ZEB - TAN KAR KE PEET - WASAN HUM NIKLE .................. HASAN

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Barg - e - Gul  ban ke  , na to  ban ke  Suman   hum  nikle
Teri  nazro.n  mei.n  faqat  Khaar - e - Chaman  hum  nikle

Jab  bhi  Khatra   hua  Laahaq  teri  Seemaao.n  ko
Baandh  kar  sar  pe  Kafan  ,  mere  Watan  hum  nikle

Roshni  de  na  sake   ,   chheene   Ghareebo.n   ke  Diye
Ban'na  thha  Najm - e - Watan  ,  Nang - e - watan hum  nikle

Bastiyaa.n  chhaan  lee.n  ,  Insaan  na  paaye  hum  nay
Le ke  Aasha  ki  Kiran  ,  Dasht - o - Daman   hum  nikle

Guzre  Kooche  se   tere  ,  Aaj  jo  anjaane  mei.n
Lay ke  tan - man   mei.n   Agan  ,  Shola - Badan  hum  nikle

Har  Qadam  Raah - e - Sukhan  par  mile  'Ustaad'   hamei.n
Unn  se   kuchh   seekhne   Aadaab - e - Sukhan  hum   nikle

Thha  Zamaane  se  chhupana   hamei.n   Chehra   apna
Zeb - tan   kar  ke   'Hasan'  ,  Peet - Wasan   hum   nikle

- HASAN SHAMSI -

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Is ghazal mein Hindi aur Urdu ke kuch khubsurat alfaaz mix kar ke istemal karne ki koshish
ki gai hai . Kuchh Meanings diye jaa rahe hain :

Barg e gul = Phool ki patti ; Suman = phool ; khaar e chaman = baagh ka kaanta ;
Najm e watan = star of the nation ; Nang e watan = shame for the nation ;
dasht o daman = forsts and hills : Agan = Agni / fire ; Shola badan = fire bodied ;
Sukhan = Art / poetry ;Zeb tan = pahan kar / wearing ; peet wasan = yellow, saffron clothes
worn by saints
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2014, 04:00:07 PM »
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LAJAWAAB GHAZAL aaj ek RAU QUBOOL KEEJIYE
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2014, 04:26:13 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat Ghazal SIR...
Dheron daad qubool karein SIR..
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2014, 08:15:53 PM »
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Waaaah waaaaah bahut khoob Hasan Sahib....sixer...maza aa gaya
padhkar....Raqeeb

Har  Qadam  Raah - e - Sukhan  par  mile  'Ustaad'   hamei.n
Unn  se   kuchh   seekhne   Aadaab - e - Sukhan  hum   nikle

                                           ...... laajwaab
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2014, 08:44:58 PM »
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Barg - e - Gul  ban ke  , na to  ban ke  Suman   hum  nikle
Teri  nazro.n  mei.n  faqat  Khaar - e - Chaman  hum  nikle

Jab  bhi  Khatra   hua  Laahaq  teri  Seemaao.n  ko
Baandh  kar  sar  pe  Kafan  ,  mere  Watan  hum  nikle

Roshni  de  na  sake   ,   chheene   Ghareebo.n   ke  Diye
Ban'na  thha  Najm - e - Watan  ,  Nang - e - watan hum  nikle

Bastiyaa.n  chhaan  lee.n  ,  Insaan  na  paaye  hum  nay
Le ke  Aasha  ki  Kiran  ,  Dasht - o - Daman   hum  nikle

Guzre  Kooche  se   tere  ,  Aaj  jo  anjaane  mei.n
Lay ke  tan - man   mei.n   Agan  ,  Shola - Badan  hum  nikle

Har  Qadam  Raah - e - Sukhan  par  mile  'Ustaad'   hamei.n
Unn  se   kuchh   seekhne   Aadaab - e - Sukhan  hum   nikle

Thha  Zamaane  se  chhupana   hamei.n   Chehra   apna
Zeb - tan   kar  ke   'Hasan'  ,  Peet - Wasan   hum   nikle

- HASAN SHAMSI -

..........................
Is ghazal mein Hindi aur Urdu ke kuch khubsurat alfaaz mix kar ke istemal karne ki koshish
ki gai hai . Kuchh Meanings diye jaa rahe hain :

Barg e gul = Phool ki patti ; Suman = phool ; khaar e chaman = baagh ka kaanta ;
Najm e watan = star of the nation ; Nang e watan = shame for the nation ;
dasht o daman = forsts and hills : Agan = Agni / fire ; Shola badan = fire bodied ;
Sukhan = Art / poetry ;Zeb tan = pahan kar / wearing ; peet wasan = yellow, saffron clothes
worn by saints

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waaahhh!!! behad hi khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai Hasan sahab !!! Har ek sher qabil e daad !!!Hindi Urdu ke alfaaz ko mix karne se khoobsurti aur bhi nikhar gayi hai !!!! Dheron daad aur mubaarakbad is shaandaar qalaam par !!!
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 06, 2014, 04:00:07 PM
LAJAWAAB GHAZAL aaj ek RAU QUBOOL KEEJIYE
Shukria Saini saheb . Rau k liye double shukria.
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