Woh na aataa, to, koun baahuoun mein sharmaataa?

by abdbundeli on September 14, 2009, 05:54:08 PM
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Dard kitnaa hai, kaash naaptaa: jareeb hotee?
Kaash, unkee nigaah jism key qareeb hotee!!

Kahkashaan, husn key un key, na dikhaayee deytey:
Kaash, duniyaa-e-jigar-o-zeyhn kuchh ajeeb hotee!!

Meyhmaan ban key, ham bhi, chaar din wahaan ruktey:
Mahfil-e-khaas-o-a'am kyoun banee raqeeb hotee?

Justajoo chaarahgaroun kee kabhee na kee jaatee;
Tamaam kaayanaat-e-maraz khud museeb hotee!

Kaam aataa tamaam har mizaj mustagnee;
Mujhey umeed, gar, rafaaqat-e-habeeb hotee!

Woh na aataa, to, koun baahuoun mein sharmaataa;
Aur, kaisey hayaat bartar-e-naseeb hotee?

Ham to kahtey hain hashra tak chaley ta'anuq yeh;
Aur, har saans rahey marham-e-tabeeb hotee!

'Abd', tamaam raat roo-b-roo hai; huun tanhaa;
Khwaahish-e-wasl lagey har lamhey kabeeb hotee!

                             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2009, 08:28:34 PM »
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Humesha ki tarah bohot khoobsurat, Babu Ji
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«Reply #2 on: September 14, 2009, 08:40:39 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Abd ji ,touching gazal,wonderful creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2009, 06:47:21 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 14, 2009, 08:28:34 PM
Humesha ki tarah bohot khoobsurat, Babu Ji
Thanks bitia Celmira!
Now, I'll be prrticipating in the 'forums' almost  on all the forth-coming Sundays, so that I'm in touch with all of you!
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2009, 06:49:10 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 14, 2009, 08:40:39 PM
Wah bahut khoob Abd ji ,touching gazal,wonderful creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks bitia Madhu!
Now, I'll be prrticipating in the 'forums' almost  on all the forth-coming Sundays, so that I'm in touch with all of you!
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2009, 07:02:19 AM »
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sir ji bahut khoob likha hai aapne daad dil se kabool kijiyega

kucch toh kashish rahi oonki aankhon main
hum samajh na paaye aur khud ko gawaan beithe
oonka kehna wajib tha gunaah oonka nahin
khata hamaari thi bewafa se dil laga beithe
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2009, 01:49:47 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on September 20, 2009, 07:02:19 AM
sir ji bahut khoob likha hai aapne daad dil se kabool kijiyega

kucch toh kashish rahi oonki aankhon main
hum samajh na paaye aur khud ko gawaan beithe
oonka kehna wajib tha gunaah oonka nahin
khata hamaari thi bewafa se dil laga beithe
Thanks a lot, Saahil ji!

Baat jo bhi ho, dil to dil hai, khataawaar naheen!
Koun hai, jo ki, un aankhoun kaa giraftaar naheen!
Ham ko jaanaa hai bahar-e-zeest key us paar, 'abd',
Kaisey kah deyn, ki, naakhudaa pai eitbaar naheen?

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shayara
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2009, 05:11:05 PM »
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Bohot umda Abd sahab
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2009, 07:18:30 AM »
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Quote from: Shayara on September 22, 2009, 05:11:05 PM
Bohot umda Abd sahab
Thanks Shayara ji!
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2009, 07:18:42 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 14, 2009, 05:54:08 PM
Dard kitnaa hai, kaash naaptaa: jareeb hotee?
Kaash, unkee nigaah jism key qareeb hotee!!

Kahkashaan, husn key un key, na dikhaayee deytey:
Kaash, duniyaa-e-jigar-o-zeyhn kuchh ajeeb hotee!!

Meyhmaan ban key, ham bhi, chaar din wahaan ruktey:
Mahfil-e-khaas-o-a'am kyoun banee raqeeb hotee?

Justajoo chaarahgaroun kee kabhee na kee jaatee;
Tamaam kaayanaat-e-maraz khud museeb hotee!

Kaam aataa tamaam har mizaj mustagnee;
Mujhey umeed, gar, rafaaqat-e-habeeb hotee!

Woh na aataa, to, koun baahuoun mein sharmaataa;
Aur, kaisey hayaat bartar-e-naseeb hotee?

Ham to kahtey hain hashra tak chaley ta'anuq yeh;
Aur, har saans rahey marham-e-tabeeb hotee!

'Abd', tamaam raat roo-b-roo hai; huun tanhaa;
Khwaahish-e-wasl lagey har lamhey kabeeb hotee!

                             - abd bundeli



Wahhhhhh  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 11, 2009, 07:19:35 AM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on September 20, 2009, 07:02:19 AM
sir ji bahut khoob likha hai aapne daad dil se kabool kijiyega

kucch toh kashish rahi oonki aankhon main
hum samajh na paaye aur khud ko gawaan beithe
oonka kehna wajib tha gunaah oonka nahin
khata hamaari thi bewafa se dil laga beithe

Simply superb lines Saahil dear Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: October 11, 2009, 07:23:41 AM »
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Laungi mai kahan se judayi ka housla?
Kyu is kadar kareeb mere aa rahe ho tum?

Tumhe apna bana saku ya nahi
Umr sara isii sawal mein gava diya maine...
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«Reply #12 on: October 11, 2009, 08:18:52 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on October 11, 2009, 07:18:42 AM


Wahhhhhh  Applause Applause Applause


Thanks a lot, Roja!
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