YUUN BIKHRI ZINDAGI KI BIKHARTI CHALI GAYEE ........... HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: December 11, 2012, 01:10:20 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 11, 2012, 06:02:30 AM

Tere   bina    bhi   garche   guzarti   chalee   gayee  ,
Yuun   bikhri    Zinagi  ki   bikharti  chalee   gayee

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Kaisa   tilism   thha   tere    Naqsh - o - nigar   ka  ,
Tasweer   seedhi   dil   meiN   utarti  chalee   gayee

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Hum nay  to  sirf   pyaar  se  pheri  thheeN   UngliyaaN , 
Zulf - e - Siyaah   khood   hi   sanwarti  chalee  gayee

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Us ke   baghair   jaise    khalaaoN    meiN   ho   Wujood ,
Jis par  qadam  tikay   thhe  woh  dharti  chalee   gayee

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Mazloom    har     sawaal    pe    khamosh    hee    raha  ,
Tasweer - e - Dard   khood   hi   ubharti   chalee   gayee

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Koshish    hui    hazaar    ki   Seerat    bigaad     deiN  ,
Teri    Shabeeh     aur     nikharti     chalee     gayee

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Tanqeed   ka   nishaana   baneeN    ghazleiN    is   qadar  ,
Khood   Shaairy  ' Hasan '  ki   sudharti   chalee   gayee
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wah wah wah "HASAN" SAHAB WAH ...WONDERFUL
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«Reply #16 on: December 11, 2012, 02:26:52 PM »
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Waah waah waah Hasan saheb, ek laajawaab ghazal, maza aa gaya padh kar. Khaastaur pe 6th she'r bahut pasand aaya. DheroN daad-o-mubarakbaad aur ek Rau bhi.
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«Reply #17 on: December 11, 2012, 02:51:23 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 11, 2012, 06:02:30 AM

Tere   bina    bhi   garche   guzarti   chalee   gayee  ,
Yuun   bikhri    Zinagi  ki   bikharti  chalee   gayee

sorry dear, kya karoo.n halaat se majboor hoon.maaf bhi kar do naa. icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Kaisa   tilism   thha   tere    Naqsh - o - nigar   ka  ,
Tasweer   seedhi   dil   meiN   utarti  chalee   gayee

acha main monalisa se bhi ya cleopatra se bhi aage hoon.aaj pata chala Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Hum nay  to  sirf   pyaar  se  pheri  thheeN   UngliyaaN ,  
Zulf - e - Siyaah   khood   hi   sanwarti  chalee  gayee
ghalat bilkul ghalat meri zulf golden hai ji tum ne dhayaan se nahin dekha. vais ye tajurba kis pe kiya hai tumne. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased

Us ke   baghair   jaise    khalaaoN    meiN   ho   Wujood ,
Jis par  qadam  tikay   thhe  woh  dharti  chalee   gayee
ye ek dum classical sher hai. main ise respect deti hoon tearyeyed tearyeyed

Mazloom    har     sawaal    pe    khamosh    hee    raha  ,
Tasweer - e - Dard   khood   hi   ubharti   chalee   gayee
wah wah wah.per kab se tum mazloom ho gaye. zulm bhi tum se ghabrata hai.ye jhoot-moot ki sympathy gain karne ki puraani aadat gayi nahin. mujhe bhi aise hi lafzo.n mein kabhi ghera thaa aaj tak nikal nahin paayi hoon Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

Koshish    hui    hazaar    ki   Seerat    bigaad     deiN  ,
Teri    Shabeeh     aur     nikharti     chalee     gayee
aur rakho raqeebo.n ko saath apne . icon_geek icon_geek

Tanqeed   ka   nishaana   baneeN    ghazleiN    is   qadar  ,
Khood   Shaairy  ' Hasan '  ki   sudharti   chalee   gayee

ab iss se zayada aur kitni sudhrein gi mujh jaise shayro.n mein shumaar ho gaya ab kya meer, ghalib ke chakkar mein phans gaye ho Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard



bahut nafis,bahut umda fazal sahab....!
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«Reply #18 on: December 11, 2012, 03:12:03 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on December 11, 2012, 02:51:23 PM


bahut nafis,bahut umda fazal sahab....!
Waah , Sheba  ji . Inhin  pyaare  pyaare  comments  ko  bahut  miss  kar raha  thha . Bazm  se  itni  taweel  judaai  theek  nahin . ... Guzarish hai 6th sher  par  eik  baar  phir  nazar  daal  lijye . Jaldi  mein  shayed  aap us ka wider  context  miss kar gayi hain . Bahut  shukriya  aur duaaein.HASAN
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«Reply #19 on: December 11, 2012, 06:13:34 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 11, 2012, 06:02:30 AM

Tere   bina    bhi   garche   guzarti   chalee   gayee  ,
Yuun   bikhri    Zinagi  ki   bikharti  chalee   gayee


Kaisa   tilism   thha   tere    Naqsh - o - nigar   ka  ,
Tasweer   seedhi   dil   meiN   utarti  chalee   gayee


Hum nay  to  sirf   pyaar  se  pheri  thheeN   UngliyaaN , 
Zulf - e - Siyaah   khood   hi   sanwarti  chalee  gayee


Us ke   baghair   jaise    khalaaoN    meiN   ho   Wujood ,
Jis par  qadam  tikay   thhe  woh  dharti  chalee   gayee


Mazloom    har     sawaal    pe    khamosh    hee    raha  ,
Tasweer - e - Dard   khood   hi   ubharti   chalee   gayee


Koshish    hui    hazaar    ki   Seerat    bigaad     deiN  ,
Teri    Shabeeh     aur     nikharti     chalee     gayee


Tanqeed   ka   nishaana   baneeN    ghazleiN    is   qadar  ,
Khood   Shaairy  ' Hasan '  ki   sudharti   chalee   gayee


Bahut Bahut Khooooooob Saheb!!!!

