...YEH SHARAARAT AAP KI .................... HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: January 24, 2012, 05:13:34 PM »
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adil bechain  saheb ,  Hausla  afzai  ke  liye  bahut  bahut  shukriya . Hasan
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«Reply #16 on: January 24, 2012, 05:18:45 PM »
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Mujh ko   samjha   pyaar   ke   qabil , Inayat   aap ki ,
PathharoN   se   chun   liya   Heera  , Zihanat  aap ki ! Applause Applause Applause Applause SHANDAAR MATLA

DoosroN   se   kya   kahooN   abb , khauf   hai   Ruswaai  ka ,
Bus   karooN ga   aap   hi   say   maiN  Shikayat   aapki Applause Applause Applause

Aa ke   peechhe   say   Achanak  jo   lipat   jaate   haiN  aap ,
Jaan   lay legee   kisi   din   yeh   Sharaarat   aap ki Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Qaid   hoon   maiN   eik - tarfa   ishq   ke   ilzaam   meiN ,
Munsifon   ko   chaahiye   abb   bus   Zamaanat   aap ki Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thhaam   kar   ungli , pahunch   jaate   haiN   BaanhoN  tak   raqeeb ,
Day  na  day   dhoka   kisi   din   yeh   Murawwat   aapki Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Pal  meiN   kar leta   hooN   main  abb  Be - wafaaoN  ki   shinakht ,
Dhoondhta   hooN   sirf   chehroN   meiN   Shabaahat   aap ki Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kya   safaai   deiN , koi   Shahid  na  pairokaar   hai ,
Aap ke   ilzaam   saare , har   Adaalat   aap ki Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Hum - nawa  kar  lay gi  ek din sub  RaqeeboN  ko   'Hasan' ,
Pyaar   se   dil   jeetne   meiN   yeh   Mahaarat   aap ki Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause BAHUT UMDA MAQTA

pichle comment se dil nahi bhara. dobara padha to dobara comment se khud ko na rok saka.
isi radif par apni kaafee pahle kahi ghazal ka
matla aur ek she'r aapki nazr hai...

"दिल से रक्खेंगे लगाकर हर निशानी आपकी
 हम न भूलेंगे कभी भी मेहरबानी आपकी"

"कह दिया मैंने ख़ता मेरी है लेकिन थी नहीं
 सोचकर ये बढ़ न जाए बदगुमानी आपकी"

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

Vaah Vaah Satish Sir
Maan gaye..khoob lulf liya maine apke ash'aaroN ka.. bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #17 on: January 24, 2012, 05:38:55 PM »
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Wah Bohat Khoob Janaab Hasan Saheb Dad Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: January 25, 2012, 04:28:19 AM »
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Wah wah wah Siddiqui sahab kamaal ki ghazal likhi hai aapne. Parhkar mazaa aa gaya. Aisi murassa ghazal bahot kam parhne ko milti hai. Hazaron daad pesh karta hun.
Riaz ashna sahaeb. Adab. Aap ka tabsira padhkar
bahut hausla mila.Guzarish hai ki meri adna koshishon
pe aage bhi nazr dalte  aur apni qimti rai se nawazte
rahein.Duago, Hasan
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«Reply #19 on: January 25, 2012, 11:28:29 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!!!

Kya Kehne Saheb..Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooob!!!!

Khumar-e-ishq Mein Doobi Hui Yeh Ghazal par hazaaroN Daad..

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Khwaish ji . Hamesha hi aap apne khuloos
se labrez alfaaz mein hausla afzai karte hain .
Bahut mamnoon hoon. Bahut  hausla milta hai.
                              Duaaein , Hasan
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«Reply #20 on: January 25, 2012, 03:21:49 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hasan Sir
Applause Applause
mobile ki vajah se jyada nahi likh paa raha hu.
mkv  ji . bahut  bahut  shukriya . Mobile  ho
ya laptop apka khuloos har haal mein asardaar hai.
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«Reply #21 on: January 25, 2012, 04:49:06 PM »
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Mujh ko   samjha   pyaar   ke   qabil , Inayat   aap ki ,
PathharoN   se   chun   liya   Heera  , Zihanat  aap ki !

