Wo Kamar Kee Lachak Hai Teree / वो कमर की लचक है तेरी....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #15 on: October 14, 2013, 09:47:01 AM »
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«Reply #16 on: October 15, 2013, 07:40:36 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah sir, kaafi dinoN baad aae aur hamesha ki tarah asardaar ghazal le kar. DheroN daad aur ek Rau.

Bahut shukriya....Iftakhar Ahmad Sahib....Raqeeb
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«Reply #17 on: October 15, 2013, 08:08:42 PM »
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Waah bahaut khoob ghazal Satish ji ...aur maqta to kya kehne...daad

Nazre inaayat aur Hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....Zarraa JI... Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #18 on: October 15, 2013, 08:18:21 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob raqeeb bhai bahut dino ke baad milaa kuchh padhne ko

Nazre inaayat aur Hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....Saini Sahib JI....... Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #19 on: October 15, 2013, 08:26:02 PM »
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बिजलियों सी चमक है तेरी
और गुलों सी महक है तेरी

मेरे ख़्वाबों ख़यालों में बस
चूड़ियों की खनक है तेरी

शाख़े-गुल का हो जिस पर गुमां
वो कमर की लचक है तेरी

तेरे दिल में मेरा दर्द है
मेरे दिल में कसक है तेरी

सच तो ये है मुझे ऐ 'रक़ीब'
अब रक़ाबत पे शक है तेरी

bijliyoN see chamak hai teree
aur guloN see mahak hai teree

mere khwaboN khayaaloN meN bas
choodiyoN ki khanak hai teree

shaakh-e-gul ka ho jis pe gumaaN
wo kamar kee lachak hai teree

tere dil meN mera dard hai
mere dil meN kasak hai teree

sach to ye hai mujhe aai 'Raqeeb'
ab raqaabat pe shaq hai teree

--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


behad roomani, muhabbat se bhara kalaam hai aapka sir... meri janaib se hazaaron daad..

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«Reply #20 on: October 18, 2013, 02:13:56 PM »
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Jai shri krishna Sir
bahut khushi hui aapko bazm men vapas dekhkar.
aur nihayat umda kalaam ke saath aayen hain aap
dil khush ho gaya

Nazre inaayat aur Hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....mkv  JI....... Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #21 on: October 18, 2013, 06:01:44 PM »
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माशा-अल्लाहा बहुत उम्दा.!!
 सतीश जी.


Nazre inaayat aur Hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya...Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #22 on: October 18, 2013, 06:46:52 PM »
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Tere dil me mera dard hai
Mere dil me kasak hai teri

Khubsurat ghazal .
Dheron mubarakbad , satish ji .

Hasan Sahib,
            Aadaab!

Nazre inaayat aur Hausala afzai ka bahut
shukriya...

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«Reply #23 on: October 18, 2013, 07:36:22 PM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab...!

Janab bade dinoN bad haazri dii hai aapne, Sab khairiyat toH hai...
Badi shokh aur khoobsurat gazal kahi hai janab, behad khoobsurat aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal ko kalam baNd kiya hai aapne...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN shirkat karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...




Nazre inaayat aur Hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya...ParwaaZ Ji....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #24 on: October 21, 2013, 06:48:40 PM »
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Waah waah waah.. badi hi pyaari ghazal se nawaza hai aapne.. dili daaaaaaad qubool kijiyega..

Nazre inaayat aur Hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya...aqsh ji Ji....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #25 on: October 21, 2013, 07:46:18 PM »
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satish ji aap aaye aur ek acha kalaam laaye icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Nazre inaayat aur Hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya...aapke jawab ka andaaz yaqeenan bahut haseen hai...Mohtarma Sheba Sahiba....Raqeeb Lucknowi

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«Reply #26 on: October 22, 2013, 01:34:07 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Satish Jee

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«Reply #27 on: October 23, 2013, 02:16:55 PM »
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«Reply #28 on: November 08, 2013, 08:51:55 PM »
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behad roomani, muhabbat se bhara kalaam hai aapka sir... meri janaib se hazaaron daad..

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Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....Sidra04 Ji....Raqeeb Lucknowi

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