Yeh nisf shab hai noubahaar kee pahlee aahat!

by abdbundeli on October 11, 2013, 03:49:05 PM
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Dosto!
Do-teen din pahley, main ney is gazal key pahley do asha'ar 'khumar-e-ishq' mein post kiye they! Ab pooree gazal peysh kar rahaa huun, 'title' badal kar! Mulaahizah farmaayen:

Zad-e-nigaah–e-tasawwur ye teyraa ghar to nahiin?
Ye teyraa dar hii kahiin meyraa muqaddar to nahiin?
 
Abra sey kaisey, barq ko main alahdah kar duun?
Ye zar-e-shafq  mukhaatib, aseel-e-zar to nahiin?

Ajeeb itrayez baad-e-sabaa hai masruuf:
Qareeb is dagar key yaar kaa shahar to naheen?

Yeh nisf shab hai noubahaar kee pahlee aahat:
Gunchah-e-gulbun-e-jawaan beykhabar to naheen?

Bujhey hain chaand-sitaarey, rawaan hai taareeqee;
Wo nuur-e-arsh zudah, uskaa naamahbar to naheen?

Binaa piye hi, sarkhushee kaa yeh suruur, ‘abd’,
Meyrey huzuur-e-jigar kaa nihaan asar to naheen?

                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2013, 03:55:28 PM »
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Zad-e-nigaah–e-tasawwur ye teyraa ghar to nahiin?
Ye teyraa dar hii kahiin meyraa muqaddar to nahiin?
 
Abra sey kaisey, barq ko main alahdah kar duun?
Ye zar-e-shafq  mukhaatib, aseel-e-zar to nahiin?

Ajeeb itrayez baad-e-sabaa hai masruuf:
Qareeb is dagar key yaar kaa shahar to naheen?

Yeh nisf shab hai noubahaar kee pahlee aahat:
Gunchah-e-gulbun-e-jawaan beykhabar to naheen?

Bujhey hain chaand-sitaarey, rawaan hai taareeqee;
Wo nuur-e-arsh zudah, uskaa naamahbar to naheen?

Binaa piye hi, sarkhushee kaa yeh suruur, ‘abd’,
Meyrey huzuur-e-jigar kaa nihaan asar to naheen?

bahut khoob abd ji

ek rau ke saaath daaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2013, 04:10:09 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2013, 04:14:54 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 11, 2013, 03:55:28 PM
Zad-e-nigaah–e-tasawwur ye teyraa ghar to nahiin?
Ye teyraa dar hii kahiin meyraa muqaddar to nahiin?
 
Abra sey kaisey, barq ko main alahdah kar duun?
Ye zar-e-shafq  mukhaatib, aseel-e-zar to nahiin?

Ajeeb itrayez baad-e-sabaa hai masruuf:
Qareeb is dagar key yaar kaa shahar to naheen?

Yeh nisf shab hai noubahaar kee pahlee aahat:
Gunchah-e-gulbun-e-jawaan beykhabar to naheen?

Bujhey hain chaand-sitaarey, rawaan hai taareeqee;
Wo nuur-e-arsh zudah, uskaa naamahbar to naheen?

Binaa piye hi, sarkhushee kaa yeh suruur, ‘abd’,
Meyrey huzuur-e-jigar kaa nihaan asar to naheen?

bahut khoob abd ji

ek rau ke saaath daaaaaaaaaaaaaaad



Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suresh ji!
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2013, 04:16:31 PM »
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Quote from: parinde on October 11, 2013, 04:10:09 PM
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Parinde ji, bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2013, 05:28:04 PM »
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Zad-e-nigaah–e-tasawwur ye teyraa ghar to nahiin?
Ye teyraa dar hii kahiin meyraa muqaddar to nahiin?
 
Abra sey kaisey, barq ko main alahdah kar duun?
Ye zar-e-shafq  mukhaatib, aseel-e-zar to nahiin?

Ajeeb itrayez baad-e-sabaa hai masruuf:
Qareeb is dagar key yaar kaa shahar to naheen?

Yeh nisf shab hai noubahaar kee pahlee aahat:
Gunchah-e-gulbun-e-jawaan beykhabar to naheen?

Zabardast.!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2013, 06:24:48 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 11, 2013, 05:28:04 PM
Zad-e-nigaah–e-tasawwur ye teyraa ghar to nahiin?
Ye teyraa dar hii kahiin meyraa muqaddar to nahiin?
 
Abra sey kaisey, barq ko main alahdah kar duun?
Ye zar-e-shafq  mukhaatib, aseel-e-zar to nahiin?

Ajeeb itrayez baad-e-sabaa hai masruuf:
Qareeb is dagar key yaar kaa shahar to naheen?

Yeh nisf shab hai noubahaar kee pahlee aahat:
Gunchah-e-gulbun-e-jawaan beykhabar to naheen?

Zabardast.!!

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Ravi ji!
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2013, 10:40:49 PM »
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Is baakamaal ghazal par dheron daad Abd sahab
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Quote from: zarraa on October 11, 2013, 10:40:49 PM
Is baakamaal ghazal par dheron daad Abd sahab

Zarraa ji, bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #9 on: October 12, 2013, 07:50:32 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaah... bahut bahut bahut khooooooooooooooob... dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2013, 07:55:12 PM »
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Bhut khub...
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Quote from: aqsh on October 12, 2013, 07:50:32 PM
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaah... bahut bahut bahut khooooooooooooooob... dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad...

Bahut-bahut-bahut shukriyah, Aqsh ji!
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Quote from: danish305 on October 12, 2013, 07:55:12 PM
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Bhut khub...

Shukriyah, janab Danish ji!
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