsaaN yun ki
NadaaN hai bahut kuch khud ko samajh jata hai

Tu kahaN ke liye gathariya baandh baithi ‘saru’
Kab ye  zameeN chali  hai kahan falak jata hai

bahut umdah peshkash hai Saru Jee, saare sher mujhe bahut pasand hain magar ek sher sab se zayaada pasand aaya hai jisse laal rang mein badal rahaa hoon, shayad issliye ke main ne abhi kuchh sher aansuon pe likhe hain.
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2014, 12:24:17 PM »
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bahut bahut khub saruji....

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Bahut hi umdaa suresh ji... behad lajawaab ghazal kahi aapne...
dheron daad ke saath ek rau kubul karen...
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   मिजाज़-ए-मौसम कुछ पल में बदल जाता  है
   फूल  खिलता  है  महकता है  बिखर  जाता है
 
   मंज़िल यक़ीनन  पाएगा वो शख़्स  अच्छा है
   अच्छा ये  है कि  गिरता  है  संभल  जाता है

   आँधियाँ गुज़री कभी तूफ़ां  से  मुक़ाबिल था
   पेड़  इसलिये  खड़ा  है  के  लचक  जाता है

   पीते  बहुत  हैं  लोग  छिपाते  भी  बहुत  हैं
   मगर  आँखों   का  पानी है  छलक जाता है

   है  अमानत  खुदा   की  खुदाई  तेरी   नहीं
   यूँ जिंदगी का  धागा  और  उलझ  जाता है

   दर्द  पाता   है  चैन  खोता  है  इंसां  यूँ  कि
   नादां है  बहुत कुछ  खुद को समझ जाता है

   तू  कहाँ के लिये गठरिया  बाँध  बैठी 'सरु'
   कब ये ज़मीं  चली है कहाँ फलक जाता है




Mizaj-e-mausam kuch pal meiN badal jata hai
Phool khilta hai mehakta hai bikhar jata hai

Manjil  yakeenan payega vo shakhs achha hai
Acha ye hai ki  girta hai sambhal jata  hai

AndhiyaN gujri  kabhi toofaN se muqabil tha
Peid  isliye  khada  hai ke lachak jata hai

Peete bahut haiN log chhpate bhi bahut haiN
Magar aankhon ka paani hai chhalak  jata hai

Hai  amanat  khuda  ki  khudai   teri  nahiN
Yun  jindagi  ka  dhaga  aur  ulajh jata hai

Dard  pata  hai chein khota hai InsaaN yun ki
NadaaN hai bahut kuch khud ko samajh jata hai

Tu kahaN ke liye gathariya baandh baithi ‘saru’
Kab ye  zameeN chali  hai kahan falak jata hai






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«Reply #12 on: June 14, 2014, 10:23:10 PM »
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behtereen ghazal suresh g
bohat bohat c daad,...................
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Bahut khoob,,,,,,,,Rau qabool karein.
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«Reply #14 on: June 16, 2014, 01:29:48 AM »
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thanks a lot sanchit ji
Bahut hi umdaa suresh ji... behad lajawaab ghazal kahi aapne...
dheron daad ke saath ek rau kubul karen...
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