Zamee'n se aasmaa'n hona

by AnjAAn!!! on December 28, 2012, 03:44:17 PM
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Zamee'n se aasmaa'n hona
Hunar mere, jawaa'n hona

Andhero'n se guzar kar tum
Ujaalo'n me'n rawaa'n hona

Mere dil ki tamanna hai
Ghazal ka jism-o-jaa'n hona

Kabhi tanhaa, kabhi saathi
Kabhi khud kaarwaa'n hona

Koi mashroof kitnaa ho
Sabhi ko hai dhuaa'n hona

Agar uski razaamandi
Hai dekho fir kahaa'n hona
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2012, 05:29:18 PM »
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bahut hi accha likha hai aapne....bahut khoob anjaan ji...bahut gehri baaton ko kha hai aapne....bahut umda  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2012, 05:38:37 PM »
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Mere dil ki tamanna hai
Ghazal ka jism-o-jaa'n hona

Kabhi tanhaa, kabhi saathi
Kabhi khud kaarwaa'n hona

Koi mashroof kitnaa ho
Sabhi ko hai dhuaa'n hona... is sher pe khaas daad aur mubaarakbaad

Agar uski razaamandi
Hai dekho fir kahaa'n hona

ye ashaar to behad khoob rahe.. Applause Applause Applause

bahut hi umda darje ki ghazal.

Pahle to aapka swaagat hai is bazm meN
bahut hi umda ghazal..vo bhi choti bahr meN
sach me dil khush ho gaya..
likhte rahiye Anjaan jee

aapki khidmat me ek sher arz karta huN..

bhulaauN ab bhala kaise
naheeN uska yahaaN hona
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2012, 06:00:47 PM »
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Mere dil ki tamanna hai
Ghazal ka jism-o-jaa'n hona

Kabhi tanhaa, kabhi saathi
Kabhi khud kaarwaa'n hona

Koi mashroof kitnaa ho
Sabhi ko hai dhuaa'n hona

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause awesome
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2012, 07:26:41 PM »
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Anjaan Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab Yo ki Bazm meiN aapka swagat hai... Badi hi umdaa kalaam ke saath
aapne bazm meiN aaghaaz kiya hai... is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN
daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe janab... kafi achchi aur rawaaN kalaam kahi hai
aapne... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile/color]



Quote from: AnjAAn!!! on December 28, 2012, 03:44:17 PM
Zamee'n se aasmaa'n hona
Hunar mere, jawaa'n hona

Behad khoob matla kaha hai janab.. Chhoti bher meiN badi baat
kah gaye bahut khoob...


Andhero'n se guzar kar tum
Ujaalo'n me'n rawaa'n hona

bahut khoob janab.. par aNdheroN par zarra gaur kar lijiye.. wazn meiN
nahi samaata hai..


Mere dil ki tamanna hai
Ghazal ka jism-o-jaa'n hona

behad umda sher kaha hai daad...


Kabhi tanhaa, kabhi saathi
Kabhi khud kaarwaa'n hona

Bahut khoob janab...


Koi mashroof kitnaa ho
Sabhi ko hai dhuaa'n hona

waaH waaH kia kahne behad umdaa .. behad achcha sher kaha hai
daad... haaN "koyiN" yaa koii aise adaa hoNga... Usual Smile


Agar uski razaamandi
Hai dekho fir kahaa'n hona

Sher khoob kaha hai daad.. par sani bher se kharij hai janab ..
zarra gaur kar leN... Usual Smile



Aapki kalaam khoob rahi aik baar phir se daad hazir hai...
haaN waise toH hume bher ka ilm nahi aur nahi hum bher par dhyaan dete
haiN.. par aap jahaaN se aaye haiN wahaaN se hi humne sikha hai isliye
aapke kalaam ki islaaH ki .. ummid hai aapko bura nahi lageNga...


Aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2012, 01:41:32 AM »
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waah waah waah dheron daad aur ek rau qubool keejiye
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2012, 04:28:25 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2012, 08:27:48 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on December 28, 2012, 05:29:18 PM
bahut hi accha likha hai aapne....bahut khoob anjaan ji...bahut gehri baaton ko kha hai aapne....bahut umda  Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Nikhaar ji,

Aapko meri ye adnaa koshish pasand aayi yahi mere liye bahut badi baat hai. Aage bhi koshish yahi rahegi ke aapko pasand aa sake.
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2012, 08:37:20 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 28, 2012, 05:38:37 PM
Mere dil ki tamanna hai
Ghazal ka jism-o-jaa'n hona

Kabhi tanhaa, kabhi saathi
Kabhi khud kaarwaa'n hona

Koi mashroof kitnaa ho
Sabhi ko hai dhuaa'n hona... is sher pe khaas daad aur mubaarakbaad

Agar uski razaamandi
Hai dekho fir kahaa'n hona

ye ashaar to behad khoob rahe.. Applause Applause Applause

bahut hi umda darje ki ghazal.

Pahle to aapka swaagat hai is bazm meN
bahut hi umda ghazal..vo bhi choti bahr meN
sach me dil khush ho gaya..
likhte rahiye Anjaan jee

aapki khidmat me ek sher arz karta huN..

bhulaauN ab bhala kaise
naheeN uska yahaaN hona

Shukriya sahab, Chhotii si koshish hai. Aapko pasand aayi, tah-e-dil se mashkoor hu'n aapka.

Aur raha aapka she'r...

bhulaauN ab bhala kaise
naheeN uska yahaaN hona

Aapke is khyaal ne behad khushi di hai dil ko. Bahut bahut shukriya is sher ke liye.
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«Reply #9 on: December 29, 2012, 08:50:11 AM »
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Quote from: @Heer@ on December 28, 2012, 06:00:47 PM
Mere dil ki tamanna hai
Ghazal ka jism-o-jaa'n hona

Kabhi tanhaa, kabhi saathi
Kabhi khud kaarwaa'n hona

Koi mashroof kitnaa ho
Sabhi ko hai dhuaa'n hona

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause awesome

Dhanyawaad Heer ji.
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«Reply #10 on: December 29, 2012, 09:00:30 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 28, 2012, 07:26:41 PM
Anjaan Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab Yo ki Bazm meiN aapka swagat hai... Badi hi umdaa kalaam ke saath
aapne bazm meiN aaghaaz kiya hai... is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN
daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe janab... kafi achchi aur rawaaN kalaam kahi hai
aapne... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile/color]



Aapki kalaam khoob rahi aik baar phir se daad hazir hai...
haaN waise toH hume bher ka ilm nahi aur nahi hum bher par dhyaan dete
haiN.. par aap jahaaN se aaye haiN wahaaN se hi humne sikha hai isliye
aapke kalaam ki islaaH ki .. ummid hai aapko bura nahi lageNga...


Aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile



Bhai Parwaaz sahab. Sabse pehle to aapka behad shukrguzaar hu'n jo aapne mujhe itni izzat bakhshi aur mere kalaam par is hadd tak ghaur kiya. Mujhe Yo par kaam karne me'n behad dikkat pesh aa rahi hai.

Short me'n kehta hu'n isiliye. Bhai yoo'n to kalaam koi khaas nahi'n. Lekin aapko jahaa'n jahaa'n bhi khaamiyaa'n nazar aayi'n wo meri nazdeek sab sahi hai'n.

Andhero'n ke ist'amaal me'n bhi koi pareshaani nahi'n dikhi. Aur aapka koi wala jo sawaal hai wo mujh par khula hi nahi'n.

Ek baar fir se bazm me'n tashreef laane ke liye shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: December 29, 2012, 09:02:31 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 29, 2012, 01:41:32 AM
waah waah waah dheron daad aur ek rau qubool keejiye

Shukriya S.K. Saini ji. Tashreef laate rahiye. Aur ye rau kya hai?
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 29, 2012, 04:28:25 AM
wah wah

Shukriya sahab. Izzat afzaaii ke liye mashkoor hu'n.
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sabse pehle to aapka khairmaqdam hai yoindia par, aur rahi baat aapki ghazal ki to kehna chahunga anjaan jee. behad umda ghazal hai aur sabse khoobsurat baat ye hai ki behr me Likhi gayee hai . behr me likha kalaam padhkar dilkhush ho jata hai.sabhi ashaar lajwab rahe. khas taur se ye


Mere dil ki tamanna hai,

Ghazal ka jism-o-jaa'n hona,

Wah wah wah wah .

DherrooN daad aur ek rau qubool kareN. aur likhte rahiye...

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«Reply #14 on: December 29, 2012, 10:02:53 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Anjaan ji...!!!
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