wo door jati meri manzil

by qayda on May 25, 2009, 01:14:17 PM
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wo meri manzil waha hai
par jitna kadam badhata hoon
wo utni door ho jaati hai

main thakta bhi to nahi hoon
kaash ki thak jaoon main
par wo haunsla dekar
na thakne ki dua de jaati hai

wo shayad imtihaan leti hai
apne deewane ka
shayad use pata nahi
kisi bindoo pe milengi sabhi dishayen
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2009, 01:23:09 PM »
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Quote from: qayda on May 25, 2009, 01:14:17 PM
wo meri manzil waha hai
par jitna kadam badhata hoon
wo utni door ho jaati hai

main thakta bhi to nahi hoon
kaash ki thak jaoon main
par wo haunsla dekar
na thakne ki dua de jaati hai

wo shayad imtihaan leti hai
apne deewane ka
shayad use pata nahi
kisi bindoo pe milengi sabhi dishayen


Wah shandar peshkash... Applause .. Qayda ji welcome to Yoindia
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2009, 01:38:59 PM »
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bahut bahut khub Qayda ji.bahut acha likha h aapne
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2009, 02:01:47 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on May 25, 2009, 01:38:59 PM
bahut bahut khub Qayda ji.bahut acha likha h aapne

shukriya jee...
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2009, 03:25:08 AM »
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very very nice qayda ji.
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