Yeh to patah thaa, tum ho musalsal kaheen yaheen!

by abdbundeli on December 18, 2008, 03:12:26 PM
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Yeh to patah thaa, tum ho musalsal kaheen yaheen!
Tab bhi, tumhain pukaartaa firaa hoon har kaheen!!

Yah kaisee qaraabat hai, magar, ay meyrey mahboob,
Zad mein nazar key, chaah bhi, paayaa tumhain naheen?

Us ney kahaa thaa, “Ham, tumhain, un sey milaayengey!”
Par,  raahbar wo, ham ko dobaarah milaa naheen!!

Fir fusfusaa rahee hai dol baad-e-shab-e-nisf,
“Woh aaj bhi yaheen hai, raheygaa bhi kal yaheen!!”

Har lamhey, shab-o-roz, hoon beytaab wasl ko;
Wo koun se jagah hai, ki, khojaa jahaan naheen?

Kyoun lag rahaa hai aaj mujhey (Sun rahey ho tum?),
In dharhkanoun mein tum ho: zamaaney sey ho yaheen!!

Mein poochhtaa rahaa hoon tumhaaraa patah, ‘abd’,
Par, aaj tak, kisee ney bataayaa mujhey naheen!

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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2010, 03:26:28 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 18, 2008, 03:12:26 PM
Yeh to patah thaa, tum ho musalsal kaheen yaheen!
Tab bhi, tumhain pukaartaa firaa hoon har kaheen!!

Yah kaisee qaraabat hai, magar, ay meyrey mahboob,
Zad mein nazar key, chaah bhi, paayaa tumhain naheen?

Us ney kahaa thaa, “Ham, tumhain, un sey milaayengey!”
Par,  raahbar wo, ham ko dobaarah milaa naheen!!

Fir fusfusaa rahee hai dol baad-e-shab-e-nisf,
“Woh aaj bhi yaheen hai, raheygaa bhi kal yaheen!!”

Har lamhey, shab-o-roz, hoon beytaab wasl ko;
Wo koun se jagah hai, ki, khojaa jahaan naheen?

Kyoun lag rahaa hai aaj mujhey (Sun rahey ho tum?),
In dharhkanoun mein tum ho: zamaaney sey ho yaheen!!

Mein poochhtaa rahaa hoon tumhaaraa patah, ‘abd’,
Par, aaj tak, kisee ney bataayaa mujhey naheen!

                                        - abd bundeli


Wonderful..  Applause Applause

Jisko tai kar na sake aadmi sehra hai vohi
Aur aakhir mere raste mein bi aaya hai vohi

Ye alag baat ki hum raat ko hi dekh sake
Verna din ko bi sitaron ka tamasha hai vohi

Apne mausam mein pasand aaya hai koyi chehra
Verna mausam, to badalte rahe, chehra hai vohi

Ek lamhe mein zamana hua utpatti "Roja"
Vohi lamuha hai yahan aur zamana hai vohi

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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2010, 04:13:30 PM »
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Waah KYa khoob Likha hai ABD ji.. Bahoot Bahoot khoob

Bahoot Khoob Roja. Good work !
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«Reply #3 on: January 15, 2010, 02:04:27 PM »
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Quote from: Roja_malar on January 13, 2010, 03:26:28 PM
Wonderful..  Applause Applause


Jisko tai kar na sake aadmi sehra hai vohi
Aur aakhir mere raste mein bi aaya hai vohi

Ye alag baat ki hum raat ko hi dekh sake
Verna din ko bi sitaron ka tamasha hai vohi

Apne mausam mein pasand aaya hai koyi chehra
Verna mausam, to badalte rahe, chehra hai vohi

Ek lamhe mein zamana hua utpatti "Roja"
Vohi lamuha hai yahan aur zamana hai vohi



Thanks Roja!

Smrutiyoun key aakaash mein,
Sansthaapit hai meet!
Eikaakee hoon: satya hai;
Fir bhee, gaataa geet!!

        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2010, 02:12:29 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on January 13, 2010, 04:13:30 PM
Waah KYa khoob Likha hai ABD ji.. Bahoot Bahoot khoob

Bahoot Khoob Roja. Good work !

Thanks a lot, Sophi ji!

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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2010, 04:07:53 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on January 13, 2010, 04:13:30 PM
Waah KYa khoob Likha hai ABD ji.. Bahoot Bahoot khoob

Bahoot Khoob Roja. Good work !

Thanks dear divya
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«Reply #6 on: January 28, 2010, 04:28:01 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 15, 2010, 02:04:27 PM
Thanks Roja!

Smrutiyoun key aakaash mein,
Sansthaapit hai meet!
Eikaakee hoon: satya hai;
Fir bhee, gaataa geet!!

