Wafa doondhti rahi...........................Aqsh

by aqsh on February 09, 2013, 06:57:19 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 09, 2013, 01:29:27 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah aqshji behad khobsoorat dardila kalam,sirf apke liye iske age do pankti jodne ki himmat karta huN
Kise pate tha wo kab hamare dil me bas gya
meiN usko kabhi is jahaN doondhti rahi kabhi us jahaN doondhti rahi
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«Reply #16 on: February 09, 2013, 01:32:54 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on February 09, 2013, 01:29:27 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah wah aqshji behad khobsoorat dardila kalam,sirf apke liye iske age do pankti jodne ki himmat karta huN
Kise pate tha wo kab hamare dil me bas gya
meiN usko kabhi is jahaN doondhti rahi kabhi us jahaN doondhti rahi
Thank you so much premdeep ji. Aapne bhi bahut achcha likha hai. thnx once again
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«Reply #17 on: February 09, 2013, 04:11:02 PM »
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«Reply #19 on: February 09, 2013, 04:34:39 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on February 09, 2013, 06:57:19 AM
Unki bewafai mein, wafa doondhti rahi
Umr bhar apne ghar ka, pata doondhti rahi

Laakh bhulana chaha, par bhula hi na paaye
Chupa sakoon yaadein, tikhaana doondhti rahi

Na jaane kyun qatrate hai, woh milne se
Kal der raat tak, bas aaina doondhti rahi

Sitamgar ke sitamon ki, koi intehaan na thi
Nasoor bane zakhmon ki, dawa doondhti rahi

Ishq ke maron ko, raas aati nahi zindagi
"Aqsh" ko sukoon de sake, aisi hawa doondhti rahi






nicee lines

aap ki is peshkash ka ek chota reply aqsh ji :


ta-jindagi chaha tha jise wo chehra mila nahi
mai raah me har ek me chehra dhundhati rahi

uske khayalon me dooba hai dil is kadar
ishq ke samandar me dil apna dhundhati rahi

mai kaise jiyungi unke bina ye jindagi
unki bahon me ab tak jine ka sahara dhundhati rahi

ye khuda bhi maaf kare maine use khuda hai banaya
uske kadmon me jannat ka ishara dhundhati rahi

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«Reply #20 on: February 09, 2013, 04:54:29 PM »
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bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji... ek dum massttt likhaa hai aapne...!!!

kuch khaas thaa unme ki hum baar baar doobne ko unke paas jaate rahe
aur woh, saahil dikhaake har baar hamaari kashti ko hi doobaate rahe

humein aadat thi hum unki wafaa ke kisse jahaan bhar me sunaate rahe
unki mohabbat thi woh zaalim mehfilon me humko hi bewafaa bataate rahe

dekhaa hai humne kaise har shaqs se woh hans hans ke baat karte hain
aur hamaaraa paagalpan ki hum unko hastaa huwaa dekh muskuraate rahe

ab kehte hain humse ki hum qatraate hain unhe dekhke, unse milne se
kaise bataayein unhe ki judaa unse kaise hum ek ek din bitaate rahe

unkaa jahaan se guzarnaa hotaa, wahaan phool bichhaayaa thaa humne
unkaa ehsaan hi thaa ki woh phoolon ki sej ko naasoor bataate rahe

khud ko unki mohabbat samajh padhte rahe unke likhe geet mohabbat pe
naam kisi aur kaa thaa, wo naam hamaaraa hai hum khudko samjhaate rahe

kuch aisaa rishtaa judaa unse hamaaraa ki ab tak naa bhool paaye hain
hum unke jitne kareeb aate rahe, woh humse utni duriyaan badhaate rahe

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #21 on: February 09, 2013, 06:26:37 PM »
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«Reply #22 on: February 10, 2013, 03:17:29 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on February 09, 2013, 04:11:02 PM
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Thnx @ sarfiraji
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«Reply #23 on: February 10, 2013, 03:17:55 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on February 09, 2013, 04:19:59 PM
wonderful,ma'am
thank you marhoom bahayat ji
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«Reply #24 on: February 10, 2013, 03:19:18 AM »
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Quote from: Rahi2001 on February 09, 2013, 04:34:39 PM
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aap ki is peshkash ka ek chota reply aqsh ji :


ta-jindagi chaha tha jise wo chehra mila nahi
mai raah me har ek me chehra dhundhati rahi

uske khayalon me dooba hai dil is kadar
ishq ke samandar me dil apna dhundhati rahi

mai kaise jiyungi unke bina ye jindagi
unki bahon me ab tak jine ka sahara dhundhati rahi

ye khuda bhi maaf kare maine use khuda hai banaya
uske kadmon me jannat ka ishara dhundhati rahi

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thank you rahi jee mere kalaam ko padhne aur use pasand karne ke liye
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«Reply #25 on: February 10, 2013, 03:27:12 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on February 09, 2013, 04:54:29 PM
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bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji... ek dum massttt likhaa hai aapne...!!!

kuch khaas thaa unme ki hum baar baar doobne ko unke paas jaate rahe
aur woh, saahil dikhaake har baar hamaari kashti ko hi doobaate rahe

humein aadat thi hum unki wafaa ke kisse jahaan bhar me sunaate rahe
unki mohabbat thi woh zaalim mehfilon me humko hi bewafaa bataate rahe

dekhaa hai humne kaise har shaqs se woh hans hans ke baat karte hain
aur hamaaraa paagalpan ki hum unko hastaa huwaa dekh muskuraate rahe

ab kehte hain humse ki hum qatraate hain unhe dekhke, unse milne se
kaise bataayein unhe ki judaa unse kaise hum ek ek din bitaate rahe

unkaa jahaan se guzarnaa hotaa, wahaan phool bichhaayaa thaa humne
unkaa ehsaan hi thaa ki woh phoolon ki sej ko naasoor bataate rahe

khud ko unki mohabbat samajh padhte rahe unke likhe geet mohabbat pe
naam kisi aur kaa thaa, wo naam hamaaraa hai hum khudko samjhaate rahe

kuch aisaa rishtaa judaa unse hamaaraa ki ab tak naa bhool paaye hain
hum unke jitne kareeb aate rahe, woh humse utni duriyaan badhaate rahe

*****HRIDAY*****
waah waah waah hriday jee. bahut khoob. kya khoob aapne likha hai. dheron daad and thnx a lot for the beautiful reply

Tujhe dooba sakoon aisi mere paas koi kashti nahi
Meri aankhon mein dekho mohabbat teri itni sasti nahi
Ek baar to kar diya hota apne aankhon se ishaara
Pukaar uth thi meri har dhadkan tere jaisi koi hasti nahi
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Quote from: mkv on February 09, 2013, 06:26:37 PM
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«Reply #27 on: February 10, 2013, 06:03:07 AM »
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you are most welcome ji... aapne bhi khoob jawaab likha hai ... Usual Smile

Quote from: aqsh on February 10, 2013, 03:27:12 AM
waah waah waah hriday jee. bahut khoob. kya khoob aapne likha hai. dheron daad and thnx a lot for the beautiful reply

Tujhe dooba sakoon aisi mere paas koi kashti nahi
Meri aankhon mein dekho mohabbat teri itni sasti nahi
Ek baar to kar diya hota apne aankhon se ishaara
Pukaar uth thi meri har dhadkan tere jaisi koi hasti nahi
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«Reply #28 on: February 10, 2013, 09:20:27 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on February 10, 2013, 06:03:07 AM
you are most welcome ji... aapne bhi khoob jawaab likha hai ... Usual Smile

thank you hriday jee
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