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«Reply #20 on: December 12, 2012, 01:29:24 AM »
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Quote from: Alam Qazi on December 11, 2012, 06:15:59 AM

Koshish Hui Hazaar Ki Seerat Bigaad Dein
Teri Shabeeh Aur Nikhartee Chalee Gayee......



Waaaaaaahhhh...
Kya Khooob Sher Hai.....
Meri Taraf Se Aapko Bahot Mubarakbaad...


Always Yours...
__Alam


Bahut  shukrguzar  hoon  Alam  Qazi  saheb  ki  aap  ne  waqt  
diya  aur  hausla  afza  kalmaat  se  nawaza . Hasan
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«Reply #21 on: December 12, 2012, 01:54:30 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 11, 2012, 06:02:30 AM

Tere   bina    bhi   garche   guzarti   chalee   gayee  ,
Yuun   bikhri    Zinagi  ki   bikharti  chalee   gayee


Kaisa   tilism   thha   tere    Naqsh - o - nigar   ka  ,
Tasweer   seedhi   dil   meiN   utarti  chalee   gayee


Hum nay  to  sirf   pyaar  se  pheri  thheeN   UngliyaaN , 
Zulf - e - Siyaah   khood   hi   sanwarti  chalee  gayee


Us ke   baghair   jaise    khalaaoN    meiN   ho   Wujood ,
Jis par  qadam  tikay   thhe  woh  dharti  chalee   gayee


Mazloom    har     sawaal    pe    khamosh    hee    raha  ,
Tasweer - e - Dard   khood   hi   ubharti   chalee   gayee


Koshish    hui    hazaar    ki   Seerat    bigaad     deiN  ,
Teri    Shabeeh     aur     nikharti     chalee     gayee


Tanqeed   ka   nishaana   baneeN    ghazleiN    is   qadar  ,
Khood   Shaairy  ' Hasan '  ki   sudharti   chalee   gayee

Hasan sb bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne. Wah wah... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: December 12, 2012, 04:20:18 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 11, 2012, 06:30:20 AM
Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! bhaut khoob hasan sir ek rau meri taraf se
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 Thankyou !  Thankyou !
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«Reply #23 on: December 12, 2012, 08:45:16 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 11, 2012, 06:44:31 AM
marhabaa marhabaa  hazaaron sall jio bhaaijaan god bless you
Bahut  bahut  shukriya , saini  bhai . Khush rahye , sehatyaab rahye.
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«Reply #24 on: December 12, 2012, 01:03:19 PM »
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BAHUT  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA , MUKESH  JI .
KHUDA   KARE  AAP  KHAIRYAT  SE HON.
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Jawaab naheeN.
bahut bahut umda ghazal Sir
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Dil DAAD qubool farmaayeN
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«Reply #25 on: December 12, 2012, 02:52:06 PM »
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AARISH , AAP KO  HAMESHA  KI  TARAH , DHERON  DUAAEIN.
Quote from: Aarish on December 11, 2012, 06:49:58 AM
wah kya baat hai sir behad umda ghazal kahi hai sir, ek Dard E nihaN ek khalish , kya kuch nahi hai Is ghazal meN , karoroN daaaad qubool kijiye...
 
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«Reply #26 on: December 12, 2012, 04:56:36 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on December 11, 2012, 07:08:18 AM
hasan sahab bahut behtareen, bas maza aa gaya padh ke, bahut ki kosisheN maine, khusboo ko mutthi me thaamne ki, par khusboo hai ki hawaaon me bikharti chali gayi... umda kalaam tha sahab, dili daad qubool farmaayeN, aur yuNhi bazm ko aur roshan karte raheN...
TAISH  SAHEB , ZARRA  NAWAZI KE  LIYE  BAHUT MASHKOOR  HOON . KHUSH RAHYE.
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«Reply #27 on: December 12, 2012, 05:00:51 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 11, 2012, 06:02:30 AM

Tere   bina    bhi   garche   guzarti   chalee   gayee  ,
Yuun   bikhri    Zinagi  ki   bikharti  chalee   gayee


Kaisa   tilism   thha   tere    Naqsh - o - nigar   ka  ,
Tasweer   seedhi   dil   meiN   utarti  chalee   gayee


Hum nay  to  sirf   pyaar  se  pheri  thheeN   UngliyaaN , 
Zulf - e - Siyaah   khood   hi   sanwarti  chalee  gayee


Us ke   baghair   jaise    khalaaoN    meiN   ho   Wujood ,
Jis par  qadam  tikay   thhe  woh  dharti  chalee   gayee


Mazloom    har     sawaal    pe    khamosh    hee    raha  ,
Tasweer - e - Dard   khood   hi   ubharti   chalee   gayee


Koshish    hui    hazaar    ki   Seerat    bigaad     deiN  ,
Teri    Shabeeh     aur     nikharti     chalee     gayee


Tanqeed   ka   nishaana   baneeN    ghazleiN    is   qadar  ,
Khood   Shaairy  ' Hasan '  ki   sudharti   chalee   gayee


gr88888888888888888,sir what a ghazal
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«Reply #28 on: December 13, 2012, 01:43:22 AM »
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Quote from: Ritesh Modi on December 11, 2012, 07:12:38 AM
KYA BAAT KYA BAAT, BEHTAREEN...VERY NICE...
RITESH  JI , HAUSLA  AFZAI  KE  LIYE  SHUKRIYA ,  AUR  DUAAEIN.
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«Reply #29 on: December 13, 2012, 03:49:54 AM »
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Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hassan Sahab Mubarak Ho
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