Wo Budhi Maa'n hai jo Faako'n me Muskurati hai ( Qadeertoopchi )

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Eak filbadeeh Ghazal

Ghareeb-e-Shahr ke ghar se sada ye aati hai
shikam ki aag ana ka shajar jalati hai

Jawaan beto'n ko ahesas muflisi ka na ho
wo budhi maa'n hai jo faako'n me muskurati hai

zara ye nannhi si chirya ka hausla dekho
jo jhoolti huee taheni pe ghar banati hai

hasan Sateesh-o-Waqif ke hi nahi pyaare
ye duniya sher hamare bhi gungunati hai

qadeer gham se taaluq hua hai ab aisa
khushi bhi ghar se mere aake laut jaati hai

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Gareeb-e-shahr ( Poor person of the city ( Shahr Ka gareeb Insaan )
Sada  ( Voice - Awaz )
Shikam ( Stomach , Pet )
Ana    ( Ego, )
Shajar ( Tree - Paidh )
Faako'n ( Hungriness - Bhukhe Rahena )
Ta'aluq ( Relation , Rishta , Naata )
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2013, 03:48:12 PM »
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Behad khoobsurat aur umda ashaar ..

Ek ghuzarish hai, koshish kariye ki mushkil alfazon ke maiyne bhi share karne.

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Filbadeeh =  Something done quickly / in one attempt.
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2013, 03:53:15 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 11, 2013, 03:40:46 PM
Eak filbadeeh Ghazal

Ghareeb-e-Shahr ke ghar se sada ye aati hai
shikam ki aag ana ka shajar jalati hai

Jawaan beto'n ko ahesas muflisi ka na ho
wo budhi maa'n hai jo faako'n me muskurati hai

zara ye nannhi si chirya ka hausla dekho
jo jhoolti huee taheni pe ghar banati hai

hasan Sateesh-o-Waqif ke hi nahi pyaare
ye duniya sher hamare bhi gungunati hai

qadeer gham se taaluq hua hai ab aisaa
khushi bhi ghar se mere aake laut jaati hai

Qadeertoopchi


Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah.......

Kya kehne Qadeer Bhai..Bahut Bahut Khoooooob..

Matla, Dusra, Teesra Aur Maqta....Lajawaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaab..

Har Ek Lafz Zindagi Ki Talk Haqeeqat Bayaan Kar Raha Hai...


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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2013, 04:26:14 PM »
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dilferab ghazal rahee ,............bohat c daad,...........
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2013, 04:34:54 PM »
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Khubsurat aur dilchasp ghazal hai , qadeer junaid sahib.
Filbadeeh  mein bhi bharpoor  rang e ghazal  hai . bahut
bahut mubarakbad. HASAN
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2013, 05:48:21 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 11, 2013, 03:40:46 PM
Eak filbadeeh Ghazal

Ghareeb-e-Shahr ke ghar se sada ye aati hai
shikam ki aag ana ka shajar jalati hai

Jawaan beto'n ko ahesas muflisi ka na ho
wo budhi maa'n hai jo faako'n me muskurati hai

zara ye nannhi si chirya ka hausla dekho
jo jhoolti huee taheni pe ghar banati hai

hasan Sateesh-o-Waqif ke hi nahi pyaare
ye duniya sher hamare bhi gungunati hai

qadeer gham se taaluq hua hai ab aisa
khushi bhi ghar se mere aake laut jaati hai

Qadeertoopchi
ZABARDAST GHAZAL KAHI HAI AAPNE ,,UMDAA,
EK RAU KE SAATH ,
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2013, 06:17:20 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2013, 06:22:51 PM »
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Quote from: Ricky on June 11, 2013, 03:48:12 PM
Behad khoobsurat aur umda ashaar ..

Ek ghuzarish hai, koshish kariye ki mushkil alfazon ke maiyne bhi share karne.

eg.

Filbadeeh =  Something done quickly / in one attempt.

Azeezam Ricky Sahib , Aadab

Zamane Baad aap nazar aaye , Mauzrat mai us taraf khayal na kar saka jis jaanib aapne ishara kiya hai .. Aage se khayal rakhonga is baar darguzar kar den ,, Maine hukm baja laya hai ...edit kar diya hai dekh len ..ghazal apko pasand aaee jaankar acha laga dad ke liye azhd mashkoor o mumnoo hun ...khush rahe'n ..

Dua go

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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2013, 06:24:38 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah.......

