Yaar, kyaa gul khilaayegee yeh judaayee teyree!

by abdbundeli on February 10, 2013, 09:13:51 AM
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Aap ney sirf qayaam-e-bahaar deykhaa hai!
Ham ney har din khizaan key aar-paar deykhaa hai!!

Aaj harsoo parhee huyee hai khaak-e-paimaanah:
Maykadey ney khudaa kaa kaarobaar deykhaa hai!

Zarrey-zarrey sey khushnumaa hai khudaayee saaree;
Naqaab-e-dhundh har jagah utaar deykhaa hai!

Khuubsoorat hai chashm-e-tar sey jhaanktee dulhin:
Muhsinh-e-maadar-e-dukhtar kaa pyaar deykhaa hai!

Yaar, kyaa gul khilaayegee yeh judaayee teyree;
Ham ney rag-rag mein dahaktaa bukhaar deykhaa hai?

Khuub is teyree shakhsiyat-e-nou pai huun shaidaa;
Anchhuye teyrey tasawwur key paar deykhaa hai!

Yeh aahtoun kaa dahar hai, ‘abd’, qayaamat kee;
Aaj bulbul ney ujarhtaa diyaar deykhaa hai!

                    - abd bundeli

 
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2013, 09:24:06 AM »
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बहुत खुबसूरत लिखा हैं सर Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2013, 09:55:51 AM »
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बहुत खुबसूरत लिखा हैं सर Applause Applause Applause

Priya Rishi ji! Dhanyawaad! Swasth-saanand hain! Bahut din ba'ad aapko yahaan deykhaa hai!
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2013, 12:51:47 PM »
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Aap ney sirf qayaam-e-bahaar deykhaa hai!
Ham ney har din khizaan key aar-paar deykhaa hai!!
nahin janaab daur-e-khizaan sab ki zindagi mein kahbhi nah kabhi aata hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Aaj harsoo parhee huyee hai khaak-e-paimaanah:
Maykadey ney khudaa kaa kaarobaar deykhaa hai!
main ettefaaq nahin rakhti iss sher se aakhir kya kahna chahte ho aap icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Zarrey-zarrey sey khushnumaa hai khudaayee saaree;
Naqaab-e-dhundh har jagah utaar deykhaa hai!
switzerland mein kuch kuch aisa hi hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Khuubsoorat hai chashm-e-tar sey jhaanktee dulhin:
Muhsinh-e-maadar-e-dukhtar kaa pyaar deykhaa hai!
wah wah bahut khoob .hasil -e- ghazal hai ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Yaar, kyaa gul khilaayegee yeh judaayee teyree;
Ham ney rag-rag mein dahaktaa bukhaar deykhaa hai?
miyaadi hai hafte dus din mein utar jaaye gaa icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Khuub is teyree shakhsiyat-e-nou pai huun shaidaa;
Anchhuye teyrey tasawwur key paar deykhaa hai!
aankein tranparent hain kya tumhaari icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Yeh aahtoun kaa dahar hai, ‘abd’, qayaamat kee;
Aaj bulbul ney ujarhtaa diyaar deykhaa hai!

bade pate ki baat ki hai bahut khoob is per tabsera ho to baat bahut baarki ki nikle gi. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

                    - abd bundeli

 

nafees, kubsoorat............!
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2013, 02:09:02 PM »
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Bahut-bahut Shukriyah, Sheba ji, for the compliments/comments! Main pooree gazal par tafseel sey charchaa to nahin kar paauungaa; par pahley do asha'ar key zariye main kyaa kahnaa chaahtaa huun, aapsey 'share' karoongaa:
1. The poet complains that the addressed person has perceived only the better part of the life that contained all blooms & blossoms (till date, but not its vicissitudes); whereas the poet has also come across both the sides of the scenery(with & without the blooms & blossoms)!
2. The poet perceives, that the world knows about the reality of the left-over wastes after the revels, that are lying scattered all around the 'House of wine' i.e. the God 'creates & destroys' at will, irrespective of the qualities & qualifications of the constituents! The 'Maykadah' symbolizes the world (at-times this world & at-times the other)! Wine symbolizes life, love or worship! 'Saaqee' is the intermediary in between him & HIM! And, so-on & so-forth!

                         - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)

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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2013, 10:12:01 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Hriday' ji!
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Bahut-bahut shukriyahm 'nandbahu' ji!
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