Woh kabhi saamney aaye naheen zamaaney key!

by abdbundeli on June 07, 2008, 04:37:43 PM
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 Tamaam tour tareeqey they aazmaaney key!
 Woh, kabhi saamney aaye naheen zamaaney key!!

 Tamaam umra, usee qaid mein rahee bulbul:
 Jiskey peechhey they saranjaam aashiyaaney key!

 Rind hoon mein woh, jo dhandhey sey paarsaayee hai;
 Gulzamin meyree hai, rashtey mein dair jaaney key!

 Na jaaney kitnaa kamaayaa hai; ganmaayaa hai kyaa?
 Kaheen, nishaan naheen bachey hain, par, kamaaney key!

 Paak hai kuchh bhi naheen; ab bhi maiyl hai baaqee:
 Hazaar baar, tamaashey kiye nahaaney key!

 Jaa key saaqee ko bataa; deir na kar ab, Qaasid!
 Wuzoo karaaye mujhey, peishtar pilaaney key!!
 
 Raah mein ab bhi,'abd', reyg-e-rawaan hai moujood;
 Bahut qareeb hoon, akheer sey fasaaney key!
      
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2008, 04:26:51 AM »
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Na jaaney kitnaa kamaayaa hai; gunmaayaa hai kyaa?
 Kaheen, nishan naheen buchey hain, pur, kamaaney key!

 Paak hai kuchh bhi naheen; ab bhi maiyl hai baaqee:
 Hazaar baar, tamaashey kiye nahaaney key!
bahoot hi achcha likh hai.....abd ji aur in lines ne to dil ko choo liya......
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2008, 07:46:08 AM »
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bekarar ji,

Aapkey zeyhn mein insaaniyat ki hai khushboo;
Mein khush naseeb hun, nazar-e-karam mein aayaa hoon!
Dhakosloun sey jindagee bahut alahdaa hai;
Jo, mujh ko dil ney diyaa hai, mein wahee laayaa hoon!!

               Shukraguzar : abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2010, 03:30:59 PM »
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Haseen raat nayi aahat ko ghar layee
Likhi hai shehar ke maate pe fir bi tanhayi

Bahut dino se vo surat nazar nahi aayi
Batak rahi hai khayal-o-nazer ki binayi (drishti)

Mai itni der samandar ko aaj takti rahi,
Ki uske rang mein aankhon mein apni ber laayi

Ye kaise soch le andar se ghar na bigenge
Ghata ne khul ke barasne ki shart tehrayi

Vo sirf reshmi lehje mujhe utada tha
Mere liye yahi chahat ki rasm kehlayi

Saji huyi hai dhanak (Indra-dhanush)aasma.n pe kis muh se
Jo oodni ke meri rang sab chura laayi

Ajab hai chand se rishta udas logon ka
Grahen laga jab usse inki aankh ber aayi

Ab aise paaniyon ko kyu kahu samandar mai?
Ki Jal-tal pe likhki ho jinki gehrayi..!!


Roja
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2010, 11:42:15 AM »
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Quote from: Roja_malar on January 26, 2010, 03:30:59 PM
Haseen raat nayi aahat ko ghar layee
Likhi hai shehar ke maate pe fir bi tanhayi

Bahut dino se vo surat nazar nahi aayi
Batak rahi hai khayal-o-nazer ki binayi (drishti)

Mai itni der samandar ko aaj takti rahi,
Ki uske rang mein aankhon mein apni ber laayi

Ye kaise soch le andar se ghar na bigenge
Ghata ne khul ke barasne ki shart tehrayi

Vo sirf reshmi lehje mujhe utada tha
Mere liye yahi chahat ki rasm kehlayi

Saji huyi hai dhanak (Indra-dhanush)aasma.n pe kis muh se
Jo oodni ke meri rang sab chura laayi

Ajab hai chand se rishta udas logon ka
Grahen laga jab usse inki aankh ber aayi

Ab aise paaniyon ko kyu kahu samandar mai?
Ki Jal-tal pe likhki ho jinki gehrayi..!!

Roja


Baarhaa saamney aatey hain samundar teyrey!
Dil-o-dimaag mein ahsaas hain sundar teyrey!
Roz lahroun kee rawaanee-saa bhataktaa hai man;
Chhupey hain koun sey jalwey abhee andar teyrey!!

         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2010, 02:42:10 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 27, 2010, 11:42:15 AM
Baarhaa saamney aatey hain samundar teyrey!
Dil-o-dimaag mein ahsaas hain sundar teyrey!
Roz lahroun kee rawaanee-saa bhataktaa hai man;
Chhupey hain koun sey jalwey abhee andar teyrey!!

         - abd bundeli

Neeli aankhon se umadti thi ghataye kitni
Chedti jaati thi zulfon ko hawaye kitni

Soj-e-dil, girya-e-shab, sange-malaamat, banvaas
Usse milne ki mili mujhko sajaye kitni

Fir usee shokh ne cheena meri aankhon ka sukoon
Jisse milne ke liye ki thi duwayein kitni

Mujhe pe azad fajao ka na dar khul paya
De raha tha pase-diwar sadaye kitni

Bete pardesh gaye, pet ka peeda lekar
Raah chaukat se lagi takti Maayein kitni

Tera dar choota, dimak ki soch choota, ye mehfil choota
Teri ye "Roja" ne nibayi hai wafayein kitni?


