zaraa socho...(K_A):Ghazals

khamosh_aawaaz

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   jahaan mein roshan hain afsaane aaj bhi,
   mit gayi haqeeqat hain fasaane aaj bhi,

   lekar kyaa jaao ge tum hai maaloom sabko,
   lut gayaa aashiyaana hain maikhaane aaj bhi,

   chale the jis raah manzil-e- maqsood tak,
   kaamyabhi ke wo raaste hain anjaane aaj bhi,

   karo tanqeed kitna aashiqi ka sar-e-mehfil,
      maujood hamaare beech hain deewane aaj bhi,

   mushkil nahin chalna seraatal mustaqeem par khamosh....!
   jahaan mein 'sufion' ke hain kaarnaame aaj bhi...!!


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Re: zaraa socho...(K_A)

«Reply #1 on: July 14, 2010, 12:53:32 PM »

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne K_A ji...!!!


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Re: zaraa socho...(K_A)

«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2010, 05:07:58 PM »

bahoot umda bahot khoob janab ..maqta to kya kahaen janab,wah wah. bahoot khoob kaha hai aap ne ,daad hazir hai janab ..


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Re: zaraa socho...(K_A)

«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2010, 06:04:33 PM »

Khamosh ji adaab. Be-shak ye apki ek achi taqhleeq hai khamosh ji lekin ise ghazal nahi kaha ja sakta. Apse mo'dbaana arz hai ke ghazal section me sirf ghazal hi post kiya karen. Ghazal ke kuch rules hote hai aur unko amal me laana zaroory hota hai. Umeed hai meri bat ka aap bura nahi manenge aur samajhney ki koshish karenge. Shukriya.


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Re: zaraa socho...(K_A)

«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2010, 06:59:04 PM »

Quote from: .adeeb on July 14, 2010, 06:04:33 PM

THANX ADEEB SB ...KINDLY GUIDE ME ABOUT GHAZAL....THEN I WILL TRY MY BEST TO FOLLOW YOUR KIND INSTRUCTION.


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Re: zaraa socho...(K_A)

«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2010, 10:46:30 PM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 14, 2010, 12:36:08 PM

hain roshan jahaan mein afsaane aaj bhi,
mit gayi haqeeqat hain fasaane aaj bhi,

lekar kyaa jaao ge tum hai maaloom sabko,
lut gayaa aashiyaana hain maikhaane aaj bhi,

chale the jis raah manzil-e- maqsood tak,
kaamyabhi ke wo raaste hain anjaane aaj bhi,

karo tanqeed kitna'ishq-o-mohabbat'ka sar-e-mehfil,
hammare beech maujood hain deewane aaj bhi,

seraatal mustaqeem par chalna mushkil nahin khamosh....!
jahaan mein 'sufion' ke hain kaarnaame aaj bhi...!!

Bahut Umdaa Khayal ......bahut khoob !


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Re: zaraa socho...(K_A)

«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2010, 04:58:08 AM »

Bahut achha likha hai K_A ji. Applause


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Re: zaraa socho...(K_A)

«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2010, 05:23:16 AM »

bahut hi umda hain aapki peshkash Applause

aap ke khayalon se kuch pesh kar raha hnu pasand aaye to jawab dijiyega

ho roshan jahan me afsaane to kya
mite hakikat bane fasaane to kya
tu bana raah nai apne liye e-Rahi
mita aashiyana bana maykhane to kya

chale jis raah me manjil nahi mili
kamiyabi ke ho rasty anjany to kya

bhale badnaam ho mohhabbat sare bazar nilam ho
ham bhi bnae kisi ke diwane to kya

ek din aayega aaisa jahan hoga naya roshan
us din ham na bhi rehe jahan me to kya

kabhi to hogi nayi subah dhalegi ye raat bhi
aankh hamari hi band rahgai to kya

jindagi sirf pana hi nahi sikhati hai manjil
kahin dar se ye "Rahi" bhai bhatak gaya hai to kya