Yeh dard hai, ki, dhamak hai wafaat ki pahlee?

by abdbundeli on July 01, 2008, 11:04:57 AM
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 Aa naheen paatey? Sahee! Mujhsey kaho aaney ko!
 Eik aawaaz bahut hai, mujhey bulaaney ko!!
 
 Mein manaataa hun: maantey ho! Bhool jaatey ho?
 Aur, ab, aaj bhi taiyaar hoon manaaney ko!

 Shaam, aaney ko abhi baat johtee teyree!
 Raat aayegee, dobaarah mujhey sataaney ko!!
 
 Raat majboor gayee; waaydaa rahaa baaqee!
 Boliye, aur sitam kyaa hai abhi dhaaney ko?

 Mein nahin jaantaa: kis baat sey khafaa hain woh;
 Doosraa aur koun hai, mujhey bataaney ko?

 Aaj, seeney mein, usee dard ka laawaa hogaa!
 Koun beytaab hai, hastee meyree mitaaney ko?

 Tumney achchhaa kiyaa: ronaa sikhaa diyaa mujhko!
 Ab to, har shai hai numoodaar, fir rulaaney ko!!

 Jab kisee dast-e-reishmee kaa khyaal aataa hai:
 Khojtee hai nigaah, har taraf zamaaney ko!

 Tum, jo chhoo dogey eik baar, agar, houley sey:
 Fir, nayee zindagee mil jayegee weeraaney ko!

 Yeh dard hai, ki, dhamak hai wafaat ki pahlee?
 Daawar-e-hashra, mukhaatib hai aazmaaney ko!

 Woh meyree Maan hai: zaraa jor ki thapkee dee hai;
 'Abd', patah hai mujhey, chain sey sulaaney ko!
 
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«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2008, 06:18:40 PM »
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wah wah wah!! ek ajeeb se khayal aa raha tha padte waqat.. jaise mai khidki ke pass chair per baithy, band ankhein kiye, yah gazal khud main gunguna rahi thi.. Ajeeb magar man ko bahoot shant kar gai!
samjh main nahi aa raha ki kaya likhu!! Apki yah gazal bahoot apni se lagi!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2009, 06:50:21 AM »
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wah wah wah!! ek ajeeb se khayal aa raha tha padte waqat.. jaise mai khidki ke pass chair per baithy, band ankhein kiye, yah gazal khud main gunguna rahi thi.. Ajeeb magar man ko bahoot shant kar gai!
samjh main nahi aa raha ki kaya likhu!! Apki yah gazal bahoot apni se lagi!!

Shukriyah Pooja ji!

'Dard' aur 'Hijra' key ahsaas to 'international' hain! Aap ko 'gazal' ney gahraayee tak chhuaa: yah aapki 'wyakti-sulabh komaltaa' hai, 'sahrudayata' hai! Shukraguzaar hun!

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«Reply #3 on: August 01, 2009, 07:00:10 AM »
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Tareefe kabil peshkash ABD ji .. hamesha ki tarah Lajawaab Rachna hai .. Bahoot bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #4 on: August 01, 2009, 07:05:27 AM »
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Tareefe kabil peshkash ABD ji .. hamesha ki tarah Lajawaab Rachna hai .. Bahoot bahoot Khoob!
Thanks a lot Sophi!
       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2009, 07:10:50 AM »
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Aapka to koi jabaab hi nahi
Tareef ko koi alfaaz nahi
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«Reply #6 on: August 01, 2009, 07:11:12 AM »
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Aapka to koi jabaab hi nahi
Tareef ko koi alfaaz nahi
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #7 on: August 01, 2009, 07:16:35 AM »
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Aapka to koi jabaab hi nahi
Tareef ko koi alfaaz nahi

Tah-e-dil sey shukraguzaar hun, aap key 'shahad mein doobey' in alfaaz kaa! Zarrah nawaazee key liye shukriyah, sarfaraz_sagar ji!
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