Yeh sach hai, saaqiyah pilaa chukee hai mujhey khoob!

by abdbundeli on August 08, 2012, 08:45:56 AM
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Ab tujhsey kyaa chhupaauun dour-e-qabra ugey doob?
Yeh sach hai, saaqiyah pilaa chukee hai mujhey khoob!

In lamhoun kaa bhi zikra karuungaa zaroor main;
Kyoun dour-e-noor-e-husn sey hoti naheen hai oob?

Har simt deykhtaa hun qayaamat kee khoonkasee:
Kyaa ho gayaa hai aaj aadmee ko, ay Aiyoob*!

Dikhtey hain laamband kabhee mashriq-o-shimaal;
Lagtey hain laamband kabhee magrib-o-junoob!

Hai door aashiyaanah-ae-bakaa, ao' nazar-e-naaz!
Bahr-e-uyoon mein na, sanam, jaaye 'abd' doob?

*Aik paigambar kaa naam, jinhain beyintihaa sabramand (sabra-e-Aiyoob) kahaa jaataa hai! Wey sabra-o-shukra key himaayatee kahey jaatey hain!

अब  तुझसे  क्या  छुपाऊँ  दौरे कब्र  उगे  दूब ?
यह  सच  है , साकियः  पिला  चुकी  है  मुझे  खूब !

इन  लम्हौं  का  भी  ज़िक्र  करूंगा  ज़रूर  मैं ;
क्योँ  दौरे नूरे हुस्न  से  होती  नहीं  है  ऊब ?

हर  सिम्त  देखता  हूँ  क़यामत  की  खूंकसी :
क्या  हो  गया  है  आज  आदमी  को , अय  ऐयूब *!

दिखते  हैं  लामबंद  कभी  मश्रिको  शिमाल ;
लगते  हैं  लामबंद  कभी  मग्रिबो जुनूब !

है  दूर  आशियाना-ए-बका , औ' नज़रे नाज़ !
बहरे उयून  में  न , सनम , जाये  'अबद' डूब ?

*एक  पैगम्बर  का  नाम , जिन्हें  बेइंतिहा   सब्रमंद  (सब्रे ऐयूब) कहा  जाता  है ! वे  सब्रो शुक्र  के  हिमायती  कहे  जाते  हैं !

  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2012, 08:52:25 AM »
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wah kya bat hai
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2012, 10:01:30 AM »
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Ab tujhsey kyaa chhupaauun dour-e-qabra ugey doob?
Yeh sach hai, saaqiyah pilaa chukee hai mujhey khoob!

In lamhoun kaa bhi zikra karuungaa zaroor main;
Kyoun dour-e-noor-e-husn sey hoti naheen hai oob? Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Applause Applause

Har simt deykhtaa hun qayaamat kee khoonkasee:
Kyaa ho gayaa hai aaj aadmee ko, ay Aiyoob*! Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Dikhtey hain laamband kabhee mashriq-o-shimaal;
Lagtey hain laamband kabhee magrib-o-junoob!

Hai door aashiyaanah-ae-bakaa, ao' nazar-e-naaz!
Bahr-e-uyoon mein na, sanam, jaaye 'abd' doob? Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

*Aik paigambar kaa naam, jinhain beyintihaa sabramand (sabra-e-Aiyoob) kahaa jaataa hai! Wey sabra-o-shukra key himaayatee kahey jaatey hain!

  - abd bundeli


kya khoob kafia istemaal kiya hai abd.
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2012, 10:05:56 AM »
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wah kya bat hai

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'nandbahu' ji!
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2012, 10:31:27 AM »
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kya khoob kafia istemaal kiya hai abd.


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Khamosh' ji! Aapko radeef / qaafiyah key alfaaz pasand aaye : mujhey khushee huyee!
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2012, 02:51:38 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2012, 03:10:30 PM »
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Shukriyah, 'Hriday' ji!
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«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2012, 04:07:06 PM »
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bahut khub bahut hi umda qalaam ABD sir........

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«Reply #8 on: August 09, 2012, 06:06:32 AM »
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bahut khub bahut hi umda qalaam ABD sir........

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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Soudagar' ji!
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«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2012, 04:31:28 PM »
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bahut khoob janab
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«Reply #10 on: August 10, 2012, 06:35:59 AM »
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bahut khoob janab

Shukriyah bhai!
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«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2012, 03:28:02 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: August 11, 2012, 04:01:05 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne
kuchh alfaz samajh na saka phir bhi
parh ke bahut hi achha laga mujhey

jaisa aapne likha hai vaisa hi kuchh kuchh sochta hoon main
ARZ HAI
Oobta nahin koi us se jis  ko chahta hai wo
Khuda se bhi uski salaamati mangtaa  hai wo

Sunahri lamhon ki yaad dil men sanjoye huye
Guzaar deta hai khushi se apni zindagi wo 


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«Reply #13 on: August 12, 2012, 06:26:44 AM »
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bahut khoob

Shukriyah, Saini ji!
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«Reply #14 on: August 12, 2012, 06:30:24 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne
kuchh alfaz samajh na saka phir bhi
parh ke bahut hi achha laga mujhey

jaisa aapne likha hai vaisa hi kuchh kuchh sochta hoon main
ARZ HAI
Oobta nahin koi us se jis  ko chahta hai wo
Khuda se bhi uski salaamati mangtaa  hai wo

Sunahri lamhon ki yaad dil men sanjoye huye
Guzaar deta hai khushi se apni zindagi wo 

Shukriyah, Dhamija ji! Aapney achchhaa likhaa hai! Likhtey rahiye!
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