Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!:Ghazals

abdbundeli

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Raftah-raftah guzar rahaa huun main!
Log kahte hain, mar rahaa huun main!!

Kis liye arsh ab pareyshaan hai?
Zalzalon sey bikhar rahaa huun main!

Zulm baaqee hai koun jo ab ho?
Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

Wo hain ab koh-e-tuur par matmah;
Khaaiyon mein utar rahaa huun main!

Faasale badh rahe hain ab har suu!
Khaak kyaa raahbar rahaa huun main?

Hai, 'abd', mahfilon mein sannaataa;
Asl se bekhabar rahaa huun main!

- abd bundeli


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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2014, 12:56:21 PM »

KHOOB KAHA ADB JI Applause


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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2014, 01:12:22 PM »

bahut khoob


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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2014, 01:28:08 PM »

Quote from: Rajigujral on September 05, 2014, 12:56:21 PM

KHOOB KAHA ADB JI Applause

Shukriyah, Gujral ji!


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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2014, 01:28:49 PM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on September 05, 2014, 01:12:22 PM

bahut khoob

Shukriyah, Saini ji!


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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2014, 06:58:19 PM »


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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2014, 08:43:20 PM »

waah waah waah bahu achhaa kahaa hai Aapne, dheron daad.
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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2014, 08:23:39 AM »

bahut khub abdji....


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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2014, 06:59:42 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on September 05, 2014, 05:28:32 AM

Raftah-raftah guzar rahaa huun main!
Log kahte hain, mar rahaa huun main!!
guzarte waqt ke saath sabhi maut ke qareeb aate jaate hain !
Kis liye arsh ab pareyshaan hai?
Zalzalon sey bikhar rahaa huun main!
janab bundeli sahab iss sher pe main apne aqeede ke mutaabiq tanqeed karti hoon ....ke arsh per khuda ta'ala rahta hai aur wo bhalaa kyon pareshan hogaa woh hamaara rab hai ji aur ye zalzala aapne apne sher mein kis hawaale se likha hai ye to mujhe pata nahin per haan ye duniya mein iss tarah ke azaab apni hi karni ka phhal hai. aap ke iss sher ke reference mein main bahut se nazariyaat ke saath detail bayaan kar sakti hoon per main ne apni jaanib se ek nichod rakha hai shaayad aap ittefaaq rakhein !
Zulm baaqee hai koun jo ab ho?
Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!
=))iss paar chale aao ab zulm nahin karoo.n gi tum per!
Wo hain ab koh-e-tuur par matmah;
Khaaiyon mein utar rahaa huun main!
zindagi mein aage badhne kaa aaj insaan ne ye nazariya akhteyaar kar liya hai khud ko bulandi per le jaane ke liye kyaa kya naa haqeer kaam anjaam deta hai !
Faasale badh rahe hain ab har suu!
Khaak kyaa raahbar rahaa huun main?
wah wah wah apni khata kaun iss tarah tasleem karta hai doosron per ghaltiyaa.n thho deta hai insaan ....bahut khoob sher arz kiya hai huzoor aapne !
Hai, 'abd', mahfilon mein sannaataa;
Asl se bekhabar rahaa huun main!
wah wah wah bekhudi mein zindagi ka lutf lete hain !
- abd bundeli

bundeli sahab bahut haseen kalaam se ru-b-ru karwaya hai aapne sirf ek shr ko chhod kar !


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abdbundeli

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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2014, 07:17:50 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on September 06, 2014, 06:59:42 PM

bundeli sahab bahut haseen kalaam se ru-b-ru karwaya hai aapne sirf ek shr ko chhod kar !

Sheba ji, aap ke khyaalaat se ilm-o-khuluus kee khushboo aatee hai! Aapkaa kahnaa sahee hai, US ke 'aasmaan' kee bulandee aur hameshgee ko koyi 'pareshaanee' mein naheen daal saktaa! Par, jab main us sher ko likh rahaa thaa, tab meyrey khayaalaat mein 'tuufaanon' wa 'sailaabon' kaa qahar haabee thaaa! Isliye waisaa likhaa!
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, ki, aapne har sher ko padhaa, wa 'qaabil nuktahcheenee' kee!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2014, 07:18:34 AM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 05, 2014, 06:58:19 PM

Shukriyah, bhai!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2014, 07:19:32 AM »

Quote from: surindarn on September 05, 2014, 08:43:20 PM

waah waah waah bahu achhaa kahaa hai Aapne, dheron daad.
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Shukriyah, bhai! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Wo idhar hain; udhar rahaa huun main!

«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2014, 07:20:17 AM »

Quote from: mann.mann on September 06, 2014, 08:23:39 AM

bahut khub abdji....

Shukriyah, Mann ji!


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