Wo jaa chukaa hai: aaj gayaa ho, ki, kal gayaa!

by abdbundeli on February 02, 2011, 04:03:39 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 13, 2011, 08:52:21 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 02, 2011, 04:03:39 PM
Aik nayi gazal likh rahaa huun! Pahley chaar asha'ar mulaahzaa farmaayen!

Wo jaa chukaa hai: aaj gayaa ho, ki, kal gayaa!
Aatish sey waasitah thaa: haqeeqat hai: jal gayaa!!

Jiskey qareeb aaney ko hai zindagee beytaab:
Wo aik jhakoraa thaa hawaa kaa: nikal gayaa!

Us daastaan-e-yaar kaa ab zikr kyaa karuun:
Jo mom thaa shamaa kaa: jalaa, yaa pighal gayaa!

Barbaadiyon key tohafey mujhko miley hain roz!
Wo main nahin thaa; doosaraa hai, jo sambhal gayaa!!


                              - abd bundeli



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«Reply #16 on: February 14, 2011, 03:53:48 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on February 13, 2011, 08:52:21 PM
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Shukriyah 'khamosh_aawaaz' ji!

         - abd bundeli!
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«Reply #17 on: February 14, 2011, 06:06:04 AM »
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wah wah abdji.... kay kahu... gajab kamal bauht khub.... chhu liya aapne...

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«Reply #18 on: February 14, 2011, 07:52:29 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on February 14, 2011, 06:06:04 AM
wah wah abdji.... kay kahu... gajab kamal bauht khub.... chhu liya aapne...

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Bahut-bahut shukriyah 'manjum' ji!

              - abd bundeli
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