Wo to, wo hain wahee, par na ham, ham rahey!

by abdbundeli on November 10, 2010, 10:13:38 AM
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Aaj, lagtaa hai, hamko waham ho gayaa!
Chaand kaa muskuraanaa naram ho gayaa?

Is tarah kuchh, chalee zindagee ki hawaa,
Tees deytaa huaa dard kam ho gayaa!

Wo to, wo hain wahee, par na ham, ham rahey;
'Main' gayaa, 'Tum' gayaa, jorh 'Ham' ho gayaa!

Unkaa cheyhraa tabassum sey yuun khil uthhaa,
Aik lamahey mein kaafoor gam ho gayaa!

Unko aagosh mein neend aaney lagee;
Aashiyaanaa hamaaraa haram ho gayaa!

Mahmahaatey gulaabon ki khushboo urhee:
Aasmaan par zameen kaa karam ho gayaa!

Khil uthho: aaj aagosh mein eid hai;
Roo-b-roo gulkadey kaa sanam ho gayaa!

Bas ta'anuk ki deyree thee, pighlaa samaa;
Unkaa daaman, 'abd', neem nam ho gayaa!

                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: November 10, 2010, 10:57:38 AM »
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wah bahut mast lkha he sirg...



mai mai se ham hua laga zubaan ko rog
kahe nain do se chaar kare ab bhog sake to bhog~
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«Reply #2 on: November 10, 2010, 01:16:03 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 10, 2010, 10:57:38 AM
wah bahut mast lkha he sirg...

mai mai se ham hua laga zubaan ko rog
kahe nain do se chaar kare ab bhog sake to bhog~

Shukriyah Abhi ji! Aik bahut-bhut puraanaa,koyi 400-500 saal  puraanaa, Reeti Kaaleen Hindi kaa, dohaa yaad aa rahaa hai: leejiye padhhiye:-

Tanik kankaree key parey,
Hot nain beychain!
Un nainan kee kaa kaheyn,
Jin nainan mein nain!!
             (NM)

            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2010, 06:35:12 PM »
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subhanallah abd ji ! husn o ishq ka kya haseen samaan baandha hai aapki ghazal ne. ye shayari ke poore husn kp aur shayar ka shayari se ishq ka bhi umda namoon hai. daad qabool karein !

majaz ki ek mash-hoor ghazal yaad a rahee hai, uske chand aashaar ...

Dekhna Jazbe Mohabbat Ka Asar, Aaj Ki Raat
Mere Shaane Pe Hai Us Shokh Ka Sar, Aaj Ki Raat

Noor Hi Noor Hai Kis Simth Uthaoon Aankhen
Husn Hi Husn Hai Taahath-E-Nazar Aaj Ki Raat

Naghma-O-Mai Ka Ye Toofan-E-Tarab Kya Kehna
Mera Ghar Ban Gaya Khaiyyam Ka Ghar Aaj Ki Raat

Nargis-E-Naaz Mein Woh Neendh Ka Halka Sa Khumaar
Woh Mere Naghma-E-Shireen Ka Asar Aaj Ki Raat

- Majaz
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«Reply #4 on: November 11, 2010, 04:00:38 AM »
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Quote from: zarra on November 10, 2010, 06:35:12 PM
subhanallah abd ji ! husn o ishq ka kya haseen samaan baandha hai aapki ghazal ne. ye shayari ke poore husn kp aur shayar ka shayari se ishq ka bhi umda namoon hai. daad qabool karein !

majaz ki ek mash-hoor ghazal yaad a rahee hai, uske chand aashaar ...

Dekhna Jazbe Mohabbat Ka Asar, Aaj Ki Raat
Mere Shaane Pe Hai Us Shokh Ka Sar, Aaj Ki Raat

Noor Hi Noor Hai Kis Simth Uthaoon Aankhen
Husn Hi Husn Hai Taahath-E-Nazar Aaj Ki Raat

Naghma-O-Mai Ka Ye Toofan-E-Tarab Kya Kehna
Mera Ghar Ban Gaya Khaiyyam Ka Ghar Aaj Ki Raat

Nargis-E-Naaz Mein Woh Neendh Ka Halka Sa Khumaar
Woh Mere Naghma-E-Shireen Ka Asar Aaj Ki Raat

- Majaz

Shukriyah 'zarra' ji!

Bahut hi damdaar gazal hai yah unkee! Bhartiya Jnanpith ney, 1960 key qareeb, 'Shero-o-shayari' naam ki aik kitaab prakashit ki thee, jisey 'Ayodhya Prasad Goyaliya' ney sankalit/sampadit kiyaa thaa, yah gazal main ney tab padhhee thee. Unkee aik aur bahut hi mashoor gazal main ney usee kitaab mein padhhee thee: '
"Ay gam-e-dil kyaa karoon!
 Ay bahsat-e-dil kyaa karoon!"
Bahut hi kam umra mein Khudaa ko pyaarey ho gaye they, warnaa aaj key Urdu Adab kaa roop hi kuchh aur hota! Khudaa unkee Rooh ko sukoon dey!

