ZARA SI DHOOP ............................... HASAN

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Zara  si   Dhoop   utar  aayi  jo  Sahan  mein  mere ,
Kisi  ka  saaya  ubhar  aaya  phir  Zahan  meiN  mere

Hata  jo   Chaand   se   saaya  to  ho   gaye  zaahir ,
Abhi  talak   yahi  Jazbaat   thhe  Gahan   mein  mere

Kare  haiN  Dost  bhi  abb  shikway  Talkh - go'ee  kay ,
Yeh  kis ne  ghol  diiN  kadwaahateiN  Dahan  mein  mere

Khayaal - e - Roz - e - Qayamat   kabhi  jub   aata  hai ,
Dahakne   lagti   hai   ek   aag  si  Badan  meiN  mere

Kabhie  Fida  thhe  woh  meree  har ek  adaa  pe  'Hasan' ,
Abb  aib  dikhne  lage   haiN  Rahan - Sahan  meiN  mere








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sahan = Court yard  ; talkh goee = kadvi zubaan  mein baat karna  ; Dahan = Munh
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2012, 08:01:25 AM »
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Ji Bhaut Sunder........... Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2012, 08:21:04 AM »
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Zara  si   Dhoop   utar  aayi  jo  Sahan  mein  mere ,
Kisi  ka  saaya  ubhar  aaya  phir  Zahan  meiN  mere
waah waah
Hata  jo   Chaand   se   saaya  to  ho   gaye  zaahir ,
Abhi  talak   yahi  Jazbaat   thhe  Gahan   mein  mere
bahoot khoob
Kare  haiN  Dost  bhi  abb  shikway  Talkh - go'ee  kay ,
Yeh  kis ne  ghol  diiN  kadwaahateiN  Dahan  mein  mere
ApplauseApplauseApplause
Khayaal - e - Roz - e - Qayamat   kabhi  jub   aata  hai ,
Dahakne   lagti   hai   ek   aag  si  Badan  meiN  mere
ApplauseApplause
Kabhie  Fida  thhe  woh  meree  har ek  adaa  pe  'Hasan' ,
Abb  aib  dikhne  lage   haiN  Rahan - Sahan  meiN  mere

Lajawab gazal h






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sahan = Court yard  ; talkh goee = kadvi zubaan  mein baat karna  ; Dahan = Munh
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2012, 08:35:11 AM »
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Zara  si   Dhoop   utar  aayi  jo  Sahan  mein  mere ,
Kisi  ka  saaya  ubhar  aaya  phir  Zahan  meiN  mere

Hata  jo   Chaand   se   saaya  to  ho   gaye  zaahir ,
Abhi  talak   yahi  Jazbaat   thhe  Gahan   mein  mere

Kare  haiN  Dost  bhi  abb  shikway  Talkh - go'ee  kay ,
Yeh  kis ne  ghol  diiN  kadwaahateiN  Dahan  mein  mere

Khayaal - e - Roz - e - Qayamat   kabhi  jub   aata  hai ,
Dahakne   lagti   hai   ek   aag  si  Badan  meiN  mere Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kabhie  Fida  thhe  woh  meree  har ek  adaa  pe  'Hasan' ,
Abb  aib  dikhne  lage   haiN  Rahan - Sahan  meiN  mere








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sahan = Court yard  ; talkh goee = kadvi zubaan  mein baat karna  ; Dahan = Munh

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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2012, 08:49:10 AM »
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"Zara see dhoop utar aayee jo sahan men mere" bhaai jaan is ghazal par dheron daad ek rau bhee qubool karen
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2012, 09:14:18 AM »
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Zara  si   Dhoop   utar  aayi  jo  Sahan  mein  mere ,
Kisi  ka  saaya  ubhar  aaya  phir  Zahan  meiN  mere

Hata  jo   Chaand   se   saaya  to  ho   gaye  zaahir ,
Abhi  talak   yahi  Jazbaat   thhe  Gahan   mein  mere

Kare  haiN  Dost  bhi  abb  shikway  Talkh - go'ee  kay ,
Yeh  kis ne  ghol  diiN  kadwaahateiN  Dahan  mein  mere

Khayaal - e - Roz - e - Qayamat   kabhi  jub   aata  hai ,
Dahakne   lagti   hai   ek   aag  si  Badan  meiN  mere

Kabhie  Fida  thhe  woh  meree  har ek  adaa  pe  'Hasan' ,
Abb  aib  dikhne  lage   haiN  Rahan - Sahan  meiN  mere








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sahan = Court yard  ; talkh goee = kadvi zubaan  mein baat karna  ; Dahan = Munh


Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Khooob Saheb!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2012, 09:43:19 AM »
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Sir ji bohat he shaan daar klam hai
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2012, 09:57:24 AM »
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waaaaaaaaah waaaaaahhh..hasanjii...kya khoob kaha...bahut sundar..ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2012, 10:40:38 AM »
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very good
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«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2012, 11:00:45 AM »
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bahut hi khoob kaha Hasan Ji, dheron daad
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«Reply #10 on: May 01, 2012, 12:33:53 PM »
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Hasan Saheb Mubarak ho. Kya khoobsurat kalam likha hai aapne. Maza aa gaya padh ke.
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«Reply #11 on: May 01, 2012, 12:47:17 PM »
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Aadaab Hasan Sir
Khoosurat asharon se labrej is ghajal par meri mubaarakbaad kubool kare..
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«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2012, 01:11:15 PM »
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Zara  si   Dhoop   utar  aayi  jo  Sahan  mein  mere ,
Kisi  ka  saaya  ubhar  aaya  phir  Zahan  meiN  mere

Hata  jo   Chaand   se   saaya  to  ho   gaye  zaahir ,
Abhi  talak   yahi  Jazbaat   thhe  Gahan   mein  mere

Kare  haiN  Dost  bhi  abb  shikway  Talkh - go'ee  kay ,
Yeh  kis ne  ghol  diiN  kadwaahateiN  Dahan  mein  mere

Khayaal - e - Roz - e - Qayamat   kabhi  jub   aata  hai ,
Dahakne   lagti   hai   ek   aag  si  Badan  meiN  mere

Kabhie  Fida  thhe  woh  meree  har ek  adaa  pe  'Hasan' ,
Abb  aib  dikhne  lage   haiN  Rahan - Sahan  meiN  mere








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sahan = Court yard  ; talkh goee = kadvi zubaan  mein baat karna  ; Dahan = Munh

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«Reply #13 on: May 01, 2012, 04:06:28 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Hasan ji....!!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 01, 2012, 04:41:51 PM »
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Siddqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah janab waah kia kahne waah behad khoobsurat gazal kahi hai janab... Usual Smile
Kia kahne jee waah aik aik ashaar behad umda hai...
Bahut khoob janab...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhte rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad o aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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