"Wo Meri Nadiya Hai"

by aaina on September 08, 2009, 02:31:12 PM
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Sama'ato.n ka ye silsila hai
ajab sa dil mai ye gul khila hai

Dikhaii de na door tak jo
usi se aakar ye dil mila hai

Jo suraj the shaam hote dhle
aadheri raato se ladta diya hai

Meri roshni aaftaab se bhetr
safar ne jugnu jo mujko dia hai

Wo aakar mujhse kyu.n na mile
mein sagar uska, wo meri nadiya hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2009, 05:49:54 PM »
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Bohot umda, Aaina Ji
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2009, 11:28:08 PM »
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Wah ... bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne dear Aslam  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2009, 12:48:36 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on September 08, 2009, 02:31:12 PM
Sama'ato.n ka ye silsila hai
ajab sa dil mai ye gul khila hai



wha wah kya baat hai aaina ji
mashaallah lajawab hai
Dikhaii de na door tak jo
usi se aakar ye dil mila hai

Jo suraj the shaam hote dhle
aadheri raato se ladta diya hai

Meri roshni aaftaab se bhetr
safar ne jugnu jo mujko dia hai

Wo aakar mujhse kyu.n na mile
mein sagar uska, wo meri nadiya hai
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«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2009, 02:18:27 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Aaina ji beautiful gazal mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2009, 06:11:10 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Aslam Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2009, 06:45:25 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on September 08, 2009, 02:31:12 PM
Sama'ato.n ka ye silsila hai
ajab sa dil mai ye gul khila hai

Dikhaii de na door tak jo
usi se aakar ye dil mila hai

Jo suraj the shaam hote dhle
aadheri raato se ladta diya hai

Meri roshni aaftaab se bhetr
safar ne jugnu jo mujko dia hai

Wo aakar mujhse kyu.n na mile
mein sagar uska, wo meri nadiya hai


wah kya baat hai  aaina ji.........

SARD HAWAAON KA SILSILA HAI,
AAJ FIR USKA ARMAAN HUAA HAI.

YUN TOH KABHI DIKHAI DETI NAHIN HAI DOOR TAK,
LAGTA HAI AAS-PAAS HAI,YUN MEHSUS HUAA HAI.

ROJ HAI AANA USKA,
MUJH MEIN SAMAANA USKA.

KITNE BHI TOOFAN AAEY,YAAN SURAJ TAPADE USKO,
WO AAEYGI YAHIN,AUR KYUN NA AAEY.

MEIN JO USKA SAAGAR HUN,
WO MERI NADIYA HAI.
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«Reply #7 on: September 09, 2009, 07:25:07 AM »
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Aainaji badi achhi gazal hai aapki.... Applause Applause Applause

Har sarita ko ek-n-ek din tou sagar mai milna hai
Ho gurur usko,kabhi-n kabhi dharatal par aana hai
Ho kitni bhi uchayi par,niche ki oor he behna hai
Main sagar hu uska,mere aagosh mai aakar rehna hai

Quote from: aaina on September 08, 2009, 02:31:12 PM
Sama'ato.n ka ye silsila hai
ajab sa dil mai ye gul khila hai

Dikhaii de na door tak jo
usi se aakar ye dil mila hai

Jo suraj the shaam hote dhle
aadheri raato se ladta diya hai

Meri roshni aaftaab se bhetr
safar ne jugnu jo mujko dia hai

Wo aakar mujhse kyu.n na mile
mein sagar uska, wo meri nadiya hai
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«Reply #8 on: September 09, 2009, 08:25:29 AM »
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Subhan Allah Aslam Sahab Kya Beshqimti Kalaam Hai ,3rd ashar ka dosra misra ,ufffff, kya tarif karen uss misre ki pori ghazal pe savar hai janab , bahoth umda , dil se dad qubool karen !!

Uske Shaher Ki hawa-en- bhi ussi ki tarha Qadeer
Mai Charaq Jalata hon wo Bhuja deti hain !!

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2009, 09:22:17 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob beautiful lines Qadeer ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2009, 10:47:57 AM »
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Tujhse Na Miloon To Kidhar Jaaoonga,.
Tujhme Milkar Main Bikhar Jaaoonga,.

Meri Pehchaan Hai Tere Hone Se,.
Tera Hi Aks Chordoonga Jidhar Jaaoonga,.

Yun Na Ghabraa Mere Aane Se Meri Jaan,.
Main To Hawaa Hoon, Choo Ke Guzar Jaaoonga,.
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2009, 04:08:16 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on September 08, 2009, 02:31:12 PM
Sama'ato.n ka ye silsila hai
ajab sa dil mai ye gul khila hai

Dikhaii de na door tak jo
usi se aakar ye dil mila hai

Jo suraj the shaam hote dhle
aadheri raato se ladta diya hai

Meri roshni aaftaab se bhetr
safar ne jugnu jo mujko dia hai

Wo aakar mujhse kyu.n na mile
mein sagar uska, wo meri nadiya hai



Mashallah !! Bohot Khoobsurat Aslam Ji...bohot pyaari ghazal kahi hai aapne.....Bohot bohot khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2009, 05:35:24 PM »
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Bahut khoooooob Aslam ji....bahut khubsurat likha hai aapne
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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2009, 09:38:21 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Cara ji,Anaam ji,Qadeer ji Azeem bhai wonderful lines. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2009, 11:26:57 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on September 08, 2009, 02:31:12 PM
Sama'ato.n ka ye silsila hai
ajab sa dil mai ye gul khila hai

Dikhaii de na door tak jo
usi se aakar ye dil mila hai

Jo suraj the shaam hote dhle
aadheri raato se ladta diya hai

Meri roshni aaftaab se bhetr
safar ne jugnu jo mujko dia hai

Wo aakar mujhse kyu.n na mile
mein sagar uska, wo meri nadiya hai



Wah wah wah wah...its amezing bohat achi ghazal hai AB sach me its lovely... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
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