        - abd bundeli

aisa kya?...  Usual Smile

Ye karvaane-waqt kasak chod jayega
Her raste pe apne sabak chod jayega

Maroge tum gulel parinde ko, aur vo
Udte huwe bi apni chehak chod jayega

Jugnu ki sadgi ka mai kaise karu bayan
Mer jayega, magar vo chamak chod jayega

Hai chand to likhega mere haat per naman
Aakash hai to apna ufak chod jayega

Utrega badalon ki tarah lams jab tera
Meri hatheliyon pe chanak chod jayega

Barood banke aayega vo mere ghar kabhi
Kuch de na de, per apni dhamak chod jayega

Tum mante hai apna muqaddar jisse, "malli"
Zakhamon pe tere vo bi namak chod jayega...
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«Reply #7 on: January 28, 2010, 04:48:33 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 18, 2008, 03:12:26 PM
Yeh to patah thaa, tum ho musalsal kaheen yaheen!
Tab bhi, tumhain pukaartaa firaa hoon har kaheen!!

Yah kaisee qaraabat hai, magar, ay meyrey mahboob,
Zad mein nazar key, chaah bhi, paayaa tumhain naheen?

Us ney kahaa thaa, “Ham, tumhain, un sey milaayengey!”
Par,  raahbar wo, ham ko dobaarah milaa naheen!!

Fir fusfusaa rahee hai dol baad-e-shab-e-nisf,
“Woh aaj bhi yaheen hai, raheygaa bhi kal yaheen!!”

Har lamhey, shab-o-roz, hoon beytaab wasl ko;
Wo koun se jagah hai, ki, khojaa jahaan naheen?

Kyoun lag rahaa hai aaj mujhey (Sun rahey ho tum?),
In dharhkanoun mein tum ho: zamaaney sey ho yaheen!!

Mein poochhtaa rahaa hoon tumhaaraa patah, ‘abd’,
Par, aaj tak, kisee ney bataayaa mujhey naheen!

                                        - abd bundeli


bahot khoob.
lafz, chun chun ke daalein hein,
aur har line ik matlab rakhti hai...
inshaa allah...likhte raho...
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«Reply #8 on: January 28, 2010, 04:59:25 PM »
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aisa kya?...  Usual Smile

Ye karvaane-waqt kasak chod jayega
Her raste pe apne sabak chod jayega

Maroge tum gulel parinde ko, aur vo
Udte huwe bi apni chehak chod jayega

Jugnu ki sadgi ka mai kaise karu bayan
Mer jayega, magar vo chamak chod jayega

Hai chand to likhega mere haat per naman
Aakash hai to apna ufak chod jayega

Utrega badalon ki tarah lams jab tera
Meri hatheliyon pe chanak chod jayega

Barood banke aayega vo mere ghar kabhi
Kuch de na de, per apni dhamak chod jayega

Tum mante hai apna muqaddar jisse, "malli"
Zakhamon pe tere vo bi namak chod jayega...



Bahut khoob! Eikdam Roja-saa likhtee lagtee ho?
"Tuu mantee hai apna muqaddar jisse, 'malli',
 Zakhamon pe tere vo bhi namak chhod jayega!"
Waah, bhai waah!

Gul-afsaanee bhee naheen,
Kar paataa huun khoob!
Reysham-saa naajuk badan
Hai meyraa mahboob!!

       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: January 28, 2010, 05:11:57 PM »
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Bahut khoob! Eikdam Roja-saa likhtee lagtee ho?
"Tuu mantee hai apna muqaddar jisse, 'malli',
 Zakhamon pe tere vo bhi namak chhod jayega!"
Waah, bhai waah!

Gul-afsaanee bhee naheen,
Kar paataa huun khoob!
Reysham-saa naajuk badan
Hai meyraa mahboob!!

       - abd bundeli

Bahut bahut thanks Uncle ji... hame bi apna baccha hi samjo  icon_thumleft
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Bahut bahut thanks Uncle ji... hame bi apna baccha hi samjo  icon_thumleft

You're welcome, malli ji!

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«Reply #11 on: January 30, 2010, 03:28:12 AM »
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Bahut khoob!

Gul-afsaanee bhee naheen,
Kar paataa huun khoob!
Reysham-saa naajuk badan
Hai meyraa mahboob!!

       - abd bundeli


accha  Usual Smile love4


Saari dunia keh rahi hai tera diwana mujhe
Kya kayamat hai ye tumne bi nahi pehchana mujhe
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«Reply #12 on: January 30, 2010, 10:43:30 AM »
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Quote from: malli on January 30, 2010, 03:28:12 AM
accha  Usual Smile love4


Saari dunia kah rahi hai tera diwana mujhe
Kya kayamat hai, ki, tuune bhi na pehichana mujhe


Mein azal sey jaantaa hun apney chaarahsaaz ko!
Kyoun na pahichaanungaa fir uskee aham aawaaz ko?
Har shafaq mein muskuraataa paa rahaa hun mein, 'abd';
Harqat-e-dil mein nihaan paataa hun uskey saaz ko!!

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«Reply #13 on: January 30, 2010, 10:46:37 AM »
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bahot khoob.
lafz, chun chun ke daalein hein,
aur har line ik matlab rakhti hai...
inshaa allah...likhte raho...

Shukriyah, bahut-bahut shukriyah, guhar ji!

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Mein azal sey jaantaa hun apney chaarahsaaz ko!
Kyoun na pahichaanungaa fir uskee aham aawaaz ko?
Har shafaq mein muskuraataa paa rahaa hun mein, 'abd';
Harqat-e-dil mein nihaan paataa hun uskey saaz ko!!

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