zakhm the mere chahre par

by zidd on December 17, 2010, 02:15:28 PM
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patthar  khaaye aur kisine zakhm the mere chere par
anjaane me maara patthar humne apne aaiine par

ke laakh bachaane ki koshish ki phir bhi na bach paaye hum
meri hi tasveer dikhaaii deti thi har tukDe par

ye to apna hi tha kalejaa aur kisika kya hota
thokar khaake haste rahe aur dhokha khaaya dhoke par

pahra bhi tha khamoshi ka ik honto par tufaan bhi the
kya mere jeene ki gawaahi saanso ne di marne par ?

khamoshi ka meri kabhi zidd raaz na pooocha zaalim ne
jisko hardum naaz hua karta tha apna kahne par
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«Reply #1 on: December 17, 2010, 02:44:29 PM »
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aaja ke ab marham laga du chehre par
        tukde dil ke shishe bikhre
unko saza lun palkon par
   -------- aapki kavita achhi hai saheb-----
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2010, 02:45:08 PM »
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aaja ke ab marham laga du chehre par
        tukde dil ke shishe bikhre
unko saza lun palkon par
   -------- aapki kavita achhi hai saheb-----
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2010, 02:47:43 PM »
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zidd ji aaj kya baat he is forum epr ek se badkar ek peshkah ho rahi he maja aa gaya pahle brknluv ji ki shayri ne rulaya ab us per apki ye dil ko cheer dene wali shayri kya kahna ....bht bht khub...ultimate superb....nirala ji bht kam shabdo me bht kuch kah gaye aap superb lines

thts for ur post
Uska Meri Zindagi Me Ana Bhi Kya Khub Tha
Zindagi Me Aa Zindagi Ban Jana Bhi Kya Khub Tha

Har Pal Gujra Uske Makhmali Anchal Ke Saye Me
apne Hatho Se Uske Gesuuoo Ko Hatana Bhi Kya Khub Tha

Meri Khushkismati Ka Sabot Aur Kya Hoga Yaroo
Katil Nikla Wo Hi Jo Mera Humdum Mera Mahbub Tha
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2010, 03:19:37 PM »
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apna humdum jo katil ho ' nirala'
        qatl hone me fir qalt hone sa dard kahan hota.
reshmi zulfon ke saaye me jo sula de maut ki neend
         aisa humdard aisa humdum sbke naseeb nhi hota
  ----matrix u r superb-----
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2010, 04:01:44 PM »
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JanaaB Zidd Sahab Aadaab!

Bade dino bad yahaaN aur aapki tazaaH peshkash dekh khushi mehsus huyi.... Usual Smile

Behad khoob kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne
Aise hi khoob kalaaMo ke sath bazm meiN aate rahiye..

Khush O aabad rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile
         



Quote from: zidd on December 17, 2010, 02:15:28 PM
patthar  khaaye aur kisine zakhm the mere chere par
anjaane me maara patthar humne apne aaiine par

         


ke laakh bachaane ki koshish ki phir bhi na bach paaye hum
meri hi tasveer dikhaaii deti thi har tukDe par

ye to apna hi tha kalejaa aur kisika kya hota
thokar khaake haste rahe aur dhokha khaaya dhoke par

pahra bhi tha khamoshi ka ik honto par tufaan bhi the
kya mere jeene ki gawaahi saanso ne di marne par ?

khamoshi ka meri kabhi zidd raaz na pooocha zaalim ne
jisko hardum naaz hua karta tha apna kahne par
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2010, 06:08:20 PM »
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Quote from: zidd on December 17, 2010, 02:15:28 PM
patthar  khaaye aur kisine zakhm the mere chere par
anjaane me maara patthar humne apne aaiine par

ke laakh bachaane ki koshish ki phir bhi na bach paaye hum
meri hi tasveer dikhaaii deti thi har tukDe par

ye to apna hi tha kalejaa aur kisika kya hota
thokar khaake haste rahe aur dhokha khaaya dhoke par

pahra bhi tha khamoshi ka ik honto par tufaan bhi the
kya mere jeene ki gawaahi saanso ne di marne par ?

