Wo Hamsafar Rahe Magar Judaa Judaa Chale

by vipul kumar on June 03, 2011, 06:18:39 PM
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Kuchh to mijaz-e-yaar ka yaaro pata chale.....
Kab tak huzuum-e-dard yu.n be_inteha chale......
[Huzuum=Group/Crowd]

Wo rah mukaam-e-mout se hokar guzarti hai,
Jis par se hoke aaj tum shahar-e-wafaa chale.....

Aaye the Ham Talaash Liye Zindgi Ki aur,
Hua yu.n k Tere Shahar me sab kuchh Ganva Chale......

Barbaad-e-Ishq Ho na Ho Jannat me Gaye Hai,
Chalte chalo Jidhar Bhi unke Naqsh-e-Paa Chale......
[Naqsh-e-paa=FootPrints]

Had Ho Gayi Judaaiyo.n ki ab To ae Khuda,
Wo Hamsafar Rahe Magar Judaa Judaa Chale......

Tere Shahar ki DilRuba Galiyo.n Me ham sanam,
Jitne kadam chale The Bahut Raayega.n Chale......
[Raayega.n=Useless]

Yu.n Chal Raha Hai Dil Bhi Raah-e-Visaal Par,
Jyo.n aalimo ke shahar me koi SirFiraa Chale......
[Aalim=Wise]

Auro.n ke ghar me sang Na fenko, Dua Karo,
Sabke Chaman me abke Aman ki Hawaa Chale.....

Asar Tha ye YaaRa Meri Maa.n Ki Duao.n ka,
Ham Gaye Jaha.n Bhi Saath Harf-e-Dua Chale.....!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2011, 06:32:54 PM »
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bht khubsurat ghazal sirji…
thanx for dis
aapki ghazlon ki baat sabse juda hoti hain
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«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2011, 07:22:22 PM »
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KHUB
Kuchh to mijaz-e-yaar ka yaaro pata chale.....
Kab tak huzuum-e-dard yu.n be_inteha chale......
[Huzuum=Group/Crowd]

Wo rah mukaam-e-mout se hokar guzarti hai,
Jis par se hoke aaj tum shahar-e-wafaa chale.....

Aaye the Ham Talaash Liye Zindgi Ki aur,
Hua yu.n k Tere Shahar me sab kuchh Ganva Chale......

Barbaad-e-Ishq Ho na Ho Jannat me Gaye Hai,
Chalte chalo Jidhar Bhi unke Naqsh-e-Paa Chale......
[Naqsh-e-paa=FootPrints]

Had Ho Gayi Judaaiyo.n ki ab To ae Khuda,
Wo Hamsafar Rahe Magar Judaa Judaa Chale......

Tere Shahar ki DilRuba Galiyo.n Me ham sanam,
Jitne kadam chale The Bahut Raayega.n Chale......
[Raayega.n=Useless]

Yu.n Chal Raha Hai Dil Bhi Raah-e-Visaal Par,
Jyo.n aalimo ke shahar me koi SirFiraa Chale......
[Aalim=Wise]

Auro.n ke ghar me sang Na fenko, Dua Karo,
Sabke Chaman me abke Aman ki Hawaa Chale.....

Asar Tha ye YaaRa Meri Maa.n Ki Duao.n ka,
Ham Gaye Jaha.n Bhi Saath Harf-e-Dua Chale.....!!

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«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2011, 05:45:37 AM »
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Bahut
bht khubsurat ghazal sirji…
thanx for dis
aapki ghazlon ki baat sabse juda hoti hain

Shukriya Nirala ji.....
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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2011, 05:46:49 AM »
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KHUB

Shukriya Manoj ji....
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2011, 09:03:00 AM »
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fantastic poetry vipul ji.
likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2011, 02:35:57 PM »
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Shukriya Suresh ji......
Sath banaye rakhiye......
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2011, 09:38:30 AM »
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Janab-e-mann vipul sahab ..aadab

ghazal achi hai mazameen bhi khob laaye hain app .. dili dad o mubarak khubool kare.N ... ik baath ye puchni thi ke apne Ik sher ka qaafiya Rayegaa.N banda hai ...usse dekh len .. aur eak tarkeeb samjhne se khaasir hon ...apne kaha hai ke Naqsh-e-paa chale ...naqshepa ka chalna abhi tak meri nazar se nahi guzra kya hi acha hoga ke app zara wazahat kar den ... eak baar phir dad khubool karen ..


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«Reply #8 on: June 22, 2011, 04:34:51 AM »
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Vipul ji,Achhi ghazal ke liye daad.FHS
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2011, 12:18:37 PM »
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Kuchh to mijaz-e-yaar ka yaaro pata chale.....
Kab tak huzuum-e-dard yu.n be_inteha chale......
[Huzuum=Group/Crowd]

Wo rah mukaam-e-mout se hokar guzarti hai,
Jis par se hoke aaj tum shahar-e-wafaa chale.....

Aaye the Ham Talaash Liye Zindgi Ki aur,
Hua yu.n k Tere Shahar me sab kuchh Ganva Chale......

Barbaad-e-Ishq Ho na Ho Jannat me Gaye Hai,
Chalte chalo Jidhar Bhi unke Naqsh-e-Paa Chale......
[Naqsh-e-paa=FootPrints]

Had Ho Gayi Judaaiyo.n ki ab To ae Khuda,
Wo Hamsafar Rahe Magar Judaa Judaa Chale......

Tere Shahar ki DilRuba Galiyo.n Me ham sanam,
Jitne kadam chale The Bahut Raayega.n Chale......
[Raayega.n=Useless]

Yu.n Chal Raha Hai Dil Bhi Raah-e-Visaal Par,
Jyo.n aalimo ke shahar me koi SirFiraa Chale......
[Aalim=Wise]

Auro.n ke ghar me sang Na fenko, Dua Karo,
Sabke Chaman me abke Aman ki Hawaa Chale.....

Asar Tha ye YaaRa Meri Maa.n Ki Duao.n ka,
Ham Gaye Jaha.n Bhi Saath Harf-e-Dua Chale.....!!



poori ghazal ke kya kahne. maqta bahut khoobsoorat hai



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vipul kumar
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«Reply #10 on: June 27, 2011, 04:58:27 PM »
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Shukriya Qadeer ji....
main koshish karunga.
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«Reply #11 on: June 27, 2011, 05:00:01 PM »
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Bahut bhaut Shukriya F.H. sahab aur Sheba ji....
Khush rahiye....
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