Wafa doondhti rahi................................Aqsh...

by aqsh on August 29, 2013, 01:08:03 PM
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Din raat mera dil jiske liye hue jaa raha mastaana hai
Woh laakhon dilon mein basne waala ek deewana hai


Uski aankhoN meiN apne liye, wafa doondhti rahi
Uske dil ko joh luba sake, aisi sada doondhti rahi

Bina uske mukammal nahiN hai, yeh zaat meri
Kheenche use meri aur, woh hawa doondhti rahi

Qaid ho jaaye woh mere, dil ke haathoN meiN
Aur na mile use zamanat, aisi saza doondhti rahi

Tadapta rahe har pal, bas mujhe hi paane ke liye
Jo rakhe use beqaraar, aisi dawa doondhti rahi

Uski nas nas meiN bas jaaye, pyaar “Aqsh” ka
Aur ho jaaye woh magroor, aisi ada doondhti rahi
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2013, 01:11:42 PM »
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Waah Waah Bahut Khoob....
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Qaid ho jaaye woh mere, dil ke haathoN meiN
Aur na mile use zamanat, aisi saza doondhti rahi

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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2013, 01:26:46 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on August 29, 2013, 01:08:03 PM
Din raat mera dil jiske liye hue jaa raha mastaana hai
Woh laakhon dilon mein basne waala ek deewana hai

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Uski aankhoN meiN apne liye, wafa doondhti rahi
Uske dil ko joh luba sake, aisi sada doondhti rahi
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Bina uske mukammal nahiN hai, yeh zaat meri
Kheenche use meri aur, woh hawa doondhti rahi
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Qaid ho jaaye woh mere, dil ke haathoN meiN
Aur na mile use zamanat, aisi saza doondhti rahi
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Tadapta rahe har pal, bas mujhe hi paane ke liye
Jo rakhe use beqaraar, aisi dawa doondhti rahi
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Uski nas nas meiN bas jaaye, pyaar “Aqsh” ka
Aur ho jaaye woh magroor, aisi ada doondhti rahi
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Bina uske mukammal nahiN hai, yeh zaat meri
Kheenche use meri aur, woh hawa doondhti rahi

waah waah AQSh ji kya khoob likha hai ,
shaandaar jaandaar, ghazaal, bohut hi khoobsurat bayani.
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2013, 01:33:53 PM »
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Waah Aqsh bhut umda! Hamari daad aapko rau deti rahi!
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2013, 01:37:17 PM »
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waah waah waaah bohut khub aqsh ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2013, 02:01:15 PM »
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Aqshji Bahut Khoob Likhte Hain Aap,Dheron Daad.Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2013, 02:12:07 PM »
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waah waah badee hee dilkash rachnaa
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2013, 02:32:25 PM »
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bahut khoob dhero daad Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2013, 02:44:43 PM »
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tadap hi tadap bechaeni mix... ab yahan waah waah bhi to nahi kah sakte - is liye apne kuch ashaar aapki nazar...

Is Duniya Ki Hai Reet Yehi
Yaan Ashiq Hi Sukh Khota Hai
Jo Dil Ki Lagi May Phansta Hai
Wo Shaam Sawere Rota Hai
Tum Pyar Mohabbat Mat Karna
Ye Rog Bahot Dukh Deta Hai
Jo Jiski Qhismat Ka Hoga
Ek Din Wo Uska Hota Hai.......

so apni talash jaari rakhye, kyonke jo jiski qhismat ka hota hai wo usey zaroor milta hai  Shocked Even More
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2013, 06:44:28 PM »
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वाह....वाह.....अक्श जी.....क्या बात है.....बहुत खूब......
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2013, 07:13:46 PM »
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uuuuufffff kyaa kehne sarkaar... bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne...  ek dum zabardassstttt ... wah wah wah wah nikal rahi hai dil se .... aur hum apni aadat se baaz nahi aate aapke likhe posts kaa jawaab diye binaa ... bas isliye aaj bhi kuch likh hi liyaa iske jawaab mein, ummeed kartaa hoon aapko pasand aayegi ...!!!


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«Reply #11 on: August 29, 2013, 07:48:15 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on August 29, 2013, 01:11:42 PM
Waah Waah Bahut Khoob....
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Qaid ho jaaye woh mere, dil ke haathoN meiN
Aur na mile use zamanat, aisi saza doondhti rahi

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thnxxxxxx a lottttt musaahib ji...
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«Reply #12 on: August 29, 2013, 07:49:23 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on August 29, 2013, 01:26:46 PM

Bina uske mukammal nahiN hai, yeh zaat meri
Kheenche use meri aur, woh hawa doondhti rahi

waah waah AQSh ji kya khoob likha hai ,
shaandaar jaandaar, ghazaal, bohut hi khoobsurat bayani.
thnx a lottttttt sahal....
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Quote from: @Kaash on August 29, 2013, 01:33:53 PM
Waah Aqsh bhut umda! Hamari daad aapko rau deti rahi!
kaash ji housla afzai aur rau ke liye bahut bahut shukriya... aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahiye..
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«Reply #14 on: August 29, 2013, 07:50:57 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on August 29, 2013, 01:37:17 PM
waah waah waaah bohut khub aqsh ji
thnxxxx so much sahill ji...
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