Yahee to fark hai: shaayar kisey ro ley, kisey gaa ley?

by abdbundeli on December 20, 2012, 10:55:25 AM
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Kaheen paani hi paani hai, kaheen par boond key laaley!
Yahee to fark hai: shaayar kisey ro ley, kisey gaa ley?

Bahut baareeq hai, maanaa, tumhaarey dil ki mooseeqee:
Sarey kuhraam, sun leytey hain, fir bhi, kayee matwaaley!

Dil-e-maashuuq foulaadee, pighal kar mom hotaa hai;
Talab mein koh ko bhi cheeratey hain, suno, dil waaley!

Rukhoun par laakh hon pardey, hawaayen jaa pahunchteen hain:
Mahak pahuncheygi jaa un tak, rakheyn woh laakh rakhwaaley!

Nazar mein aa rahey hain roz unkey rang bahuteyrey;
Lahuu-sey surkh hain, to kabhee gorey bhee, kabhee kaaley!  

Kabhi is galee mein, to fir kabhi us galee mein firtaa
Mileygaa yaar bhi; furqat rawaan hai abhi, gam khaaley!

Kinaarey torh kar bahney lagaa hai aaj fir dariyah;
Nahin hai tifl woh, jisko khilonaa, ‘abd’, bahlaa ley!

                    - abd bundeli
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livingbytheday
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«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2012, 11:17:15 AM »
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very nice
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2012, 11:40:23 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on December 20, 2012, 11:17:15 AM
very nice

Loads of thanks!
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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2012, 01:12:32 PM »
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bahut umdaa hai saahab, meri taraf se dheroN daad aur ek rau qubool farmaayeN...
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2012, 03:18:50 PM »
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Bahut  khoob , Abd  bhai . Bahut  mubarak  ho.
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Saraab
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2012, 04:42:22 PM »
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Nice poetry. Asli shaayari hai ye. Apse to sikhna padega. Bahut daad.
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2012, 08:32:23 PM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... bade hi pechiNda par khoob gehre khayaal
bayaaN kiye haiN aapne... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 21, 2012, 02:41:49 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 20, 2012, 10:55:25 AM
Kaheen paani hi paani hai, kaheen par boond key laaley!
Yahee to fark hai: shaayar kisey ro ley, kisey gaa ley?

Bahut baareeq hai, maanaa, tumhaarey dil ki mooseeqee:
Sarey kuhraam, sun leytey hain, fir bhi, kayee matwaaley!

Dil-e-maashuuq foulaadee, pighal kar mom hotaa hai;
Talab mein koh ko bhi cheeratey hain, suno, dil waaley!

Rukhoun par laakh hon pardey, hawaayen jaa pahunchteen hain:
Mahak pahuncheygi jaa un tak, rakheyn woh laakh rakhwaaley!

Nazar mein aa rahey hain roz unkey rang bahuteyrey;
Lahuu-sey surkh hain, to kabhee gorey bhee, kabhee kaaley! 

Kabhi is galee mein, to fir kabhi us galee mein firtaa
Mileygaa yaar bhi; furqat rawaan hai abhi, gam khaaley!

Kinaarey torh kar bahney lagaa hai aaj fir dariyah;
Nahin hai tifl woh, jisko khilonaa, ‘abd’, bahlaa ley!

                    - abd bundeli


Waaah very very nice ghazal abd bundeli jee  Thumbs UP
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2012, 04:09:38 AM »
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Shaandaar Gazal
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azad mishra
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«Reply #9 on: December 21, 2012, 05:39:20 AM »
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mind blowing really a great shayari dheroo daad abd ji
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #10 on: December 21, 2012, 08:14:04 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on December 20, 2012, 01:12:32 PM
bahut umdaa hai saahab, meri taraf se dheroN daad aur ek rau qubool farmaayeN...

Shukriyah Taish ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 21, 2012, 08:16:56 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 20, 2012, 03:18:50 PM
Bahut  khoob , Abd  bhai . Bahut  mubarak  ho.

Shukriyah Siddiqui ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!!
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2012, 08:18:29 AM »
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Quote from: Saraab on December 20, 2012, 04:42:22 PM
Nice poetry. Asli shaayari hai ye. Apse to sikhna padega. Bahut daad.

Loads of thanks, Saraab ji! You're most welcome!
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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2012, 08:22:08 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 20, 2012, 08:32:23 PM
Abd Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... bade hi pechiNda par khoob gehre khayaal
bayaaN kiye haiN aapne... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Namaskaar Parwaaz ji!
Shukriyah, bahut-bahut shukriyah!! WOH aapko Khush wa tandurust rakhey!
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«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2012, 08:23:13 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on December 21, 2012, 02:41:49 AM
Waaah very very nice ghazal abd bundeli jee  Thumbs UP

Shukriyah Suman ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!!
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