Woh dard na do..................................................................Aqsh -Panna 2:Ghazals

F.H.SIDDIQUI

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«Reply #15 on: January 18, 2013, 08:20:04 AM »

bahut khoob , aqsh ji.


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Re: Woh dard na do..................................................................Aqsh

«Reply #16 on: January 18, 2013, 12:39:57 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 18, 2013, 08:20:04 AM

bahut khoob , aqsh ji.

thank you soooo much hasan jee


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Re: Woh dard na do..................................................................Aqsh

«Reply #17 on: January 18, 2013, 03:29:24 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on January 18, 2013, 04:37:50 AM

Woh dard na do, jsiki koi dawa na ho
Charag tab hi jalao, jab hawa na ho

Ae mere maula, mera naseeb aisa kar
Pyaar bas pyaar rahe, koi saza na ho

Bahut kareeb se, deedar ki hasrath hai
Mujhe woh khaal bana, jo kabhi juda na ho

Yaad meiN teri, pukaar uthi hai meri wafa
Wo mujhe bhool jaye, aisa faisla na ho

Nikal padhooN khud ki, talaash meiN "Aqsh"
Dhoop meiN chin jaaye, aisa sayaa na ho

bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji.. aaj fir aapke poem ke jawaab me kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai maine...!!!

jo naa de dard tumhe, aisaa pyaar bhalaa kahaan hai
jo naa jalaaye haath aisaa chiraag jalaa kahaan hai

chalne ko kuch pal saath me chalte hain sabhi, magar
chhuu le aasmaan, aisaa ab tak koi chalaa kahaan hai

tadapnaa naseeb me likhaa hai mohabbat karne waalon
jisse muskuraane lago tum , aisaa faislaa kahaan hai

jism se jaan tak nikal jaati hai, to bachaa hi kyaa
jo naa ho judaa kabhi jism se, wo balaa kahaan hai

dhundte hain gali gali usko, jo humein bas pyaar kare
jo kare khud ki talaash , aisaa koi niklaa kahaan hai

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Re: Woh dard na do..................................................................Aqsh

«Reply #18 on: January 18, 2013, 03:31:08 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on January 18, 2013, 04:37:50 AM

good composition,ma'am


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Re: Woh dard na do..................................................................Aqsh

«Reply #19 on: January 19, 2013, 03:55:06 AM »

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 18, 2013, 03:29:24 PM

bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh ji.. aaj fir aapke poem ke jawaab me kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai maine...!!!

*****HRIDAY*****

Thank you hriday jee it was a beautiful reply


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Re: Woh dard na do..................................................................Aqsh

«Reply #20 on: January 19, 2013, 03:56:25 AM »

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on January 18, 2013, 03:31:08 PM

good composition,ma'am

thank you marhoon bahayat jee


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Re: Woh dard na do..................................................................Aqsh

«Reply #21 on: January 19, 2013, 05:30:34 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on January 18, 2013, 04:37:50 AM

waah waah ..Aqsh ji ..lajawaab...
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Re: Woh dard na do..................................................................Aqsh

«Reply #22 on: January 20, 2013, 05:18:30 AM »

Quote from: sahal on January 19, 2013, 05:30:34 AM

waah waah ..Aqsh ji ..lajawaab...
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thnx sahal sooo much


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