Wahi Kesar hai...( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on May 24, 2011, 11:34:28 AM
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Yeh bhi to ek kamaal_e_sitamgar hai
Zara nahi usey khuda ka dar hai

Jis ek baat pe rootha hai woh humse
Ek usi baat ki humko nahi khabar hai

Meri masjid bhi yahi mera mandir bhi
Bechkar khoon paseena jo banaya ghar hai

Wada_e_khuld ne humko yeh yaqee.N baksha hai
Muflisi meri ameeri se kaiee behtar hai

Sharm tehzeeb aur paibandh lagi ek chader
Pass beti ke mere bas yahi zevar hai

Jiski manzil na koi na koi manzil ka pata
Caarvaa.N paar lagata wahi rehbar hai

Zayka iske hi dum se raha jeene me
Thoda thoda jo mila samjho wahi kesar hai

De wahi daad mujhe aaj ghazal par meri
Samjhe Ghayel ko bada khud se bada shayer hai

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2011, 11:46:00 AM »
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Sajid Sahab,

Bahut khoob..achchhee ghazal kahi hai..

Sabse bade to naheen, haan mujh jaise
bahuton se bade shayar zaroor hain aap.

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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2011, 11:48:04 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoooob Mere Dost!!!!!

Har Ek A'shaar Par Sirf Waah Waah Hi karta Gaya..

Aur rahi Baat Aapko daad dene Ki hum Khud Ko Shayar Hi nahi Samjhte Dost!!

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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2011, 11:50:07 AM »
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wah wah wah..... har sher kamaal hai bahut bahut khub ghayalji....

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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2011, 01:31:19 PM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on May 24, 2011, 11:34:28 AM
Yeh bhi to ek kamaal_e_sitamgar hai
Zara nahi usey khuda ka dar hai

Jis ek baat pe rootha hai woh humse
Ek usi baat ki humko nahi khabar hai

Meri masjid bhi yahi mera mandir bhi
Bechkar khoon paseena jo banaya ghar hai

Wada_e_khuld ne humko yeh yaqee.N baksha hai
Muflisi meri ameeri se kaiee behtar hai

Sharm tehzeeb aur paibandh lagi ek chader
Pass beti ke mere bas yahi zevar hai

Jiski manzil na koi na koi manzil ka pata
Caarvaa.N paar lagata wahi rehbar hai

Zayka iske hi dum se raha jeene me
Thoda thoda jo mila samjho wahi kesar hai

De wahi daad mujhe aaj ghazal par meri
Samjhe Ghayel ko bada khud se bada shayer hai

Sajid Ghayel

bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2011, 01:47:43 PM »
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aapko daad de sake itni to haisiyat nai hai humari………
bas aapko padhne ki khuahish me ek umra gujaar di humne…

kya kahen ab iske siwa aapko janaab
kai dino ki bekaraari ko kuch lagaam di hai aapki ghajal ne…

thank u so much sir ji
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2011, 01:48:54 PM »
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Janab Sajid sahaaB aadaab!

Kia haal chaal hai janab Usual Smile
Ummid hai khairiyat se hoNge..Usual Smile

  Chaliye janab der se aaye par aaye to sahiN yeH to humari aapse humesha ki bahas rahi hai Usual Smile

  Janab ab aapki kalaam par kia kaheN aapke ahsaas o khayaal
to pahle se hi Masha Allah hai aur ab to khayaaloN meiN aur bhi sanjidgi aur gehrai dekhne mil rahi hai .... Usual Smile

Behad achche ahsaas O khayaal pesh kiye hai janab daad daad daad...

yeh kuch ashaar hume behad khub lage ...
In par alag se dil se daad Usual Smile          


Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on May 24, 2011, 11:34:28 AM


Sharm tehzeeb aur paibandh lagi ek chader
Pass beti ke mere bas yahi zevar hai

Zayka iske hi dum se raha jeene me
Thoda thoda jo mila samjho wahi kesar hai

De wahi daad mujhe aaj ghazal par meri
Samjhe Ghayel ko bada khud se bada shayer hai

Sajid Ghayel

Janab ki ijazat mile to kuch khamiyoN ko ujagar karne ka dil kar raha hai tongue3

Waise hum aapko achche se jante hai phir bhi Bhaijaan kahiN khafaa ho gaye to ?

Ijazat milne par phir aayeNge tabtak ke liye ..
Ijazat dijiye...

Aate rahiye... Likhate rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          
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«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2011, 01:57:22 PM »
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bht bht khkoob sajid ji...
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«Reply #8 on: May 24, 2011, 02:16:13 PM »
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bahut umdaa soch ........ghayel ji
daad
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2011, 03:46:47 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Ghayel ji.dard bhari ghazal,excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 26, 2011, 05:38:59 PM »
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Janab Sajid Ji Dil To Kiya Ki Aapkey
Kuch Ashaaron Pe Dad Den Magar Maktey
Ne Humey Rok Liya Kyon Ki Abhi Hum Talib e Ilm Hai
Aur Kya Kahe Janaab Is Sher Mein To Aapne Apne Ghar Ko
Masjid Aur Mandir Se Behtar Hi Bana Diya.Kuch Jami Nahi Baat

Meri Masjid Bhi Yahi Mera Mandir Bhi
Bechkar Khoon Paseena Jo Banaya Ghar Hai


Aur Isme Hume Sach Kahen To Takabbur Ke Alawa
Aur Kuch Bhi Na Dikha Na Samajh Aaya Khair
Apni Apni Soch Aur Nazar Hai

De Wahi Daad Mujhe Aaj Ghazal Par Meri
Samjhe Ghayel Ko Bada Khud Se Bada Shayer Hai
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«Reply #11 on: May 30, 2011, 04:01:01 PM »
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Mahutram Ghayel sahab tasleemat,,

Dil ki tamamtar gaheriyun se mai apko dad pesh karta hon ,, alfaz ko ahesas dard ko zubaan banjare ko makaa.N deti howi apki ye kalam eak nahi balke hazrah dad ki mustahiq hai .. mubarak baad khubool karen...allah apko shad o aabad rakhe ...


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