Zaraa paas aankhoun key aa jaaiye!

by abdbundeli on June 28, 2008, 10:36:10 AM
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 Mukhatib hoon mein: gour farmaaiye!
 Zaraa, paas aankhoun key, aa jaaiye!!

 Tumhain deykh, mousam ko kyaa ho gayaa?
 Qasam hai, zaraa deykhtey jaaiye!

 Naheen qufra, bey shak ibaadat hai ishq:
 Yaqeen keejiye, yuun na ghabraaiye!

 In aankhoun ko mouzoon hai jalwah-e-yaar:
 Taras khaaiye; roo-b-roo aaiye!

 Ishaaraa samajhiye, jhijhakiye naheen;
 Munaasib hai, tashreef ley aaiye!

 Takalluf mein, mat zulm yoon keejiye!
 Haqeeqat hai kyaa? Kuchh to batlaaiye!!

 Na ruknaa hi, kahtey hain, hai zindagee;
 To rukiye naheen, bas chaley aaiye!

 Uthaayaa hai pardah: raham keejiye;
 Na chhupiye udhar, kuchh idhar aaiye!

 Huye roo-b-roo: dard kam ho gayaa!
 Zaraa deir ko hi thahar jaaiye!!

 Lamhey bhar nigaahoun mein rah dekhiye:
 Lagegaa, ki, nagmey naye gaaiye!

 Nayaa kyaa? 'Abd' bhi guzar jaayegaa!
 Muqaddar hai: qaatil na kahlaaiye!!
  
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                    - abd bundeli

 
 
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2008, 10:54:45 AM »
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Waah... Bahut khoob.. Applause

Abd ji,

Nagma ho koi, ya phir koi gazal ho,
Haathon tumhaare wo mukammal ho..
Zara kalam apni usko chhuua jaaiye,
Apni Jaadugari us par bikhra jaaiye...

Tumhe dekhkar hi toh sajti hai mehfil,
Nagme phir hazaaron rachti hai mehfil..
Khawaabon sa safar humein karaaiye,
Aap bus yun hi gazalein likhte jaaiye...  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2008, 03:10:14 PM »
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Mahiya ji,
 Tareef key liye to shukriya hai, Mahiya!
 Mujh mein hai agar kuchh bhi? to, US ney hi hai diya:
 Jis ney hazaar khaar mein paida kiye gulaab;
 Johree banaaye jis ney, magar kuchh naheen liya!!
                             - abd bundeli
 

 
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2008, 03:20:06 PM »
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Waah..bohot khoob Abd Ji.....and Mahiya Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: June 29, 2008, 11:01:26 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 28, 2008, 03:10:14 PM
Mahiya ji,
 Tareef key liye to shukriya hai, Mahiya!
 Mujh mein hai agar kuchh? to, US ney hi hai diya:
 Jis ney hazaar khaar mein paida kiye gulaab;
 Johree banaaye jis ney, magar kuchh naheen liya!!
                             - abd bundeli
 

 

Bahut sahi kaha Abd ji.. Usual Smile


"Mera toh 'Ek Wohi' sab hai..
Koi kehta hai Maseeha hai,
Koi kehta hai khuda usko,
Koi kehta hai Bhagwaan hai,
Koi kehta hai woh Rab hai.. "
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2008, 05:11:32 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Prakash jee.. Good reply Mahiya!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2008, 12:06:45 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on June 29, 2008, 11:01:26 AM
Bahut sahi kaha Abd ji.. Usual Smile

"Mera toh 'Ek Wohi' sab hai..
Koi kehta hai Maseeha hai,
Koi kehta hai khuda usko,
Koi kehta hai Bhagwaan hai,
Koi kehta hai woh Rab hai.. "

Bahut khoob aur sahi likha hai aapne Mahiya jee
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«Reply #7 on: July 01, 2008, 12:10:39 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 28, 2008, 03:10:14 PM
Mahiya ji,
 Tareef key liye to shukriya hai, Mahiya!
 Mujh mein hai agar kuchh bhi? to, US ney hi hai diya:
 Jis ney hazaar khaar mein paida kiye gulaab;
 Johree banaaye jis ney, magar kuchh naheen liya!!
                             - abd bundeli


ABD jee bahut accha likha hai aapne. Aap ka likha sab preserve karne jaisa hai.
Good work jee  Applause

"MERA TAREEQ AMEERI NAHI FAQEERI HAI......
KHUDI NA BAICH, GHAREEBI MEIN NAAM PAIDA KAR"

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«Reply #8 on: July 01, 2008, 03:45:46 AM »
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Sonia01 ji,

 Jo ammeeree hai faqeeree mein, kyaa kahain us ko?
 Jo mazah Qais ki deewaangee mein hai: woh kahaan?
 Jo mazah dharhkan-e-dil, dil sey sunkey miltaa hai;
 Woh to kuchh aur hi hai, taaz-o-zar gouhar mein kahaan?

         Shukriyaa, aapney kahaa hai jo, sahee hai; par,
         Aaj key aadmee ko, zar key binaa thour kahaan?

                                    -abd bundeli   
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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2009, 09:53:53 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 28, 2008, 03:20:06 PM
Waah..bohot khoob Abad Ji.....and Mahiya Usual Smile
Thanks Celmira!
          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: July 31, 2009, 09:56:27 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on June 30, 2008, 05:11:32 PM
wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Prakash jee.. Good reply Mahiya!!
Thanks a lot Pooja ji!
       - abd bundeli
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