Wo jaa chukaa hai: aaj gayaa ho, ki, kal gayaa!

by abdbundeli on February 02, 2011, 04:03:39 PM
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Aik nayi gazal likh rahaa huun! Pahley chaar asha'ar mulaahzaa farmaayen!

Wo jaa chukaa hai: aaj gayaa ho, ki, kal gayaa!
Aatish sey waasitah thaa: haqeeqat hai: jal gayaa!!

Jiskey qareeb aaney ko hai zindagee beytaab:
Wo aik jhakoraa thaa hawaa kaa: nikal gayaa!

Us daastaan-e-yaar kaa ab zikr kyaa karuun:
Jo mom thaa shamaa kaa: jalaa, yaa pighal gayaa!

Barbaadiyon key tohafey mujhko miley hain roz!
Wo main nahin thaa; doosaraa hai, jo sambhal gayaa!!


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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2011, 04:13:44 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Abd jee..
Bahaut khoob..
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2011, 05:52:17 PM »
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Abd Sahaab Aadaab!

Kalaam ki shuruaat toH achchi hai ..
Par matle meiN aur bhi tabdili kariye..

Duja sher behad umdaa hai daad ...
Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         



   

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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2011, 06:24:03 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 02, 2011, 04:03:39 PM
Aik nayi gazal likh rahaa huun! Do asha'ar mulaahzaa farmaayen!

Wo jaa chukaa hai: aaj gayaa ho, ki, kal gayaa!
Aatish sey waasitah thaa: haqeeqat hai: jal gayaa!!

Jiskey qareeb aaney ko hai zindagee beytaab:
Wo aik jhakoraa thaa hawaa kaa: nikal gayaa!

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Bahut Khoob ..... Bundeli Sahab ! dil se daad !!!!!!!!!!

isse zaroor puraa ki jiye ..... !
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2011, 06:58:56 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Abd Ji...
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2011, 03:22:25 AM »
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bahut hi khubsurat aur real ashaar wit mohabbat ka ehsaas.
abd ji hum aapke fan hain ji--
like ur shayri very much
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«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2011, 05:03:12 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 02, 2011, 04:13:44 PM
Bahaut khoob Abd jee..
Bahaut khoob..


Bahut-bahut shukriyah Rahim ji!

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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2011, 05:09:23 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 02, 2011, 05:52:17 PM
Abd Sahaab Aadaab!

Kalaam ki shuruaat toH achchi hai ..
Par matle meiN aur bhi tabdili kariye..

Duja sher behad umdaa hai daad ...
Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         



   

Bahut-bahut shukriyah ParwaaZ ji!
Salaah key liye shukraguzaar hun! Ummeed hai, ki, aap pooree gazal padhhtey waqt, aik baar dubaarah matle ko padhhney ki takleef gawaarah kareyngey!
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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2011, 05:10:57 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on February 02, 2011, 06:24:03 PM
Bahut Khoob ..... Bundeli Sahab ! dil se daad !!!!!!!!!!

isse zaroor puraa ki jiye ..... !

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Anshumali ji! !

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Quote from: HUM_DUM on February 02, 2011, 06:58:56 PM
Bohat Khoob Abd Ji...

Bahut-bahut shukriyah HUM_DUM ji!

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Quote from: nirala on February 03, 2011, 03:22:25 AM
bahut hi khubsurat aur real ashaar wit mohabbat ka ehsaas.
abd ji hum aapke fan hain ji--
like ur shayri very much

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Nirala ji!

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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2011, 05:46:08 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 02, 2011, 04:03:39 PM
Aik nayi gazal likh rahaa huun! Pahley chaar asha'ar mulaahzaa farmaayen!

Wo jaa chukaa hai: aaj gayaa ho, ki, kal gayaa!
Aatish sey waasitah thaa: haqeeqat hai: jal gayaa!!

Jiskey qareeb aaney ko hai zindagee beytaab:
Wo aik jhakoraa thaa hawaa kaa: nikal gayaa!

Us daastaan-e-yaar kaa ab zikr kyaa karuun:
Jo mom thaa shamaa kaa: jalaa, yaa pighal gayaa!

Barbaadiyon key tohafey mujhko miley hain roz!
Wo main nahin thaa; doosaraa hai, jo sambhal gayaa!!


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abd ji

itni sundar peshkash hamse shayer karne ka shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2011, 03:12:17 PM »
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Quote from: Rahi2001 on February 03, 2011, 05:46:08 AM
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abd ji

itni sundar peshkash hamse shayer karne ka shukriya


Shukriyah 'Rahi2001' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #13 on: February 06, 2011, 12:14:24 PM »
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Bahut Khub ABD Ji
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 06, 2011, 12:14:24 PM
Bahut Khub ABD Ji

Shukriyah Rishi ji!

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