khamoshi ka meri kabhi zidd raaz na pooocha zaalim ne
jisko hardum naaz hua karta tha apna kahne par
Achchhi peshkash hai aap ki
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yasmeen khan
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«Reply #7 on: December 18, 2010, 07:23:39 AM »
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supurb ziddji keep writting
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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2010, 12:37:09 PM »
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Quote from: zidd on December 17, 2010, 02:15:28 PM
patthar  khaaye aur kisine zakhm the mere chere par
anjaane me maara patthar humne apne aaiine par

ke laakh bachaane ki koshish ki phir bhi na bach paaye hum
meri hi tasveer dikhaaii deti thi har tukDe par

ye to apna hi tha kalejaa aur kisika kya hota
thokar khaake haste rahe aur dhokha khaaya dhoke par

pahra bhi tha khamoshi ka ik honto par tufaan bhi the
kya mere jeene ki gawaahi saanso ne di marne par ?

khamoshi ka meri kabhi zidd raaz na pooocha zaalim ne
jisko hardum naaz hua karta tha apna kahne par

Bahut hi zabardast peshkash rahi aapki ..... Zidd Sahab !

Sabhi ashaar ek se baDkar ek kahe jayenge .... !

bahut khulkar aur nikhar kar aai bayaani aur adaayegi ... ! har sher me ek josh nazar aataa hai .... apni baat kehne ka ... !

SuperB Creation ..... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul kijiye ...  Clapping Smiley  Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

aise hi zordaar peshkash ke saath aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #9 on: December 21, 2010, 03:00:43 AM »
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ye to apna hi tha kalejaa aur kisika kya hota
thokar khaake haste rahe aur dhokha khaaya dhoke par

pahra bhi tha khamoshi ka ik honto par tufaan bhi the
kya mere jeene ki gawaahi saanso ne di marne par ?

Ji ... Bhaut BaDhiyaa ..... dil se daad ..... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2010, 08:00:50 PM »
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bahut khuub....
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2011, 05:53:13 AM »
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Quote from: zidd on December 17, 2010, 02:15:28 PM
patthar  khaaye aur kisine zakhm the mere chere par
anjaane me maara patthar humne apne aaiine par

ke laakh bachaane ki koshish ki phir bhi na bach paaye hum
meri hi tasveer dikhaaii deti thi har tukDe par

ye to apna hi tha kalejaa aur kisika kya hota
thokar khaake haste rahe aur dhokha khaaya dhoke par

pahra bhi tha khamoshi ka ik honto par tufaan bhi the
kya mere jeene ki gawaahi saanso ne di marne par ?

khamoshi ka meri kabhi zidd raaz na pooocha zaalim ne
jisko hardum naaz hua karta tha apna kahne par

bhaut khub zidd sahab
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2011, 07:08:21 AM »
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zidd ji Aadab! Bahut dinon baad aik mashoorkun kaawish ko paRhne ka mauqa dastiyaab hua. Is kaameyaab kaawish k liye hazaroN daad qubul kijiye.

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Quote from: zidd on December 17, 2010, 02:15:28 PM
patthar  khaaye aur kisine zakhm the mere chere par
anjaane me maara patthar humne apne aaiine par

ke laakh bachaane ki koshish ki phir bhi na bach paaye hum
meri hi tasveer dikhaaii deti thi har tukDe par

ye to apna hi tha kalejaa aur kisika kya hota
thokar khaake haste rahe aur dhokha khaaya dhoke par

pahra bhi tha khamoshi ka ik honto par tufaan bhi the
kya mere jeene ki gawaahi saanso ne di marne par ?

khamoshi ka meri kabhi zidd raaz na pooocha zaalim ne
jisko hardum naaz hua karta tha apna kahne par
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Quote from: zidd on December 17, 2010, 02:15:28 PM
patthar  khaaye aur kisine zakhm the mere chere par
anjaane me maara patthar humne apne aaiine par

ke laakh bachaane ki koshish ki phir bhi na bach paaye hum
meri hi tasveer dikhaaii deti thi har tukDe par

ye to apna hi tha kalejaa aur kisika kya hota
thokar khaake haste rahe aur dhokha khaaya dhoke par

pahra bhi tha khamoshi ka ik honto par tufaan bhi the
kya mere jeene ki gawaahi saanso ne di marne par ?

khamoshi ka meri kabhi zidd raaz na pooocha zaalim ne
jisko hardum naaz hua karta tha apna kahne par

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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