"Wo Meri Nadiya Hai"

by aaina on September 08, 2009, 02:31:12 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 09, 2009, 11:28:52 PM »
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SARD HAWAAON KA SILSILA HAI,
AAJ FIR USKA ARMAAN HUAA HAI.

YUN TOH KABHI DIKHAI DETI NAHIN HAI DOOR TAK,
LAGTA HAI AAS-PAAS HAI,YUN MEHSUS HUAA HAI.

ROJ HAI AANA USKA,
MUJH MEIN SAMAANA USKA.

KITNE BHI TOOFAN AAEY,YAAN SURAJ TAPADE USKO,
WO AAEYGI YAHIN,AUR KYUN NA AAEY.

MEIN JO USKA SAAGAR HUN,
WO MERI NADIYA HAI.
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Wowwww bohat ache care ji bohat hi khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
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aaina
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«Reply #16 on: September 13, 2009, 12:38:38 AM »
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Bohot umda, Aaina Ji


thnxxx so much shayara ji
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aaina
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«Reply #17 on: September 13, 2009, 12:39:31 AM »
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Wah ... bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne dear Aslam  Applause











thnxxxxxx alot roja dear
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aaina
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«Reply #18 on: September 13, 2009, 12:40:46 AM »
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wha wah kya baat hai aaina ji
mashaallah lajawab hai





bhut bhut shukriya ehsaas chahat ka
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«Reply #19 on: September 13, 2009, 12:46:36 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Aaina ji beautiful gazal mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


thnxxxx so much madhu ji......................
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«Reply #20 on: September 13, 2009, 12:47:35 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Aslam Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


dear khwaish bhut bhut shukriya
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«Reply #21 on: September 13, 2009, 12:49:17 AM »
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wah kya baat hai  aaina ji.........

SARD HAWAAON KA SILSILA HAI,
AAJ FIR USKA ARMAAN HUAA HAI.

YUN TOH KABHI DIKHAI DETI NAHIN HAI DOOR TAK,
LAGTA HAI AAS-PAAS HAI,YUN MEHSUS HUAA HAI.

ROJ HAI AANA USKA,
MUJH MEIN SAMAANA USKA.

KITNE BHI TOOFAN AAEY,YAAN SURAJ TAPADE USKO,
WO AAEYGI YAHIN,AUR KYUN NA AAEY.

MEIN JO USKA SAAGAR HUN,
WO MERI NADIYA HAI.


shukriya cara ji thnxx so much for ur reply
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aaina
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«Reply #22 on: September 13, 2009, 12:53:29 AM »
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Aainaji badi achhi gazal hai aapki.... Applause Applause Applause

Har sarita ko ek-n-ek din tou sagar mai milna hai
Ho gurur usko,kabhi-n kabhi dharatal par aana hai
Ho kitni bhi uchayi par,niche ki oor he behna hai
Main sagar hu uska,mere aagosh mai aakar rehna hai



bhut bhut shukriya anaam ji bhut acha likha hai aapne bhi thnxxxx
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aaina
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«Reply #23 on: September 13, 2009, 12:58:36 AM »
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Subhan Allah Aslam Sahab Kya Beshqimti Kalaam Hai ,3rd ashar ka dosra misra ,ufffff, kya tarif karen uss misre ki pori ghazal pe savar hai janab , bahoth umda , dil se dad qubool karen !!

Uske Shaher Ki hawa-en- bhi ussi ki tarha Qadeer
Mai Charaq Jalata hon wo Bhuja deti hain !!

Qadeertoopchi




kya baat hai qadeer bhai bhut hi khoob sher maza aa gaya pad kar,
aapki mohabbte.n hain qadeer bhai jo aap in alfaazo.n se nawaazte hain aapko achi lagi mehna wasool you.n hi sath daite rhahiye
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«Reply #24 on: September 13, 2009, 12:59:48 AM »
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Tujhse Na Miloon To Kidhar Jaaoonga,.
Tujhme Milkar Main Bikhar Jaaoonga,.

Meri Pehchaan Hai Tere Hone Se,.
Tera Hi Aks Chordoonga Jidhar Jaaoonga,.

Yun Na Ghabraa Mere Aane Se Meri Jaan,.
Main To Hawaa Hoon, Choo Ke Guzar Jaaoonga,.



waah waah kya baat hai azeem bhut khoob mashallah
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«Reply #25 on: September 13, 2009, 01:01:16 AM »
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Bahut khoooooob Aslam ji....bahut khubsurat likha hai aapne
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thnxx so much nikhar ji hosla afzaai ka bhut bhut shukriya
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«Reply #26 on: September 13, 2009, 01:03:29 AM »
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Wah wah wah wah...its amezing bohat achi ghazal hai AB sach me its lovely... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley



thnxxxxxxxx so much K4P thnxxxxxxxxxxx
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«Reply #27 on: September 13, 2009, 01:06:58 AM »
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Mashallah !! Bohot Khoobsurat Aslam Ji...bohot pyaari ghazal kahi hai aapne.....Bohot bohot khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



thnxxxxxxx so much for ur appreciation talat
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«Reply #28 on: September 13, 2009, 04:11:37 AM »
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waah waah kya baat hai azeem bhut khoob mashallah

Shukriya Bhai,.
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«Reply #29 on: September 13, 2009, 11:11:51 AM »
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aslam sabah, umda kalam hai !

Wo kaise hai nadiya ? tu sagar hai jiska,
Hai Sagar tu kaisa ? hai jiski wo nadiya |

Kabhi bawli se uchhalti atkheliya karti
Kabhi khamosh, gumsum khayalo mein nadiya |

Khatam hongya hijr ke shab-o-roz jab bhe
Us din bahegi sagar ke aankhon se nadiya |

Samaayegi tujh mein, ya tu doobega usme
Gharaz ye ke sagar mein khoyege nadiya | | |
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