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Tujhe mehfil me sab dekheN zara achcha nahiN lagta,
Tera tark-e-haya ka faisla achcha nahiN lagta,



Huwey baizaar jo humne kiya izhaar ulfat kaa,
zara si baat pe yuN ruthna achcha nahiN lagta,



Badi hi berukhi se yuN sar-e-mehfil pukaraa hai,
HumeN lehja tera ye ba khuda achcha nahiN lagta,



Teri aankhoN se peene ki padi aadat mujhe jab se,
Tabhi se bas mujhe ye maikada achcha nahiN lagta,



Zamane bhar ko aadat ho gayee hai bewafai ki,
Kisi ko bhi yahaN dars-e-wafa achcha nahiN lagta,



Bana jab az sare nau bijliyaN usne gira daaliN,
Falak ko bhi mera ye ghoNsla achcha nahiN lagta,



Mile sohbat se jinki jhoot, makkari, hasad, dhoka,
Mujhe wo dosti ka silsila achcha nahin lagta,



Muqabil aandhiyoN ke jab kiya roshan bujha dalaa,
HawaooN ko mera jalta diya achcha nahiN lagta,



Chalo "Aarish" mita daleN sabhi ye dooriyaN dil ki,
DiloN ke beech ka ye faasla achcha nahiN lagta..




                   "Aarish"
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2013, 05:48:51 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on February 06, 2013, 05:44:45 AM
Tujhe mehfil me sab dekheN zara achcha nahiN lagta,


Tera tark-e-haya ka faisla achcha nahiN lagta,



Huwey baizaar jo humne kiya izhaar ulfat kaa,


zara si baat pe yuN ruthna achcha nahiN lagta,



Badi hi berukhi se yuN sar-e-mehfil pukaraa hai,


HumeN lehja tera ye ba khuda achcha nahiN lagta,



Teri aankhoN se peene ki padi aadat mujhe jab se,


Tabhi se bas mujhe ye maikada achcha nahiN lagta,



Zamane bhar ko aadat ho gayee hai bewafai ki,


Kisi ko bhi yahaN dars-e-wafa achcha nahiN lagta,



Bana jab az sare nau bijliyaN usne gira daaliN,


Falak ko bhi mera ye ghoNsla achcha nahiN lagta,



Mile sohbat se jinki jhoot, makkari, hasad, dhoka,


Mujhe wo dosti ka silsila achcha nahin lagta,



Muqabil aandhiyoN ke jab kiya roshan bujha dalaa,


HawaooN ko mera jalta diya achcha nahiN lagta,



Chalo "Aarish" mita daleN sabhi ye dooriyaN dil ki,


Humare Beech me faasla achcha nahi lagta.




                   "Aarish"

RAU DUE HAI


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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2013, 05:52:12 AM »
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Aarish bhai jaan maafi chahunga net sahi work nahi krna warna is qalam ki tareef mein dil bht kuch kehna chahta haipar abhi to aapko sirf hamare salutr se kaam chalana padega ..... Kuch ashaar to bde hee umda gajab ke rahe kya kehne ...aap likhte bht kam h par jab qalm chalti hai aapki to bas sab par aapka jaadu chal jaata hai
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2013, 05:54:05 AM »
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just speechless jeete raho betaa
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2013, 06:27:50 AM »
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बहुत ही खूब , लाजवाब, ढ़ेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2013, 06:41:36 AM »
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waah waah waah
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2013, 06:50:07 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2013, 06:54:01 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on February 06, 2013, 05:44:45 AM
Tujhe mehfil me sab dekheN zara achcha nahiN lagta,


Tera tark-e-haya ka faisla achcha nahiN lagta,



Huwey baizaar jo humne kiya izhaar ulfat kaa,


zara si baat pe yuN ruthna achcha nahiN lagta,



Badi hi berukhi se yuN sar-e-mehfil pukaraa hai,


HumeN lehja tera ye ba khuda achcha nahiN lagta,



Teri aankhoN se peene ki padi aadat mujhe jab se,


Tabhi se bas mujhe ye maikada achcha nahiN lagta,



Zamane bhar ko aadat ho gayee hai bewafai ki,


Kisi ko bhi yahaN dars-e-wafa achcha nahiN lagta,



Bana jab az sare nau bijliyaN usne gira daaliN,


Falak ko bhi mera ye ghoNsla achcha nahiN lagta,



Mile sohbat se jinki jhoot, makkari, hasad, dhoka,


Mujhe wo dosti ka silsila achcha nahin lagta,



Muqabil aandhiyoN ke jab kiya roshan bujha dalaa,


HawaooN ko mera jalta diya achcha nahiN lagta,



Chalo "Aarish" mita daleN sabhi ye dooriyaN dil ki,


Humare Beech me faasla achcha nahi lagta.




