Yahan-Wahan Ab Chaye Dikhte Saare Tathakathith

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Yahan-wahan ab chaye dikhte saare tathakathith
Bare huye hain satta ke galiyare tathakathith

Jaane kitne sapnon kii hatyaye kar daali
Ghoom rahe hai masti mein hatyare tathakathith

Nakli sikke yahan chal rahe ye kaisa bazar
Aslii ho gaye hai ab to bechare tathakathith

Humne tumko pyar kiya par tum to badal gaye
Kya maloom tha nikloge tum pyare tathakathith

Mujh tak aane se pehle ujiyare lupth huye
Bheje the chanda ne humko taare tathakathith

Bahut dinon tak khoon ke aansu royii sachchayii
Aakhir ik din vohi hua ki haare tathakathith



यहाँ-वहाँ  अब छाए दिखते सारे तथाकथित
भरे हुए है सत्ता के गलियारे  तथाकथित

जाने कितने सपनों को हत्याएं कर डाली
घूम रहे हैं मस्ती में हत्यारे तथाकथित

नकली सिक्के यहाँ चल रहे ये कैसा बाज़ार
असली हो गए हैं अब तो बेचारे तथाकथित

हमने तुमको प्यार किया पर तुम तो बदल गए
क्या मालूम था निकलोगे तुम प्यारे तथाकथित

मुझ तक आने से पहले उजियारे लुप्त हुए
भेजे थे चन्दा ने हमको तारे तथाकथित

बहूत दिनों तक खून के आँसू रोई सच्चाई
आखिर इक दिन वही हुआ कि  हारे तथाकथित
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«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2012, 12:41:59 PM »
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very very nice suman jee . rau nahi de sakte abhi kuch der pahele hi diya. bahut khoob likha hai aapne. dheron daad qubool kare
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«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2012, 01:14:26 PM »
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bahut hee khoobroo man huaa romaanchit
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«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2012, 01:16:23 PM »
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bahut khoob suman ji  Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2012, 03:13:59 PM »
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Very nice. Very nice.
Mast. Mind blowing. Zabardast
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2012, 04:33:01 PM »
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wah wah wah wah

हमने तुमको प्यार किया पर तुम तो बदल गए
क्या मालूम था निकलोगे तुम प्यारे तथाकथित

बहूत दिनों तक खून के आँसू रोई सच्चाई
आखिर इक दिन वही हुआ कि  हारे तथाकथित

in sacchaiyon se kisi ka bhi paala na padey.
bas yahi dua karta hun..
Dhero DAAD is khoobsurat ghazal par
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2012, 06:25:20 PM »
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very nice Suman ji... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: November 30, 2012, 02:08:01 AM »
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bahut khoob suman ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 01, 2012, 02:51:46 AM »
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suman ji, bahut khoobsurat, likhne ka andaaz bahut accha hain. dheron mubarakbaad,
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«Reply #9 on: December 01, 2012, 02:59:57 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 29, 2012, 12:41:59 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
very very nice suman jee . rau nahi de sakte abhi kuch der pahele hi diya. bahut khoob likha hai aapne. dheron daad qubool kare

aapne hamari koshish ko pada aur tarif kiya yehi mere liye bahut hai. aapka bahut bahut shukriya jee
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 29, 2012, 01:14:26 PM
bahut hee khoobroo man huaa romaanchit

 love4 love4 notworthy love4 love4
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Quote from: anmolarora on November 29, 2012, 01:16:23 PM
bahut khoob suman ji  Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thank you arora sb
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on November 29, 2012, 03:13:59 PM
Very nice. Very nice.
Mast. Mind blowing. Zabardast

shukriya shukriya beta
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«Reply #13 on: December 01, 2012, 03:01:57 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 29, 2012, 04:33:01 PM
wah wah wah wah

हमने तुमको प्यार किया पर तुम तो बदल गए
क्या मालूम था निकलोगे तुम प्यारे तथाकथित

बहूत दिनों तक खून के आँसू रोई सच्चाई
आखिर इक दिन वही हुआ कि  हारे तथाकथित

in sacchaiyon se kisi ka bhi paala na padey.
bas yahi dua karta hun..
Dhero DAAD is khoobsurat ghazal par


thank you very much mkv jee
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«Reply #14 on: December 01, 2012, 03:02:23 AM »
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Quote from: nishi gahlaut on November 29, 2012, 06:25:20 PM
very nice Suman ji... Applause Applause Applause

thank you nishi
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