                    - abd bundeli

      
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«Reply #5 on: November 11, 2010, 05:46:02 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 10, 2010, 01:16:03 PM
Shukriyah Abhi ji! Aik bahut-bhut puraanaa,koyi 400-500 saal  puraanaa, Reeti Kaaleen Hindi kaa, dohaa yaad aa rahaa hai: leejiye padhhiye:-

Tanik kankaree key parey,
Hot nain beychain!
Un nainan kee kaa kaheyn,
Jin nainan mein nain!!
             (NM)

            - abd bundeli

ahaaa ahaaa ..bahut gehri baat keh di he likhne wale ne sahab...

shukriya is dohe se do chaar karne ke liye~
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«Reply #6 on: November 11, 2010, 09:01:56 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 11, 2010, 05:46:02 AM
ahaaa ahaaa ..bahut gehri baat keh di he likhne wale ne sahab...

shukriya is dohe se do chaar karne ke liye~


Aapkaa swagat hai, Abhi Ji!

Prem-sarowar mein nahaa,
Kavi hain satat nihaal!
Unkey anubhaw-amrut ko,
Pee-pee sthir hai kaal!!

       - Ramwatiya
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«Reply #7 on: November 11, 2010, 10:45:34 AM »
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wah itna puraana doha.....kitne kam shabdo mai kitni gehri baat....

Unnke Nainan sey mil ke,nain huye jab chhar
Dekho failaa hai chahu oor pyaarr he pyaarr

Quote from: abdbundeli on November 10, 2010, 01:16:03 PM
Shukriyah Abhi ji! Aik bahut-bhut puraanaa,koyi 400-500 saal  puraanaa, Reeti Kaaleen Hindi kaa, dohaa yaad aa rahaa hai: leejiye padhhiye:-

Tanik kankaree key parey,
Hot nain beychain!
Un nainan kee kaa kaheyn,
Jin nainan mein nain!!
             (NM)

            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: November 11, 2010, 10:56:56 AM »
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Kavee kee kalam sey jab
Bahi prem-sudha ki dhaar
Mat puchho yugal ka haal
Pee-pee jag huaa neehaal



Quote from: abdbundeli on November 11, 2010, 09:01:56 AM
Prem-sarowar mein nahaa,
Kavi hain satat nihaal!
Unkey anubhaw-amrut ko,
Pee-pee sthir hai kaal!!

       - Ramwatiya
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«Reply #9 on: November 11, 2010, 11:04:44 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 11, 2010, 09:01:56 AM
Prem-sarowar mein nahaa,
Kavi hain satat nihaal!
Unkey anubhaw-amrut ko,
Pee-pee sthir hai kaal!!

       - Ramwatiya



sahi lagti baat he..

prem rahe jag dhoondlo; prem bina jag soon
lagi lagan je prem me; te pani lage khoon~
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«Reply #10 on: November 11, 2010, 12:50:37 PM »
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Hai waqt kaisaa sitam kar gayaa
mousam ke saath aaNkh nam kar gayaa
paRhaa jab be saakhta kalaam is nazar ne
khatam sare ye mere gham kar gayaa

Abd jee umda soch or shabdoN kee numaiNdagee karti aap kee ye gazal hume behad pasand aayee.bahut bahut badhayee!
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«Reply #11 on: November 11, 2010, 01:22:01 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 11, 2010, 10:45:34 AM
wah itna puraana doha.....kitne kam shabdo mai kitni gehri baat....

Unnke Nainan sey mil ke,nain huye jab chhar
Dekho failaa hai chahu oor pyaarr he pyaarr



US ney sundartaa gadhhee,
Dee nayanon ko drushhti;
Taaki, kareyn wo ant tak,
Satat sneyh kee wrushhti!


       - Ramwatiya
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«Reply #12 on: November 11, 2010, 01:34:45 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 11, 2010, 10:56:56 AM

Kavee kee kalam sey jab
Bahi prem-sudha ki dhaar
Mat puchho yugal ka haal
Pee-pee jag huaa neehaal


Pyaar hamain rakhtaa amar,
Santati dey gatimaan!
Beytaa-beytee anawarat,
Kartey jeewan daan!!

    - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli
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«Reply #13 on: November 11, 2010, 01:44:39 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 11, 2010, 11:04:44 AM
sahi lagti baat he..

prem rahe jag dhoondlo; prem bina jag soon
lagi lagan je prem me; te pani lage khoon~

Dhanyawad, Abhi ji!

Prerit ho kar prem sey;
Hotaa mukulit kaam!
Rati ki paakar sampadaa,
Parmudit hotey dhaam!!

          - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli
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«Reply #14 on: November 11, 2010, 01:55:47 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on November 11, 2010, 12:50:37 PM
Hai waqt kaisaa sitam kar gayaa
mousam ke saath aaNkh nam kar gayaa
paRhaa jab be saakhta kalaam is nazar ne
khatam sare ye mere gham kar gayaa

Abd jee umda soch or shabdoN kee numaiNdagee karti aap kee ye gazal hume behad pasand aayee.bahut bahut badhayee!
Krutajntaa jnapit kartaa huun, Mamta ji!

Dhanyawad sakhi, aapkee
Badhaaiyaan paa: dhanya,
Lagtaa hai, ho gaye hain
Meyrey geet ananya!

     - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli
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