Waqt Ke Aage Majboor Ho Gaye ...! Radhika

by Radhika_2 on September 24, 2010, 11:29:27 AM
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Waqt Ke Aage Majboor Ho Gaye
Hum Kya The Or Kya Ho Gaye

Nibhaai Thi Jo Wafa Hamne Kabhi
Woh Khwaab Saare Kaha Kho Gaye

Na Jaane Kaha ley Jaaye Ye Raaste
NakaamiyoN Pe Hum Apni Ro Gaye

Kaanto Si Chubti Hai Dil Ki Kasak
Ashko Se Apni Unhe Dho Gaye

Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye

Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kab Jaage Or Kab So Gaye
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2010, 01:03:57 PM »
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bahut khoob kaha radhika_2 ji.....

Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kab Jaage Or Kab So Gaye....

ye sher sun muskuraate ro gaye...
this one was impressive

regards
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2010, 03:08:55 PM »
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Gud one radhika .......
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«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2010, 04:27:41 PM »
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Radhika Jee Aadaab!

Aapki nayi koshish nazar nawaaz huyi socheN padhke daad dete chaleN ..... Kuch khamiyaaN nazar aayi so woh bhi batate chaleN...... Usual Smile

Aap humari dost hai so humara to farz banta hai... ke apni dost ki galtiyaaN sudhaare...... Usual Smile
Chaliye aapki kalaam per aate hai...... Usual Smile         


Quote from: Radhika_2 on September 24, 2010, 11:29:27 AM
Waqt Ke Aage Majboor Ho Gaye
Hum Kya The Or Kya Ho Gaye

Hmmm khayaal achcha hai Radhikaa jee ... bus parosne meiN nahi aaya ... hum aik shakal batate hai dekhiye aapko samjh meiN aaye to rakhiye warna kachre ka dibba aapke baju hoNga hi... Usual Smile

Waqt ne kuch aise beej bo gaye
Hum kia the aur ab kia ho gaye         


Nibhaai Thi Jo Wafa Hamne Kabhi
Woh Khwaab Saare Kaha Kho Gaye

Hmmm Radhikaa jee sher nahi hua hai yeH bus aap humari dost hai si lihaaz se kah raheN hai... warna hum jante hai aap kitne tikhe mijaaz ki hai tongue3
Iska resion batate hai aapko dekhiye....

Aapne jo khawaab word use kiya hai sirf is wajaah se.,, aapka sher sher nahi hua.. sad5 Kia aapne wafa bhi khawaab meiN nibhayi thi... kamaal hai aap hi sochiye...           


Na Jaane Kaha ley Jaaye Ye Raaste
NakaamiyoN Pe Hum Apni Ro Gaye

Hmmm sher achcha hai daad ... khayaal bhi achcha hai ...           


Kaanto Si Chubti Hai Dil Ki Kasak
Ashko Se Apni Unhe Dho Gaye

Hmmm baat achchi kahi hai aapne aur andaaz e bayaaN bhi khoob raha daad Usual Smile         


Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye

Kia baat hai jee bahut khoob achcha sher hai .... kafi deeep hai daad ... Usual Smile         


Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kab Jaage Or Kab So Gaye

Radhikaa jee this one is realy mindblowing .... bahut umdaa sher bhi aur khayaal bhi ekdum class sher kaha hai aapne daad .....           



Aik achchi koshish per daad kabool kijiye......
Aur ummid hai aap humari batai huyi baato se sehmat ho ... gar nahi to mazarrat chahate hai....   koshish jari rakhiye khush o aabaad rahiye,

Khuda Hafez........ Usual Smile         
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«Reply #4 on: September 24, 2010, 06:15:58 PM »
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bahut khub radhika ji daad kabul farmaye
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«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2010, 03:14:51 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Mohtarma Radhika Ji...
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«Reply #6 on: September 25, 2010, 03:23:12 AM »
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Har koi waqt k aage majbur hai
Bahut khoob
Kehte hain Waqt roshni ka ho saaya saath rehta hai
Shab me suraj nai nikalta , Saaya bhi saath chod deta hai.
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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2010, 04:56:19 AM »
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Nice effort Radhika_2 ji.....you are on the mark....get...set...go... wave hello........ Applause
Parwaz ji k saath ek koshish hamaari bhi....

Waqt kee tej dhaar me hum beh gaye
Kya thay aur ab hum kya se kya ho gaye

Khwabo ko hakikat karne,ki thee jo wafa humne
Waqt ki maar me sakhee, jane khahaan kho gaye


Quote from: Radhika_2 on September 24, 2010, 11:29:27 AM
Waqt Ke Aage Majboor Ho Gaye
Hum Kya The Or Kya Ho Gaye

Nibhaai Thi Jo Wafa Hamne Kabhi
Woh Khwaab Saare Kaha Kho Gaye

Na Jaane Kaha ley Jaaye Ye Raaste
NakaamiyoN Pe Hum Apni Ro Gaye

Kaanto Si Chubti Hai Dil Ki Kasak
Ashko Se Apni Unhe Dho Gaye

Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye

Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kab Jaage Or Kab So Gaye
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«Reply #8 on: September 26, 2010, 01:19:17 AM »
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Quote from: zidd on September 24, 2010, 01:03:57 PM
bahut khoob kaha radhika_2 ji.....

Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kab Jaage Or Kab So Gaye....

ye sher sun muskuraate ro gaye...
this one was impressive

regards

Ji ........ Pasand Karne Ka Shukriya !
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2010, 11:41:36 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Radhikaji..

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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2010, 11:49:43 AM »
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bahut badhiya jii..likhte rahiye
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Quote from: neelgold on September 24, 2010, 03:08:55 PM
Gud one radhika .......

ji shukriya.......................
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«Reply #12 on: October 26, 2010, 05:37:49 AM »
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bht hi pyri peshkash radhika ji..dil khush kar diya aapne...
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