Ye Haqeeqat Ke Khwaab Hai Koyee / ये हक़ीक़त के ख़्वाब है कोई...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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ये हक़ीक़त के ख़्वाब है कोई
सामने बेनक़ाब है कोई

उसकी मदहोश कुन नज़र है या
मुद्दतों की शराब है कोई

पी के नज़रों के जाम आँखों से
बहका बहका जनाब है कोई

भेजना कर के सैकड़ों पुर्जे
ख़त का ये भी जवाब है कोई

बन्दगी में तेरी किफायत क्यों
रहमतों का हिसाब है कोई

कुछ न कुछ है कमी, यहाँ सब में
कम है, ज्यादा खराब है कोई

चाँद पर छाये ऐसे बादल हैं
रुख़ पे जैसे नक़ाब है कोई

ज़र न जोरू रही, ज़मीं भी नहीं
मुफलिसी सा अज़ाब है कोई

जिसको देखो 'रक़ीब' पढ़ता है
जैसे चेहरा किताब है कोई
         
    --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

ye haqeeqat ke khwaab hai koyee
saamne benaqaab hai koyee  

uskee madhosh kun nazar hai yaa
muddatoN kee sharaab hai koyee

pee ke nazroN ke jaam aankhoN se
bahka bahka janaab hai koyee  

bhejna kar ke saikadoN purje
khat ka ye bhee jawaab hai koyee

bandagee meN teri kifaayat kyoN
rahmatoN ka hisaab hai koyee

kuchh na kuchh hai kamee, yahaaN sab meN
kam hai,  jyada kharaab hai koyee  

chaNd par chhaaye aaise baadal haiN
rukh pe jaise naqaab hai koyee

zar na joroo rahee, zameeN bhi naheeN
muflisee saa azaab hai koyee

jisko dekho 'Raqeeb' padhta hai
jaise chehra kitaab hai koyee

     --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2012, 12:53:30 PM »
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Shukla saheb mubarak ho. Kya ghazab likha hai aapne. Khaas taur pe doosra sher-

"Uski madhosh-kun nazar hai ya
Muddaton ki sharab hai koi"

to bemissal hai.

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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2012, 12:54:22 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on February 21, 2012, 12:33:08 PM

ये हक़ीक़त के ख़्वाब है कोई
सामने बेनक़ाब है कोई

उसकी मदहोश कुन नज़र है या
मुद्दतों की शराब है कोई

पी के नज़रों के जाम आँखों से
बहका बहका जनाब है कोई

भेजना कर के सैकड़ों पुर्जे
ख़त का ये भी जवाब है कोई

बन्दगी में तेरी किफायत क्यों
रहमतों का हिसाब है कोई

कुछ न कुछ है कमी, यहाँ सब में
कम है, ज्यादा खराब है कोई

चाँद पर छाये ऐसे बादल हैं
रुख़ पे जैसे नक़ाब है कोई

ज़र न जोरू रही, ज़मीं भी नहीं
मुफलिसी सा अज़ाब है कोई

जिसको देखो 'रक़ीब' पढ़ता है
जैसे चेहरा किताब है कोई
          
    --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

ye haqeeqat ke khwaab hai koyee
saamne benaqaab hai koyee  

uskee madhosh kun nazar hai yaa
muddatoN kee sharaab hai koyee

pee ke nazroN ke jaam aankhoN se
bahka bahka janaab hai koyee  

bhejna kar ke saikadoN purje
khat ka ye bhee jawaab hai koyee

bandagee meN teri kifaayat kyoN
rahmatoN ka hisaab hai koyee

kuchh na kuchh hai kamee, yahaaN sab meN
kam hai,  jyada kharaab hai koyee  

chaNd par chhaaye aaise baadal haiN
rukh pe jaise naqaab hai koyee

zar na joroo rahee, zameeN bhi naheeN
muflisee saa azaab hai koyee

jisko dekho 'Raqeeb' padhta hai
jaise chehra kitaab hai koyee

     --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


bahut khoob.......!


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«Reply #3 on: February 21, 2012, 01:16:58 PM »
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waah waah badee dilkash peshkash hai sateesh ji badhaai ho.meree aur se bharpoor daad
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«Reply #4 on: February 21, 2012, 01:43:10 PM »
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Bahut khoob Satish sir

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बन्दगी में तेरी किफायत क्यों
रहमतों का हिसाब है कोई vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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«Reply #5 on: February 21, 2012, 02:32:40 PM »
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Waah bhai Satish ji.Kya khub ghazal kahi hai. Iss sher ne to kamaal kar diya.
    Bhejna kar ke saikdon purze
    Khat ka yeh bhi jawaab hai koi
                       Bahut saadi zubaan aur choti bahr mein khubsurat shairy.Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.Hasan
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«Reply #6 on: February 22, 2012, 05:52:00 AM »
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Janab Iftakhar Sahab,

Ghazal pasand farmane jawab dene
aur hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #7 on: February 22, 2012, 06:57:23 AM »
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Waaaah Waaaah Satish ji..

Bahut Bahut Khooooob...

Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab!!!

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Mujhe Khaas Taur Pe Yeh A'shaar Bahut Pasand Aaya

"Bandagee mein Teri Kifaayat Kyon
 RehmatoN Ka Hisaab Hai Koyee"
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«Reply #8 on: February 22, 2012, 10:07:49 AM »
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Sheba Ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur
hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #9 on: February 22, 2012, 10:11:53 AM »
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Bahut behtrien peskash Satish Sahab hamari bhi mubarakbaad Kabol farmaein  notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #10 on: February 22, 2012, 01:41:01 PM »
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 Bahut aasaan zubaan aur choti bahr mein khubsurat shairy.Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.Sadiq Hasan Rizvi
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«Reply #11 on: February 22, 2012, 03:14:55 PM »
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Raqeeb Saheb,
Bahut umda peshkash.
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Bahut dino baad aapka kalaam padha. Jara jaldi jaldi darshan diya karein.
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«Reply #12 on: February 23, 2012, 07:02:56 AM »
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Bahut Khub Shuklaji...
Karke saikdon purje.... khat ka ye bhi jawab hai koi.....
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«Reply #13 on: February 24, 2012, 09:56:33 AM »
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Saini Shahab,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #14 on: February 24, 2012, 12:38:09 PM »
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mkv ji.

Jawab dene aur ghazal
pasand karen ka bahut
bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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