"Wo Meri Nadiya Hai"

by aaina on September 08, 2009, 02:31:12 PM
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #30 on: September 13, 2009, 11:25:17 AM »
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Sama'ato.n ka ye silsila hai
ajab sa dil mai ye gul khila hai

Dikhaii de na door tak jo
usi se aakar ye dil mila hai

Jo suraj the shaam hote dhle
aadheri raato se ladta diya hai

Meri roshni aaftaab se bhetr
safar ne jugnu jo mujko dia hai

Wo aakar mujhse kyu.n na mile
mein sagar uska, wo meri nadiya hai



Wow.. it is so beautiful Ghazal .. really very sweet and an innocent one. ! Superb!
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aaina
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«Reply #31 on: September 13, 2009, 09:33:04 PM »
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aslam sabah, umda kalam hai !

Wo kaise hai nadiya ? tu sagar hai jiska,
Hai Sagar tu kaisa ? hai jiski wo nadiya |

Kabhi bawli se uchhalti atkheliya karti
Kabhi khamosh, gumsum khayalo mein nadiya |

Khatam hongya hijr ke shab-o-roz jab bhe
Us din bahegi sagar ke aankhon se nadiya |

Samaayegi tujh mein, ya tu doobega usme
Gharaz ye ke sagar mein khoyege nadiya | | |




waah waah kya baat hai spicyyanki waah bhut khoob

Samaayegi tujh mein, ya tu doobega usme
Gharaz ye ke sagar mein khoyege nadiya | | |

bhut piyaara sher daad hazir hai aapke is kalaam ke liyn qubool keejiye
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aaina
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«Reply #32 on: September 13, 2009, 09:35:11 PM »
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Wow.. it is so beautiful Ghazal .. really very sweet and an innocent one. ! Superb!



Thnxxxxxxxx so much for ur appreciation Sophi..................
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ANAAM
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«Reply #33 on: October 26, 2009, 05:19:54 PM »
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Aapko meri likhi lines pasand aayee shukriya.....

Wah bahut khoob Cara ji,Anaam ji,Qadeer ji Azeem bhai wonderful lines. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #34 on: October 28, 2009, 08:55:29 AM »
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Dear aaina! ye kis bahr mein ghazal hai zara ise bata deN. Mujhe to ghazal ke matle ke ilaawah koi bhi sher bahr meiN nazar nahiN aata. Grin Grin Grin
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