Wo aik jhakoraa thaa hawaa kaa: nikal gayaa!

by abdbundeli on February 04, 2011, 03:13:19 PM
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Leejiye pooree gazal padhiye:

Wo jaa chukaa hai: aaj gayaa ho, ki, kal gayaa!
Aatish sey waasitah thaa: haqeeqat hai: jal gayaa!!

Jiskey qareeb aaney ko hai zindagee beytaab:
Wo aik jhakoraa thaa hawaa kaa: nikal gayaa!

Us daastaan-e-yaar kaa ab zikr kyaa karuun:
Jo mom thaa shamaa kaa: jalaa, yaa pighal gayaa!

Barbaadiyon key tohafey mujhko miley hain roz!
Wo main nahin thaa; doosaraa hai, jo sambhal gayaa!!

Yuun to rah-e-talab mein they reig-e-rawaan key dour;
Main shaad hun, ki, saath hi dour-e-gazal gayaa!

Parwaaz jawon tak kee hamain thee kahaan qubool:
Tum saath kyaa huye, ki, iraadah badal gayaa!

Lagtaa hai, mukhaatib hai zalzalon kaa dour ab:
Meyree bisaat kyaa hai: zamaanah dahal gayaa!!

Har simt, har lamhey hai khaak roo-b-roo, 'abd',
Maanind-e-tifl sirf khilonon bahal gayaa!

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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2011, 05:17:44 PM »
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Parwaaz jawon tak kee hamain thee kahaan qubool:
Tum saath kyaa huye, ki, iraadah badal gayaa!

Lagtaa hai, mukhaatib hai zalzalon kaa dour ab:
Meyree bisaat kyaa hai: zamaanah dahal gayaa!!

Har simt, har lamhey hai khaak roo-b-roo, 'abd',
Maanind-e-tifl sirf khilonon bahal gayaa!

Bundeli Sahab ! Aadaab !!

Bahut khoob kahi hai aapne Ghazal .. Sabhi ashaar acche bane hai ... khaas taur par maqtaa mujhe behad pasand aayaa ... aur upar ankit sher dil ke kareeb rahen ... dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ...  Applause Applause Applause

yunhi behtar kalaam sunaate aur likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2011, 05:45:23 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2011, 10:28:49 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob ghazal hai Sir jee..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2011, 05:41:54 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on February 04, 2011, 05:17:44 PM

Parwaaz jawon tak kee hamain thee kahaan qubool:
Tum saath kyaa huye, ki, iraadah badal gayaa!

Lagtaa hai, mukhaatib hai zalzalon kaa dour ab:
Meyree bisaat kyaa hai: zamaanah dahal gayaa!!

Har simt, har lamhey hai khaak roo-b-roo, 'abd',
Maanind-e-tifl sirf khilonon bahal gayaa!

Bundeli Sahab ! Aadaab !!

Bahut khoob kahi hai aapne Ghazal .. Sabhi ashaar acche bane hai ... khaas taur par maqtaa mujhe behad pasand aayaa ... aur upar ankit sher dil ke kareeb rahen ... dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ...  Applause Applause Applause

yunhi behtar kalaam sunaate aur likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !

Shukriyah Anshumali ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
WOH aapko sapariwaar khush wa tandurust rakhey!

                            - abd bundeli
                     
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2011, 05:45:10 AM »
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Quote from: nirala on February 04, 2011, 05:45:23 PM
behtareen

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Nirala ji!
Khush rahiye!

               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2011, 05:47:36 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 04, 2011, 10:28:49 PM
Bahaut bahaut khoob ghazal hai Sir jee..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!

Shukriyah Rahim bhai! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
WOH aapko khush wa tandurust rakhey!

                            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2011, 05:57:56 AM »
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ahaaaaa kya khoob kaha abd jiii...


wo jo ek bar mujhse ikrar kar gaya;
ek akhiri saans ko hazaar kar gaya;
hui nahi na hogi mujhe ab muhabbat yaron;
uska muskurana hi mujhe barbaad kar gaya~
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2011, 06:52:43 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on February 05, 2011, 05:57:56 AM
ahaaaaa kya khoob kaha abd jiii...


wo jo ek bar mujhse ikrar kar gaya;
ek akhiri saans ko hazaar kar gaya;
hui nahi na hogi mujhe ab muhabbat yaron;
uska muskurana hi mujhe barbaad kar gaya~

Shukriyah Abhi bhai! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

Ham ko barbaadiyon kaa khouf nahin hai, leykin,
Log to fir bhi zalzalon sey daraatey hain hameyn!
Khaak khud, khaak mein milney ko judaa hotee hai;
Wasl kee chaah yeh zarron kee, chaahtey hain thameyn!!

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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2011, 03:04:58 PM »
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Bahut Khub Abd Ji
Nice Creation Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: February 07, 2011, 04:02:14 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 06, 2011, 03:04:58 PM
Bahut Khub Abd Ji
Nice Creation Applause Applause

Shukriyah Rishi ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!!

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«Reply #11 on: February 07, 2011, 06:27:04 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 05, 2011, 06:52:43 AM
Shukriyah Abhi bhai! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

Ham ko barbaadiyon kaa khouf nahin hai, leykin,
Log to fir bhi zalzalon sey daraatey hain hameyn!
Khaak khud, khaak mein milney ko judaa hotee hai;
Wasl kee chaah yeh zarron kee, chaahtey hain thameyn!!

                                - abd bundeli


bahut khoobb abd ji..

shukriya apka bhi~
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«Reply #12 on: February 07, 2011, 08:43:47 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on February 07, 2011, 06:27:04 AM
bahut khoobb abd ji..

shukriya apka bhi~

Lots of thanks, Abhi bhai! You're welcome!

                   - abd bundeli
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