Wo Kamar Kee Lachak Hai Teree / वो कमर की लचक है तेरी....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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बिजलियों सी चमक है तेरी
और गुलों सी महक है तेरी

मेरे ख़्वाबों ख़यालों में बस
चूड़ियों की खनक है तेरी

शाख़े-गुल का हो जिस पर गुमां
वो कमर की लचक है तेरी

तेरे दिल में मेरा दर्द है
मेरे दिल में कसक है तेरी

सच तो ये है मुझे ऐ 'रक़ीब'
अब रक़ाबत पे शक है तेरी

bijliyoN see chamak hai teree
aur guloN see mahak hai teree

mere khwaboN khayaaloN meN bas
choodiyoN ki khanak hai teree

shaakh-e-gul ka ho jis pe gumaaN
wo kamar kee lachak hai teree

tere dil meN mera dard hai
mere dil meN kasak hai teree

sach to ye hai mujhe aai 'Raqeeb'
ab raqaabat pe shaq hai teree

--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2013, 09:21:55 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on October 12, 2013, 09:07:58 PM

बिजलियों सी चमक है तेरी
और गुलों सी महक है तेरी

मेरे ख़्वाबों ख़यालों में बस
चूड़ियों की खनक है तेरी

शाख़े-गुल का हो जिस पर गुमां
वो कमर की लचक है तेरी

तेरे दिल में मेरा दर्द है
मेरे दिल में कसक है तेरी

सच तो ये है मुझे ऐ 'रक़ीब'
अब रक़ाबत पे शक है तेरी

bijliyoN see chamak hai teree
aur guloN see mahak hai teree

mere khwaboN khayaaloN meN bas
choodiyoN ki khanak hai teree

shaakh-e-gul ka ho jis pe gumaaN
wo kamar kee lachak hai teree

tere dil meN mera dard hai
mere dil meN kasak hai teree

sach to ye hai mujhe aai 'Raqeeb'
ab raqaabat pe shaq hai teree

--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2013, 09:33:37 PM »
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bahut khoob. Kya Baat.
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2013, 09:51:45 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah sir, kaafi dinoN baad aae aur hamesha ki tarah asardaar ghazal le kar. DheroN daad aur ek Rau.
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2013, 10:10:45 PM »
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Waah bahaut khoob ghazal Satish ji ...aur maqta to kya kehne...daad
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2013, 10:18:00 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob raqeeb bhai bahut dino ke baad milaa kuchh padhne ko
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2013, 10:35:20 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on October 12, 2013, 09:07:58 PM

बिजलियों सी चमक है तेरी
और गुलों सी महक है तेरी

मेरे ख़्वाबों ख़यालों में बस
चूड़ियों की खनक है तेरी

शाख़े-गुल का हो जिस पर गुमां
वो कमर की लचक है तेरी

तेरे दिल में मेरा दर्द है
मेरे दिल में कसक है तेरी

सच तो ये है मुझे ऐ 'रक़ीब'
अब रक़ाबत पे शक है तेरी

bijliyoN see chamak hai teree
aur guloN see mahak hai teree

mere khwaboN khayaaloN meN bas
choodiyoN ki khanak hai teree

shaakh-e-gul ka ho jis pe gumaaN
wo kamar kee lachak hai teree

tere dil meN mera dard hai
mere dil meN kasak hai teree

sach to ye hai mujhe aai 'Raqeeb'
ab raqaabat pe shaq hai teree

--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
Jai shri krishna Sir
bahut khushi hui aapko bazm men vapas dekhkar.
aur nihayat umda kalaam ke saath aayen hain aap
dil khush ho gaya
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2013, 10:47:15 PM »
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माशा-अल्लाहा बहुत उम्दा.!!
 सतीश जी.
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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2013, 11:08:43 PM »
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Tere dil me mera dard hai
Mere dil me kasak hai teri

Khubsurat ghazal .
Dheron mubarakbad , satish ji .
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«Reply #9 on: October 13, 2013, 02:44:11 AM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab...!

Janab bade dinoN bad haazri dii hai aapne, Sab khairiyat toH hai...
Badi shokh aur khoobsurat gazal kahi hai janab, behad khoobsurat aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ko kalam baNd kiya hai aapne...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN shirkat karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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Waah waah waah.. badi hi pyaari ghazal se nawaza hai aapne.. dili daaaaaaad qubool kijiyega..
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Nazre inayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya ....Adil Bechain sahib.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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Bahut shukriya....dksaxenabsnl Ji.....Raqeeb
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«Reply #13 on: October 14, 2013, 02:58:37 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on October 12, 2013, 09:07:58 PM

बिजलियों सी चमक है तेरी
और गुलों सी महक है तेरी
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileyallah ne aisa banaya hai logo.n ne ghazal mein sajaayaa hai
मेरे ख़्वाबों ख़यालों में बस
चूड़ियों की खनक है तेरी
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley kab sunn li ji meri choodiyo.n ki khanak. lagtaa hai tumhaare khawaab mein baj baj kar hi meri saari choodiyaan toot gai hain Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
शाख़े-गुल का हो जिस पर गुमां
वो कमर की लचक है तेरी
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hardhudd ho gai
तेरे दिल में मेरा दर्द है
मेरे दिल में कसक है तेरी
to apna apna dard aur kasak exchange kar lo na ...phir na tumhein pareshani aur na mujhe diqqat Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
सच तो ये है मुझे ऐ 'रक़ीब'
अब रक़ाबत पे शक है तेरी
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))lagta hai meri jaasoosi kar te ho
bijliyoN see chamak hai teree
aur guloN see mahak hai teree

mere khwaboN khayaaloN meN bas
choodiyoN ki khanak hai teree

shaakh-e-gul ka ho jis pe gumaaN
wo kamar kee lachak hai teree

tere dil meN mera dard hai
mere dil meN kasak hai teree

sach to ye hai mujhe aai 'Raqeeb'
ab raqaabat pe shaq hai teree

--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

satish ji aap aaye aur ek acha kalaam laaye icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #14 on: October 14, 2013, 03:02:31 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on October 12, 2013, 09:07:58 PM

बिजलियों सी चमक है तेरी
और गुलों सी महक है तेरी

मेरे ख़्वाबों ख़यालों में बस
चूड़ियों की खनक है तेरी

शाख़े-गुल का हो जिस पर गुमां
वो कमर की लचक है तेरी

तेरे दिल में मेरा दर्द है
मेरे दिल में कसक है तेरी

सच तो ये है मुझे ऐ 'रक़ीब'
अब रक़ाबत पे शक है तेरी

bijliyoN see chamak hai teree
aur guloN see mahak hai teree

mere khwaboN khayaaloN meN bas
choodiyoN ki khanak hai teree

shaakh-e-gul ka ho jis pe gumaaN
wo kamar kee lachak hai teree

tere dil meN mera dard hai
mere dil meN kasak hai teree

sach to ye hai mujhe aai 'Raqeeb'
ab raqaabat pe shaq hai teree

--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Bahut Bahut Khooob Satish Jee

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