Wo Budhi Maa'n hai jo Faako'n me Muskurati hai ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on June 11, 2013, 03:40:46 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 11, 2013, 06:39:01 PM »
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Qadeer sahab
bahut acchi ghazal rahi..
ham to aapki ghazal hi nahi ,, aapki likhi hui jubaan bhi dhyaan se padhte hai..
ye ashaar behad umda rahe

zara ye nannhi si chirya ka hausla dekho
jo jhoolti huee taheni pe ghar banati hai

hasan Sateesh-o-Waqif ke hi nahi pyaare
ye duniya sher hamare bhi gungunati hai
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«Reply #16 on: June 11, 2013, 06:44:03 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on June 11, 2013, 06:39:01 PM
Qadeer sahab
bahut acchi ghazal rahi..
ham to aapki ghazal hi nahi ,, aapki likhi hui jubaan bhi dhyaan se padhte hai..
ye ashaar behad umda rahe

zara ye nannhi si chirya ka hausla dekho
jo jhoolti huee taheni pe ghar banati hai

hasan Sateesh-o-Waqif ke hi nahi pyaare
ye duniya sher hamare bhi gungunati hai



Mahutram MKV Saheb ,,Aadab ...Bade din baad nazar aaye ...Khair tu hai ? Allah ki zaat se umid hai ke ba khair honge aap ... Khair Aap ne tinke me taaj zarre me aftaab qatre me samandar ka gumaan paida kar diya ....Meri zemmedari barha di Aapne ..bhai dili kaifiyat ko kagaz pe utaarta hun aap log mahubbaton se nawaz dete hain dil khush ho jaata hai ...fun Allah ki bahetreen niyamaton me se eak hai ....dua karen ke ye mujhe bhi muyassar aaye .....Apne faqeer ko nawaz diya bus dua hi de sakta hun ...khush rahen shad o abad rahen ...Shukriyah Bhai Shukriyah
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«Reply #17 on: June 11, 2013, 06:44:40 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Qadeer sahab.
Bahut umdaa ghazal hai hai aapne.Har aik ashaar khoobsurat hai.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #18 on: June 11, 2013, 07:17:44 PM »
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Waah Bahut hi Khoob likha aapne, hume yeh 3rd para bahut pasand aaya
"zara ye nannhi si chirya ka hausla dekho
jo jhoolti huee taheni pe ghar banati hai"

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«Reply #19 on: June 11, 2013, 07:41:59 PM »
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Qadeer saahab..
aapko bht din baad padha humne..
ek aur umdah aur haqeeki ghazal
zindgi ke ki rangon ko khud m sametti aapki ghazal

hum to bas shukriya kahenge aapko
aapne apni ghazal post kari

khush rahie
aate rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #20 on: June 11, 2013, 07:43:46 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 11, 2013, 03:40:46 PM
Eak filbadeeh Ghazal

Ghareeb-e-Shahr ke ghar se sada ye aati hai
shikam ki aag ana ka shajar jalati hai

Jawaan beto'n ko ahesas muflisi ka na ho
wo budhi maa'n hai jo faako'n me muskurati hai

zara ye nannhi si chirya ka hausla dekho
jo jhoolti huee taheni pe ghar banati hai

hasan Sateesh-o-Waqif ke hi nahi pyaare
ye duniya sher hamare bhi gungunati hai

qadeer gham se taaluq hua hai ab aisa
khushi bhi ghar se mere aake laut jaati hai

Qadeertoopchi

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Gareeb-e-shahr ( Poor person of the city ( Shahr Ka gareeb Insaan )
Sada  ( Voice - Awaz )
Shikam ( Stomach , Pet )
Ana    ( Ego, )
Shajar ( Tree - Paidh )
Faako'n ( Hungriness - Bhukhe Rahena )
Ta'aluq ( Relation , Rishta , Naata )
bahut hi behtreen qalam ............. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: June 11, 2013, 08:15:26 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut hi achchi ghazal kahi hai aapne qadeerji. sabhi ashaar khoob rahe. dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh ghazal. hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega.
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«Reply #22 on: June 12, 2013, 03:17:26 AM »
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Waah waah waah, behad khoob Qadeer saheb, bahut pasand aai mujhe ye ghazal.
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«Reply #23 on: June 12, 2013, 02:33:31 PM »
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Umdaa qadeer sahab.. behad umdaa aur khubsurat... Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: June 13, 2013, 02:19:38 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 11, 2013, 06:44:40 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Wah Qadeer sahab.
Bahut umdaa ghazal hai hai aapne.Har aik ashaar khoobsurat hai.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.

Sudhir Sahib ,,,Badi inayat aapki ...Shukriyah
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«Reply #25 on: June 13, 2013, 02:23:07 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 11, 2013, 03:40:46 PM
Eak filbadeeh Ghazal

Ghareeb-e-Shahr ke ghar se sada ye aati hai
shikam ki aag ana ka shajar jalati hai

Jawaan beto'n ko ahesas muflisi ka na ho
wo budhi maa'n hai jo faako'n me muskurati hai

zara ye nannhi si chirya ka hausla dekho
jo jhoolti huee taheni pe ghar banati hai

hasan Sateesh-o-Waqif ke hi nahi pyaare
ye duniya sher hamare bhi gungunati hai

qadeer gham se taaluq hua hai ab aisa
khushi bhi ghar se mere aake laut jaati hai

Qadeertoopchi

Meannings ---
Gareeb-e-shahr ( Poor person of the city ( Shahr Ka gareeb Insaan )
Sada  ( Voice - Awaz )
Shikam ( Stomach , Pet )
Ana    ( Ego, )
Shajar ( Tree - Paidh )
Faako'n ( Hungriness - Bhukhe Rahena )
Ta'aluq ( Relation , Rishta , Naata )


Wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob!!!
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on June 11, 2013, 06:27:21 PM

mindblowing ,sir

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«Reply #27 on: April 19, 2014, 09:40:25 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 11, 2013, 06:44:40 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Wah Qadeer sahab.
Bahut umdaa ghazal hai hai aapne.Har aik ashaar khoobsurat hai.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.


Sudhir Sahib ..Shukriyah
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