Wafaa ki qasam khaatey hee, milaa hai balam harjaayee!

by abdbundeli on February 28, 2011, 11:23:49 AM
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(Aakhiree do asha'ar par khaas gour chaahuungaa, muhtaram!/muhtarmah!)

Kareyn kyaa, roz apnee zindagee bantee hai afsaanaa?
Kabhee aisaa bhi lagtaa hai: koyi apnaa, hai beygaanaa!

Subah kee roshanee badhhtee, binaa kuchh kahey dhaltee hai;
Idhar aatey, udhar jaatey, guzar jaataa hai parwaanaa!

Bulaatee hai, ishaarey kar, kabhee hatatey jawon ki tah:
Magar gaflat hai, jaakar wahaan, kho jaaye na deewaanaa?

Hazaaron baar wo aakar, gaye hain kho sitaaron mein;
Karuun main kyaa, uyoonon ney unhain bhi naheen pahichaanaa?

Baseyngey wo, umeedeyn theen, jigar mein, zeyhn mein, dil mein;
Kareyn kyaa, har jagah unko nazar aayaa hai weeraanaa?

Kahaan jaauun, bataa mahboob, tujh sey alhadaa hokar?
Na maykash hain, na saaqee hai, na paimaanaa, na maykhaanaa!

Huaa hai kyaa raqeebon ko, sarey mahfil bulaayaa hai?
Waheen wo hai, waheen hon ham, rawaan ho dour-e-farzaanaa!

Wafaa ki qasam khaatey hee, milaa hai balam harjaayee!
Jiyengey ham, bhaley hi kaheen beyhtar lagey mar jaanaa!!

Na jaaney kyaa pilaayaa hai, tumhaarey un uyoonon ney:
Nazar mein aa rahaa hai kyon na koyee, 'abd', butkhaanaa?

                              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: February 28, 2011, 11:29:52 AM »
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wah wah abdji.... kya baat hai sach main shabd anhin hain tarif ke lie.... saikdon daad aapko...

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«Reply #2 on: February 28, 2011, 11:33:31 AM »
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bht khoob abd ji...
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«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2011, 12:02:37 PM »
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Kahaan jaauun, bataa mahboob, tujh sey alhadaa hokar?
Na maykash hain, na saaqee hai, na paimaanaa, na maykhaanaa!

Bahut khoob ...... Bundeli Sahab ! nice work !!!!!!!

bahut achchi ghazal hui hai ..... dil se daad !!!!!!! Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2011, 12:10:12 PM »
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Bundeli sirji--
ab to himmat hi nhi hoti kuch tareef me likhne ki.
aapka kalaam parh kar bas lafz khamosh se ho jaate hain.
seedhe dil me utar jaate hain aapke kalaam.
aapkao thanx ki aapne hume parhne ka mauka dia.
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2011, 12:20:03 PM »
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behad khubsurat aur gehri soch se bani he ye shayri......

abd ji no words for it .........just mindblowing ........too good ......its our luck that we r reading this shayari........

just behtareen......
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2011, 01:43:07 PM »
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Quote from: manjum on February 28, 2011, 11:29:52 AM
wah wah abdji.... kya baat hai sach main shabd anhin hain tarif ke lie.... saikdon daad aapko...

 Applause Applause

Shukriyah 'manjum' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2011, 01:44:22 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on February 28, 2011, 11:33:31 AM
bht khoob abd ji...

Shukriyah 'manzil' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2011, 01:45:44 PM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on February 28, 2011, 12:02:37 PM
Kahaan jaauun, bataa mahboob, tujh sey alhadaa hokar?
Na maykash hain, na saaqee hai, na paimaanaa, na maykhaanaa!

Bahut khoob ...... Bundeli Sahab ! nice work !!!!!!!

bahut achchi ghazal hui hai ..... dil se daad !!!!!!! Applause

Shukriyah Anshumali ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2011, 01:46:56 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on February 28, 2011, 12:10:12 PM
Bundeli sirji--
ab to himmat hi nhi hoti kuch tareef me likhne ki.
aapka kalaam parh kar bas lafz khamosh se ho jaate hain.
seedhe dil me utar jaate hain aapke kalaam.
aapkao thanx ki aapne hume parhne ka mauka dia.

Shukriyah Nirala ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

                              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: February 28, 2011, 01:48:11 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on February 28, 2011, 12:20:03 PM
behad khubsurat aur gehri soch se bani he ye shayri......

abd ji no words for it .........just mindblowing ........too good ......its our luck that we r reading this shayari........

just behtareen......

Shukriyah 'Matrix Guy' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2011, 03:17:20 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 28, 2011, 11:23:49 AM
(Aakhiree do asha'ar par khaas gour chaahuungaa, muhtaram!/muhtarmah!)

Kareyn kyaa, roz apnee zindagee bantee hai afsaanaa?
Kabhee aisaa bhi lagtaa hai: koyi apnaa, hai beygaanaa!

Subah kee roshanee badhhtee, binaa kuchh kahey dhaltee hai;
Idhar aatey, udhar jaatey, guzar jaataa hai parwaanaa!

Bulaatee hai, ishaarey kar, kabhee hatatey jawon ki tah:
Magar gaflat hai, jaakar wahaan, kho jaaye na deewaanaa?

Hazaaron baar wo aakar, gaye hain kho sitaaron mein;
Karuun main kyaa, uyoonon ney unhain bhi naheen pahichaanaa?

Baseyngey wo, umeedeyn theen, jigar mein, zeyhn mein, dil mein;
Kareyn kyaa, har jagah unko nazar aayaa hai weeraanaa?

Kahaan jaauun, bataa mahboob, tujh sey alhadaa hokar?
Na maykash hain, na saaqee hai, na paimaanaa, na maykhaanaa!

Huaa hai kyaa raqeebon ko, sarey mahfil bulaayaa hai?
Waheen wo hai, waheen hon ham, rawaan ho dour-e-farzaanaa!

Wafaa ki qasam khaatey hee, milaa hai balam harjaayee!
Jiyengey ham, bhaley hi kaheen beyhtar lagey mar jaanaa!!

Na jaaney kyaa pilaayaa hai, tumhaarey un uyoonon ney:
Nazar mein aa rahaa hai kyon na koyee, 'abd', butkhaanaa?

                              - abd bundeli



Sir, You Are An Institution In yourself,We Learn A Lot From You..

Thankyou Soooo Much!!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: March 01, 2011, 07:10:07 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 28, 2011, 03:17:20 PM

Sir, You Are An Institution In yourself,We Learn A Lot From You..

Thankyou Soooo Much!!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut-bahut shukriyah khwaish ji! Aapkey pyaar-o-dulaar sey mujhey 'shakti' miltee hai! Shukraguzaar huun!

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«Reply #13 on: March 01, 2011, 01:10:01 PM »
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Bahut Hi Khubsurat Likha AbD Ji Applause Applause
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on March 01, 2011, 01:10:01 PM
Bahut Hi Khubsurat Likha AbD Ji Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Rishi ji!
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