                   "Aarish"


Bhaye waaaah .. Waaah...kya kahne ..

Bhaye ghonsle wala sher...
Kya kahne...

Kyaa kahne.. Haye ...kash maine likha hota
Ye
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2013, 06:58:01 AM »
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 just superb...andaaz bemisaal, ehsaas kamaal aur har ashaar laajawaab..waah waah.. Applause Applause Applause .....bahut bahut si daad-o-mubaarakbaad qubool kijiye Aarish sb!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2013, 08:20:16 AM »
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Aarish Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab, Bade dinoN baad kalaam kahi hai aapne aur behad khoob
kahi janab... behad khoobsurat aur gehre ahsaas O khayaaloN ko umdaa
lafzoN meiN piroyaa hai... Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe, Is khoobsurat kalaam par hazaaroN
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: February 06, 2013, 08:25:27 AM »
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bahut khooob bahut khooooooob Aarish ji..
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«Reply #11 on: February 06, 2013, 08:47:36 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on February 06, 2013, 05:44:45 AM
Tujhe mehfil me sab dekheN zara achcha nahiN lagta,
Tera tark-e-haya ka faisla achcha nahiN lagta,



Huwey baizaar jo humne kiya izhaar ulfat kaa,
zara si baat pe yuN ruthna achcha nahiN lagta,



Badi hi berukhi se yuN sar-e-mehfil pukaraa hai,
HumeN lehja tera ye ba khuda achcha nahiN lagta,



Teri aankhoN se peene ki padi aadat mujhe jab se,
Tabhi se bas mujhe ye maikada achcha nahiN lagta,



Zamane bhar ko aadat ho gayee hai bewafai ki,
Kisi ko bhi yahaN dars-e-wafa achcha nahiN lagta,



Bana jab az sare nau bijliyaN usne gira daaliN,
Falak ko bhi mera ye ghoNsla achcha nahiN lagta,



Mile sohbat se jinki jhoot, makkari, hasad, dhoka,
Mujhe wo dosti ka silsila achcha nahin lagta,



Muqabil aandhiyoN ke jab kiya roshan bujha dalaa,
HawaooN ko mera jalta diya achcha nahiN lagta,



Chalo "Aarish" mita daleN sabhi ye dooriyaN dil ki,
DiloN ke beech ka ye faasla achcha nahiN lagta..




                   "Aarish"

wah aarish bhai wah
bahut dino ke baad likha par..
ghazab..mast...behatreen..
meter me likhi is kalaam par bharpoor daad deta huN..
dil khush ho gaya..
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tumhara der se aana hame accha naheeN lagta
isliye jaldi jaldi likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #12 on: February 06, 2013, 09:05:24 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on February 06, 2013, 05:44:45 AM

Tujhe mehfil me sab dekheN zara achcha nahiN lagta,
Tera tark-e-haya ka faisla achcha nahiN lagta,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Huwey baizaar jo humne kiya izhaar ulfat kaa,
zara si baat pe yuN ruthna achcha nahiN lagta,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Badi hi berukhi se yuN sar-e-mehfil pukaraa hai,
HumeN lehja tera ye ba khuda achcha nahiN lagta,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Teri aankhoN se peene ki padi aadat mujhe jab se,
Tabhi se bas mujhe ye maikada achcha nahiN lagta,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Zamane bhar ko aadat ho gayee hai bewafai ki,
Kisi ko bhi yahaN dars-e-wafa achcha nahiN lagta,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bana jab az sare nau bijliyaN usne gira daaliN,
Falak ko bhi mera ye ghoNsla achcha nahiN lagta,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mile sohbat se jinki jhoot, makkari, hasad, dhoka,
Mujhe wo dosti ka silsila achcha nahin lagta,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Muqabil aandhiyoN ke jab kiya roshan bujha dalaa,
HawaooN ko mera jalta diya achcha nahiN lagta,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Chalo "Aarish" mita daleN sabhi ye dooriyaN dil ki,
DiloN ke beech ka ye faasla achcha nahiN lagta..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley






                   "Aarish"

waah waah zabardast ,lajawaab,nayaab...aarish sahab..shayd pehli  dafa padha hai aapka likha hua,...ek RAU to banta hai...
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«Reply #13 on: February 06, 2013, 09:19:20 AM »
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waah waah bohat pyaree ghazal ,...bohat c daad rau ke sath,...........
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«Reply #14 on: February 06, 2013, 09:25:39 AM »
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bohut khub aarish veru nice keep it up
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