Ye alag baat ke kaha hi nahi

by aaina on September 27, 2010, 11:38:15 PM
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Ehle bazm ki nazar ek adna si khoshish, apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega


ye alag baat ke kaha hi nahi
bin tere meiN kabhi jiya hi nahi

bawafaaii ka dars yaad rahe
zakhm yuN, jaan kar siya hi nahi

roothne par koii manaata hai
humko is baat ka pata hi nahi

dard duniya ke baan_ta hi raha
apne zakhmoN ka kuch kia hi nahi

mujhko lai jaaye jo nagar tere
aayi aisii koii saba hi nahi

wo mujhay choR kar chala bhi gaya
aur ashqoN ka kuch pata hi nahi

uske qadmoN ki bas mile jannat
yaad iske siwa dua hi nahi

raat aankhoN mai kaise na kat_ti
chaand, badal mai tu chipa hi nahi

itna gum tha meiN teri baatoN mai
shor ruswaii ka suna hi nahi

tum hi aslam na rakh sake qaaboo
isme ashqoN ki kuch khata hi nahi






aslam
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«Reply #1 on: September 28, 2010, 01:15:27 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aslam ji...!!!

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«Reply #2 on: September 28, 2010, 01:21:54 PM »
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superbbbbbb creation aslam ji......dil ko chhed gaye aapke alfaaz.....sply ye kuch sher,

ye alag baat ke kaha hi nahi
bin tere meiN kabhi jiya hi nahi

dard duniya ke baan_ta hi raha
apne zakhmoN ka kuch kia hi nahi

wo mujhay choR kar chala bhi gaya
aur ashqoN ka kuch pata hi nahi

uske qadmoN ki bas mile jannat
yaad iske siwa dua hi nahi

itna gum tha meiN teri baatoN mai
shor ruswaii ka suna hi nahi
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«Reply #3 on: September 28, 2010, 01:22:50 PM »
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Waah waah waah!!!!! Kya kehne Aslam Bhai..

Bahut bahut Khoob
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«Reply #4 on: September 28, 2010, 04:58:45 PM »
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Ehle bazm ki nazar ek adna si khoshish, apni qeemti aara se nawaaziyega


ye alag baat ke kaha hi nahi
bin tere meiN kabhi jiya hi nahi

bawafaaii ka dars yaad rahe
zakhm yuN, jaan kar siya hi nahi

roothne par koii manaata hai
humko is baat ka pata hi nahi

dard duniya ke baan_ta hi raha
apne zakhmoN ka kuch kia hi nahi

mujhko lai jaaye jo nagar tere
aayi aisii koii saba hi nahi

wo mujhay choR kar chala bhi gaya
aur ashqoN ka kuch pata hi nahi

uske qadmoN ki bas mile jannat
yaad iske siwa dua hi nahi

raat aankhoN mai kaise na kat_ti
chaand, badal mai tu chipa hi nahi

itna gum tha meiN teri baatoN mai
shor ruswaii ka suna hi nahi

tum hi aslam na rakh sake qaaboo
isme ashqoN ki kuch khata hi nahi






aslam


  BAHUT KHOOB ASLAM SB...!


              DARD AISA DIYA TUNE ISS GHAREEB KO,
              JAHAAN MEIN ISKI KOI DAWA HI NAHIN..!
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«Reply #5 on: October 10, 2012, 05:19:43 PM »
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Aslam Sahaab Aadaab!


Masha Allaah janab kia kahne waaH bhai waaH kia gazab ki kalaam
kahi hai ... Bhai dil shaad ho gaya humara.. itni pur asar pur
noor dilfareb dilkash kalaam padhkar....  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Janab kia umdaa khayaalaat piroye haiN aapne waaH... bahut khoob..
Har ashaar meiN gazab ki gehrai hai janab... Usual Smile

Meri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Likhate rahiye...
Bazm meiN aate rahiye..

Allaah aapko humesha shaad O aabaad rakhe... aameen
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2012, 03:26:34 AM »
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KHUB KAHA AAINA JI AAPNE BOHUT KHUB
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