DoosroN   se   kya   kahooN   abb , khauf   hai   Ruswaai  ka ,
Bus   karooN ga   aap   hi   say   maiN  Shikayat   aapki

Aa ke   peechhe   say   Achanak  jo   lipat   jaate   haiN  aap ,
Jaan   lay legee   kisi   din   yeh   Sharaarat   aap ki

Qaid   hoon   maiN   eik - tarfa   ishq   ke   ilzaam   meiN ,
Munsifon   ko   chaahiye   abb   bus   Zamaanat   aap ki

Thhaam   kar   ungli , pahunch   jaate   haiN   BaanhoN  tak   raqeeb ,
Day  na  day   dhoka   kisi   din   yeh   Murawwat   aapki

Pal  meiN   kar leta   hooN   maiN  abb  Be - wafaaoN  ki   shinakht ,
Dhoondhta   hooN   sirf   chehroN   meiN   Shabaahat   aap ki

Kya   safaai   deiN , koi   Shahid  na  pairokaar   hai ,
Aap ke   ilzaam   saare , har   Adaalat   aap ki

Hum - nawa  kar  lay gi  ek din sub  RaqeeboN  ko   'Hasan' ,
Pyaar   se   dil   jeetne   meiN   yeh   Mahaarat   aap ki

Waah! Hasan Saheb! Bahut umda.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: January 25, 2012, 05:35:59 PM »
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lajawaab Ghazal hasan ji
Sarfira ji . Ghazal pasand karne aur hausla
dene ke liye bahut shukriya.Khush rahein.Hasan
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«Reply #23 on: January 25, 2012, 08:09:49 PM »
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Hasan saheb waqyee mein
Pyaar se dil jeet lena hai Mahaarat aap ki
Gazhal ne RaqeeboN ka dil jeeta ho ya na jeeta ho magar dostoN ka dil zaroor jeet liya hai. Bahut bahut mubarak ho
Khuda Hafiz

Sadiq saheb, Adab . Khoobsurat , purkhuloos
tabsire  ke  liye  bahut  mashkoor  hoon . Aap
jaise  doston   ka  khuloos  hi  hai  jis  se
hausla   milta  hai   aur  har   achhi  buri
koshish   share  karne  ki  himmat padti hai.
Bahut  shukriya. Hasan

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«Reply #24 on: January 26, 2012, 03:50:11 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Hasan Saheb.. Dil Ke Taar Ched diye Aapki Pyaar me Doobi is Gazal Ne.. Bahut Bahut Umda Aur Mohabbat bhari Peshkash Hai.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #25 on: January 26, 2012, 06:48:26 AM »
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Kya   safaai   deiN , koi   Shahid  na  pairokaar   hai ,
Aap ke   ilzaam   saare , har   Adaalat   aap ki

Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhh
 Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Bhai Wah kahen ke aah ,,Allah Allah kya ghazal kahi hai Apne ,, Ghazal sar sa paa Lajawab hai ,,,Apki tareef karna to suraj ko diya dikhane wali baat hai sahab ..Hazarah dad apke Huzoor ....Allah apko khush rakhe ..


Dua go

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Qadeer saheb , bahut mamnoon hoon ki aap ne apne
mohabbat bhare tabsire se  nawaaza  aur khaksaar ki
hausla afzai ki. Aap ke kalaam ka bechaini se intizar
rahta hai. Ummeed karta hoon ki aap Yoindia Shayariadab per silsila
qaaim rakheinge.Duago , Hasan
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«Reply #26 on: January 26, 2012, 10:32:26 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Ab maaloom hua mujhe hichkiyaab kyon
aa rahee theen subh se, to ye aap haih
jo apni ek khoobsoorat ghazal men baar
baar mujhe nazm kar rahe the.

Waah waah bahut khoob....

Dili mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayen.

"aa ke peechhe se achanak jo lipat jaate hain aap
 jaan ley legee kisee dina ye sharaarat aapki"
 
kya kahney...

Isee radif par apni kaafee pahle kahi ghazal ka
matla aur ek she'r aapki nazr hai...

"दिल से रक्खेंगे लगाकर हर निशानी आपकी
 हम न भूलेंगे कभी भी मेहरबानी आपकी"

"कह दिया मैंने ख़ता मेरी है लेकिन थी नहीं
 सोचकर ये बढ़ न जाए बदगुमानी आपकी"

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

Satish ji , Adab. Itne arse tak Bazm se door
raheinge to Hichkiyon  ke zariye hi bulaana padega .
Aap aaye aur apni mohabbat se aur khubsurat ashaar
ke tohfe se  nawaaza , isske liye tah  dil se ,shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #27 on: January 26, 2012, 10:53:45 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #28 on: January 26, 2012, 03:15:50 PM »
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«Reply #29 on: January 26, 2012, 06:46:28 PM »
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Haye Haye.. Kya baat hai Hasan ji.. Maar hi daala aapne tho.. BaHoot Bahoot Umda aur bahoot Shandaar likha hai.. Lajawaab !

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Nyshaji , Ghazal pasand karne aur hausla
dene ke liye bahut shukriya.Khush rahiye. Hasan
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