woh aaye aankhon ke liye naya intezaar lekar.....shayar taasir siddiqui

by Taasir siddiqui on March 13, 2013, 03:16:49 PM
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woh aaj phir aaye hain niyat-e-guftaar lekar;
aaj bhi aaye hain magar labon pe khaar lekar;

hum muddaton dekhte rahe jin ka raasta,
woh aaye aankhon ke liye naya intezaar lekar;

kya khoob tha woh shaks kya dilfareb thi baatein,
dhoke bech gaya hai naqad aetbaar lekar;

hum gali gali darbadar yeh sadaayen dete hain,
thodi si chaahat dedo thoda sa pyaar lekar;

ye duniya ka baazar hai yaan sikkon ki baat chalti hai,
tum kis ummeed par 'taasir' aaye ho dastaar lekar;

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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2013, 03:24:27 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah......Bahut bahut bahut khooob......... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2013, 04:24:01 PM »
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waah waah waah
lajawaab ghazal Tasir sahab
behad umdaa
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«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2013, 04:43:29 PM »
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woh aaj phir aaye hain niyat-e-guftaar lekar;
aaj bhi aaye hain magar labon pe khaar lekar;

hum muddaton dekhte rahe jin ka raasta,
woh aaye aankhon ke liye naya intezaar lekar;

kya khoob tha woh shaks kya dilfareb thi baatein,
dhoke bech gaya hai naqad aetbaar lekar;

hum gali gali darbadar yeh sadaayen dete hain,
thodi si chaahat dedo thoda sa pyaar lekar;

ye duniya ka baazar hai yaan sikkon ki baat chalti hai,
tum kis ummeed par 'taasir' aaye ho dastaar lekar;

........................poet: "taasir siddiqui


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«Reply #4 on: March 13, 2013, 05:08:51 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2013, 05:14:43 PM »
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waaah waah waah waah Taasir ji, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2013, 05:51:13 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

Waise tu sari ghazal hi umda hai lekin yeh do ashaar buht hi umda hain


kya khoob tha woh shaks kya dilfareb thi baatein,
dhoke bech gaya hai naqad aetbaar lekar;

hum gali gali darbadar yeh sadaayen dete hain,
thodi si chaahat dedo thoda sa pyaar lekar;

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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2013, 07:17:34 PM »
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Wah Wah!!!! Bohat hi khub!!!! Awesome!!! Behad Khubsurat Ghazal!!!!

hum gali gali darbadar yeh sadaayen dete hain,
thodi si chaahat dedo thoda sa pyaar lekar;

Is sher ki jitni tareef ki Jaaye kam hai!!!! Umda!!!


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«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2013, 09:07:55 PM »
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So Nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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«Reply #9 on: March 14, 2013, 02:28:30 AM »
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Taseer Sahaab Aadaab!


WallaaH janab kia kahne bade hi khoobsurat aur umda khayaalaat ko
lafzi jamaa diyaa hai aapne... behad khoob janab behad khoob... Usual Smile


Waqai aapke ashaaroN meiN dil ko mutmain karne ki taseer hai janab..
Bade hi dilfareb aur khoob khayaal ko achche ashaaroN meiN dhalkar laaye
haiN aap... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarabad kabul kijiye..
aise hi umdaa kalaamON se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #10 on: March 14, 2013, 07:14:37 PM »
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Bahut khoob. badi pyaari ghazal. dil choo gayi. dheron daad.
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