Waqt lagtaa hai dobaarah galey lagaaney mein!

by abdbundeli on June 22, 2009, 06:10:41 AM
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Tum ney chaahaa, mureed aa gayaa maykhaaney mein!
Tum bulaaou, to, chalaa aayegaa weeraaney mein!!

Eik afsaanah, kuchh nayaa, shuroo karo tum bhee;
Yun bhi, badnaam huaa hun bahut zamaaney mein!

Aakhiree khoon kaa qatraa bhi choon chukaa hai ab;
Aur tum, ab bhi, ho masroof aazmaaney mein!

Aur jo bhee ho munaasib, lo kaho, hoon haazir;
Aaj rah paaye na koyee kamee sunaaney mein!

Do qadam saath chaley ho, ki, dagmagaaye ho;
Aamdey key liye tha jashn sanamkhaaney mein!

Eik din un ney hamain bhi yahin daawat dee thee!
Kaash hotee na hamain deyr wahaan jaaney mein!!

Baarhaa minnateyn kar thak gayee hai baad-e-sabaa;
Ab to ahbaab jutey hain unhain uthaaney mein!

Wafaa parast hun, rag-rag mein hai wafaadaaree;
Naheen yaqeen mujhey aaj bhi bahaaney mein!

Eik lamhey mein, ‘abd’, dost rooth jaatey hain;
Waqt lagtaa hai dobaarah galey lagaaney mein!

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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2009, 06:30:24 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd Saheb ji..

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!! Bahut Gehre aur Khoobsurat!!!

Bahut Ache.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2009, 09:37:31 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd Saheb ji..

Har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!! Bahut Gehre aur Khoobsurat!!!

Bahut Ache.. Applause Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, khwaish ji! Bas, aapki nazar-e-inaayat hai!
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2009, 12:17:09 PM »
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Bohot hi khoobsurat ghazal hai Babu Ji...aur maqte main to ghazal ki jaan aa gayi hai:

Eik lamhey mein, ‘abd’, dost rooth jaatey hain;
Waqt lagtaa hai dobaarah galey lagaaney mein!

Bohot khoob !!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2009, 12:44:39 PM »
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Bohot hi khoobsurat ghazal hai Babu Ji...aur maqte main to ghazal ki jaan aa gayi hai:

Eik lamhey mein, ‘abd’, dost rooth jaatey hain;
Waqt lagtaa hai dobaarah galey lagaaney mein!

Bohot khoob !!!

Thanks a lot, Celmira!
                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2009, 08:26:15 PM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,excellent,kamaal ke likhte ho aap,bahut khoob. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2009, 08:35:32 PM »
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Bohot Badhiya yaar...Applause
Dil jo chu gayi baat...
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2009, 06:24:51 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,excellent,kamaal ke likhte ho aap,bahut khoob. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot, Madhu!
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«Reply #8 on: June 23, 2009, 06:25:19 AM »
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Tum ney chaahaa, mureed aa gayaa maykhaaney mein!
Tum bulaaou, to, chalaa aayegaa weeraaney mein!!

Eik afsaanah, kuchh nayaa, shuroo karo tum bhee;
Yun bhi, badnaam huaa hun bahut zamaaney mein!

Aakhiree khoon kaa qatraa bhi choon chukaa hai ab;
Aur tum, ab bhi, ho masroof aazmaaney mein!

Aur jo bhee ho munaasib, lo kaho, hoon haazir;
Aaj rah paaye na koyee kamee sunaaney mein!

Do qadam saath chaley ho, ki, dagmagaaye ho;
Aamdey key liye tha jashn sanamkhaaney mein!

Eik din un ney hamain bhi yahin daawat dee thee!
Kaash hotee na hamain deyr wahaan jaaney mein!!

Baarhaa minnateyn kar thak gayee hai baad-e-sabaa;
Ab to ahbaab jutey hain unhain uthaaney mein!

Wafaa parast hun, rag-rag mein hai wafaadaaree;
Naheen yaqeen mujhey aaj bhi bahaaney mein!

Eik lamhey mein, ‘abd’, dost rooth jaatey hain;
Waqt lagtaa hai dobaarah galey lagaaney mein!

                                        - abd bundeli





waah kya baat hai abd jee
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«Reply #9 on: June 23, 2009, 06:26:32 AM »
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Bohot Badhiya yaar...Applause
Dil jo chu gayi baat...
Thanks a lot, superspawn10 ji!
              - abd bundeli

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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2009, 06:27:55 AM »
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waah kya baat hai abd jee
Shukriyah pandit ji!
       - abd bundeli
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