Wo kahte hai Yaar Nishana theek nahi

by vipul kumar on July 16, 2011, 06:42:32 PM
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Sabko dil kaa haal sunaana Theek Nahi......
Maano meri baat Zamaana Theek nahi.....

Apnaa to Janmo ka Naata hai Jaanam,
Logo.n ki Baato.n me aana Theek nahi.....

izzat se Khaao to Rotii Rotii hai,
zillat ka ye aab-o-Daana Theek nahi....
[Aab-o-daana=Water and food]

Lapte.n tere ghar tak bhi to aayegi,
Mere ghar ko aag lagana Theek nahi.....

usse kaho sajde NaMahram Hote hai.n,
waqt-e-ibaadat yaad me aana Thik nahi.....
[NaMahram=impure]

dil ko mere zakhmo se chhalni karke,
Wo kahte hai Yaar Nishana theek nahi.....

Jitna peeyo utni pyaas badhata hai,
Saaki tera Ye Paimaana Theek Nahi.....

Har ik Dard ghum-e-JaaNa se halka hai,
Duniya waalo.n ka ghumkhaana theek nahi....
[Ghumkhaana=house of sorrows]

chhoDo YaaRa Dard ke qisse, USKI baat,
Kalam ki nok pe Jaan jalana theek nahi.....!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2011, 07:35:29 PM »
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Waah Vipul ji...Dil chhu liya aapne...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2011, 07:38:16 PM »
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Vipul Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab waah kia kahne aapke... Dil shaad kar diyaa aapne humara Usual Smile
Behad umdaa aur behad asardaar kalaam bazm ko di hai aapne janab ... Usual Smile

Bus humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye, Usual Smile        




Sabko dil kaa haal sunaana Theek Nahi......
Maano meri baat Zamaana Theek nahi.....

Badi sidhi par behad khoob baat kahi hai
aapne janab daad daad daad Usual Smile          


Apnaa to Janmo ka Naata hai Jaanam,
Logo.n ki Baato.n me aana Theek nahi.....

Waah janab waah bahut khoob Usual Smile
Badi achchi shayari ki hai daad Usual Smile          


izzat se Khaao to Rotii Rotii hai,
zillat ka ye aab-o-Daana Theek nahi....
[Aab-o-daana=Water and food]

Behad khoob daad Usual Smile          

Lapte.n tere ghar tak bhi to aayegi,
Mere ghar ko aag lagana Theek nahi.....

Achcha hai janab... Usual Smile          

usse kaho sajde NaMahram Hote hai.n,
waqt-e-ibaadat yaad me aana Thik nahi.....
[NaMahram=impure]

Masha Allah janab kia kahne aapke...
behad khoob bahut umdaa daad daad daad Usual Smile          


dil ko mere zakhmo se chhalni karke,
Wo kahte hai Yaar Nishana theek nahi.....

Kia kahne janab bahut khoob daad Usual Smile          

Jitna peeyo utni pyaas badhata hai,
Saaki tera Ye Paimaana Theek Nahi.....

Jee bilkul bhi theek nahi... Usual Smile          

Har ik Dard ghum-e-JaaNa se halka hai,
Duniya waalo.n ka ghumkhaana theek nahi....
[Ghumkhaana=house of sorrows]

Achcha hai janab ... Usual Smile          

chhoDo YaaRa Dard ke qisse, USKI baat,
Kalam ki nok pe Jaan jalana theek nahi.....!!


Waah janab waah kia umdaa maqta kaha hai daad Usual Smile
Bahut khoob Usual Smile          



Janab aapki tarif meiN hum kia kaheN bus lafz nahi milte..
Umdaa ahsaas O khayaaloN ke is hazseen guldaste ke liye hum
aapke tahe dil se shukra guzaar haiN... Usual Smile

Hum FB par waqt nahi de pate bus aap thoda yahaaN waqt deN
deN to aisi umdaa kalaamoN se hum sab ka bhi dil shaad raheNga..

Aate rahiye.. Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          

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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2011, 07:39:52 PM »
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kya khub likha vipul ji aapne.. Bahut badhiya.. Keep it up..
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2011, 02:58:16 AM »
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Waah Vipul ji...Dil chhu liya aapne...!!!

Bahut bahut shukriya Gyan Prakash ji.....
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2011, 03:00:48 AM »
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Wah! Vipul Ji bahut umda peshkash hai aap ki
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2011, 03:03:03 AM »
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@Parwaaz sahab......

Shukriya ghazal ko itni achhi tarah dekhne aur likhne ke liye....
bas aap sab ki mohabbate.n hai janaab....
Aur waise main yaha.n par thoda hi waqt de pata hu par post to kar hi diya karunga. Lekin FB par bhi sher-o-sukhan kaafi achha chal raha hai. waqt mile to aaiyega. aaj se hi 'Bazm-e-sukhan' me mushaira shuru kiya hai. Aap jaise kalamnawaaz dosto ki jarurat hai waha.n.....
Aur maafi chahta hu k main aapki aur baaki dosto ke kalaam kam hi padh pata hu, jo bhi thoda bahut waqt milta hai wo apne hi group management or likhne padhne me chala jaata hai.... Please dont mind.
Ek baar fir se shukriya aapki inaayato.n ke liye......Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2011, 03:03:42 AM »
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Shukriya GUMboy ji......
Aate rahiye.... khush rahiye......
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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2011, 03:04:28 AM »
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@ Rajesh Harish ji, Shukriya is kalaam ko waqt dene ke liye......
Khush rahe.n...
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