Kya kehne Qadeer Bhai..Bahut Bahut Khoooooob..

Matla, Dusra, Teesra Aur Maqta....Lajawaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaab..

Har Ek Lafz Zindagi Ki Talk Haqeeqat Bayaan Kar Raha Hai...


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Bhai Khawish Sahab ,, Apki is haqeer ki kaavish pasand aaee aur kya chahiye is faqeer ko ..Apki mahubbaten mera sarmaya hain ....Allah ke huzoor dua go hun ke ye hamesha issi tarhan qayam o dayam rahe'n .....shukriyah ...dost

Apka bhai

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Quote from: laaiba on June 11, 2013, 04:26:14 PM
dilferab ghazal rahee ,............bohat c daad,...........

Mahutrama Laiba Sahibah ...Apse munkasirul mizaj adab shinaas, shukhan shinaas  wa adab nawaz hazraat ki dad tabaruk se kam nahi ...Allah apko umre hawwa ata kare ....Shukriyah

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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2013, 06:27:21 PM »
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Eak filbadeeh Ghazal

Ghareeb-e-Shahr ke ghar se sada ye aati hai
shikam ki aag ana ka shajar jalati hai

Jawaan beto'n ko ahesas muflisi ka na ho
wo budhi maa'n hai jo faako'n me muskurati hai
for this sher one rau is compulsary, today's quota is finished
zara ye nannhi si chirya ka hausla dekho
jo jhoolti huee taheni pe ghar banati hai
gr888888888888888888,sir
hasan Sateesh-o-Waqif ke hi nahi pyaare
ye duniya sher hamare bhi gungunati hai
ha ha ha ,sir you r gr888888888 2
qadeer gham se taaluq hua hai ab aisa
khushi bhi ghar se mere aake laut jaati hai

Qadeertoopchi

Meannings ---
Gareeb-e-shahr ( Poor person of the city ( Shahr Ka gareeb Insaan )
Sada  ( Voice - Awaz )
Shikam ( Stomach , Pet )
Ana    ( Ego, )
Shajar ( Tree - Paidh )
Faako'n ( Hungriness - Bhukhe Rahena )
Ta'aluq ( Relation , Rishta , Naata )


mindblowing ,sir
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2013, 06:29:43 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 11, 2013, 04:34:54 PM
Khubsurat aur dilchasp ghazal hai , qadeer junaid sahib.
Filbadeeh  mein bhi bharpoor  rang e ghazal  hai . bahut
bahut mubarakbad. HASAN

Mahutram F.H.Siddiuee Sahab, Apse Ahle fun jub mujh se mubtadi wa talib-e-ilm ke kalam yun kahete hain to yaqeen jaaniye hauslo'n ko pankh lag jaate hain .....Apke kalamo'n se istefadah karta raha hun sikhta raha hun ....bus yun samajh lijiye ke aapko parh ke sher kahena seekh rahe hain .....Apka tabsera Baais-e-faqr bhi aur baais-e-massarat.........Allah apko eak taweel umr se nawaze ..Shukriyah Mahutram

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ZABARDAST GHAZAL KAHI HAI AAPNE ,,UMDAA,
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Sahal Sahab ....Apki dad ne hausla Ata kiya Shukriyah ...Allah apko khush rakhe ..
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waah waah bahut khoob

Dr.Saini Sahab ,, Apse Qalamkaar ki dad mere nazdeek ziyada Ahemiyat rakhti hai ....Shukriyah
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mindblowing ,sir

Mahutram Marhoom Bahayat Sahab ,,Ghazal pe apka tabsera Mahubbat ka pata deta hai ....Aapki taherir se ye baat saaf ho jaati hai ke aap eak khushmizaj insaan hi nahi balke seene me bada hi hassas dil rakhte hain ....Apse adab nawaz hazraat hi hain jo shairi ko zindah rakhe hue hain warna to shairi daure hazir me dam tood deti ....Apne meri ghazal ko na balke dad o tahesin se nawaza hai balke isko javedan kar diya ....Apse ameeq fikr o daqeeq nazar rakhne wale hazraat ki dad sanad hai ...tamgha hai ..tabaruk hai , sarmaya hai ...Apne ghazal ko jila baksha uske liye mai apke huzoor sarapa sipaas hun ....jawaban shukriyah ada karne ke liye mere paas alfaaz nahi .......Allah aapko umre nuh ata kare...

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