Soj-e-dil = dil ki jalan

Girya-e-shab = Raaton ko rona

Sange-malaamat = Ninda ka pattar

Pase-diwar = Diwar ke peeche
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«Reply #6 on: January 28, 2010, 05:47:34 AM »
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Wah very beautiful gazal Abd ji and Roja ji.great creation.excellent Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 28, 2010, 08:46:51 AM »
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Paak hai kuchh bhi naheen; ab bhi maiyl hai baaqee:
 Hazaar baar, tamaashey kiye nahaaney key

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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2010, 02:10:25 PM »
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Quote from: roja_malar on January 28, 2010, 02:42:10 AM

Neeli aankhon se umadti thi ghataye kitni
Chedti jaati thi zulfon ko hawaye kitni

Soj-e-dil, girya-e-shab, sange-malaamat, banvaas
Usse milne ki mili mujhko sajaye kitni

Fir usee shokh ne cheena meri aankhon ka sukoon
Jisse milne ke liye ki thi duwayein kitni

Mujhe pe azad fajao ka na dar khul paya
De raha tha pase-diwar sadaye kitni

Bete pardesh gaye, pet ka peeda lekar
Raah chaukat se lagi takti Maayein kitni

Tera dar choota, dimak ki soch choota, ye mehfil choota
Teri ye "Roja" ne nibayi hai wafayein kitni?


Soj-e-dil = dil ki jalan

Girya-e-shab = Raaton ko rona

Sange-malaamat = Ninda ka pattar

Pase-diwar = Diwar ke peeche


Bahut hi khoob, Roja!

'Neeli aankhon se umadtin thin ghataye kitni
 Chedtin jaatin thin zulfon ko hawayen kitni'

Deykheyngey ham bhee unhain,
Bhar aankhoun mein pyaas!
Meyrey antas, dhairya kho,
Honaa naheen hataash!!

         - 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2010, 02:31:46 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on January 28, 2010, 05:47:34 AM
Wah very beautiful gazal Abd ji and Roja ji.great creation.excellent Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot, Madhu ji!
       
           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2010, 02:33:52 PM »
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Quote from: Bored on January 28, 2010, 08:46:51 AM
Paak hai kuchh bhi naheen; ab bhi maiyl hai baaqee:
 Hazaar baar, tamaashey kiye nahaaney key

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Thanks a lot, dear Bored ji!

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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2010, 05:27:55 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 29, 2010, 02:10:25 PM
Bahut hi khoob, Roja!

'Neeli aankhon se umadtin thin ghataye kitni
 Chedtin jaatin thin zulfon ko hawayen kitni'


Deykheyngey ham bhee unhain,
Bhar aankhoun mein pyaas!
Meyrey antas, dhairya kho,
Honaa naheen hataash!!

         - 'Ramwatiya'


Thank you ji

Mohabbat ne kiya is kadar badnaam dekho Abd

Ki her mehfil mein meri daastan dohrayi jaati hai
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«Reply #12 on: January 30, 2010, 04:48:23 PM »
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Quote from: malli on January 29, 2010, 05:27:55 PM
Thank you ji

Mohabbat ne kiya is kadar badnaam dekho Abd

Ki her mehfil mein meri daastan dohrayi jaati hai


Riwaayat naam deytee hai 'kisee' maasoom ko 'uska';
Mohabbat laakh ho badnaam, badnaamee na ho 'uskee'!
Khiley 'wah', arsh mein jyoun chaand khiltaa hai andheyrey mein;
Sarey baazaar, jis sey, muft neelaamee na ho 'uskee'!!

                     - abd bundeli

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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2010, 03:22:55 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 30, 2010, 04:48:23 PM
Riwaayat naam deytee hai 'kisee' maasoom ko 'uska';
Mohabbat laakh ho badnaam, badnaamee na ho 'uskee'!
Khiley 'wah', arsh mein jyoun chaand khiltaa hai andheyrey mein;
Sarey baazaar, jis sey, muft neelaamee na ho 'uskee'!!

                     - abd bundeli



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Jahan mein hum faqiron ke kahi dere nahi hote
Kahi bhi ghar nahi hote, kahi ghere nahi hote

Sukhad saiyog hum fir se mehfil mein aa gaye tere ABD
Nahi barson guzer jaye edhar fere nahi hote

Hamari vriddhi yayaver, hamari niyathi hai yatra
Kinhi bhi manzilon ke hum kabhi dere nahi hote

Na kheencho rekhayein, manuj ke geet tukdon mein
Kabhi tere nahi hote, kabhi mere nahi hote

Hridaiy mrugchal per reenjhe, bhikari bhavnawon ke
Kinhi sinhasanon ke hum magar chere nahi hote

Na ho hairan sankhya se, yahan her ek yug mein hum
Sada ginti ke hote hai ki bahutere nahi hote...

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«Reply #14 on: January 31, 2010, 07:00:07 AM »
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Quote from: malli on January 31, 2010, 03:22:55 AM
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Jahan mein hum faqiron ke kahin dere nahin hote
Kahin bhi ghar nahin hote, kahin ghere nahin hote

Sukhad saiyog hum fir se mehfil mein aa gaye tere ABD
Nahin barson guzar jayen idhar fere nahin hote

Hamari vritti yayavar, hamari niyati hai yatra
Kinhin bhi manzilon ke hum kabhi dere nahin hote

Na kheencho rekhayein, manuj ke geet tukdon mein
Kabhi tere nahin hote, kabhi mere nahin hote

Hridaiy mrugchal per reenjhe, bhikari bhavnawon ke
Kinhi sinhasanon ke hum magar chere nahin hote

Na ho hairan sankhya se, yahan her eik yug mein hum
Sada ginti ke hote hain ki bahutere nahin hote...

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Saaraa jag hee geyh hai,
Saaraa jag pariwaar!
Shatru naheen koyee kaheen,
Par, mitra hain apaar!

         - 'Ramwatiya'
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